Forever In Your Eyes | PG-13

[Patty]

Ok guys this story orlando is a little weird.I don't know why but I always twist my stories so the guy I like is "the bad guy." That's just how I am. Weird, yeah I am! lol!

Chapter 1

The sun glared in my eyes when I looked out into the salty sea. I saw Orlando and his blond girlfriend Kate, laughing, having fun, and enjoying theirselves. I just rolled my eyes and I just filled with jealousy. I couldn't stand them together. And I hated the fact that that he liked blondes,I have nothing againist blondes!because that means I wouldn't have a chance. "Who am I kidding." I thought to myself "I wouldn't have a chance anyways." "I'm gonna get something to eat." I mumbled to myself.
I was eating when I heard a couple walking in giggling. "Oh great, I try to get away from them and they come here." I thought to myself. They sat down and Orlando looked at me and I looked at him. I got up still looking at him and ran into a waiter. Everyone was looking at me by that time, because I knocked down everything he had in his hands. I was so embarressed but helped him pick up everything, after all I caused it. "I'm so sorry! I didn't.....mean...oh! I feel so bad, I'm sorry!" "Oh it's alright, I saw you starring at him though." And he looked at Orlando, then looked at me and smilied. I smiled back, "Yeah, pretty obviuos huh?"I said giving him a smile. "Well, he saw you knock everything over!" he said through laughing. "Yeah, well I got his attention didn't I?" "Well I have to get back to work. But my shift ends at 9:00, so I'll meet you at the dock?" I knew he sounded nervous when he asked that but I smiled. I looked over at Orlando and noticed he was still looking at me. I looked at him and he turned away. I turned back to the waiter and he turned to the people who were yelling at him. He turned back to me and I asked,"What's your name?" "Frankie." he told me. "Ok Frankie, I'll see you at 9:00." And I gave him a big smile. He smiled back, "Great!" I said bye turned around and I heard someone running behind me. Turning around to see who it was, I was surprised to see Orlando. "Hi." he said holding his hand out for me to shake it. "Hello." I said while shaking his hand. "I saw your accident over there," he said pointing. He looked at me and smiled. "Yeah, I know." I said kinda thingyy. I was still kinda mad, well jealous. "So," he said rocking back and forth."So," I said. Kate came over."Orlando, I paid the check, I'm ready to go." Then she turned and looked at me. "Hi, I'm Kate." "Hi, I'm Patty nice to meet you." Then she looked at Orlando grabbing his arm and they left.

[Rainbow]

haha, how embarassing. The poor waiter! i mean *cough* poor patty

"Who am I kidding." I thought to myself "I wouldn't have a chance anyways." "I'm gonna get something to eat." I mumbled to myself.
< - Ahh the wonders of the female psyce, when depressed, eat!

Can i offer one little piece of advice, its easier for us, amazingly lazy readers (i might just be speaking for myslef there ;D) to read if each time you have a different person speaking its on a new paragraph. Its probably just me but when ever i see to sets of speech marks after each other my brain has to do a double take.

But you should absolutely write how you feel most comfortable... and i look forward to the next instalment.

PS i bet she gets the guy in the end.

[Patty]

oh and I did put them in different paragraphs and it ended like that! lol! when i posted...but whatever! lol!

[Miss Knightley]

*grins* yep, if you can't have the guy, you can always have the food!

[Patty]

^ haha food's good....

[Reens]

Hey Patty,

;D Yeah! Another Orlando/Keira fic'. Can't ever have enough of those.

I like the title, seductive and romantic.

Keep updating...

[Rainbow]

Another Orlando/Keira fic'. Can't ever have enough of those.

^amen to that...

[Patty]

haha thanks again guys!

[Patty]

Ok this chapter isn't as good(in my opinion) but then again I don't think I'm a good writier. lol! But here it goes!

Chapter 2

I went to the dock and found Frankie standing there. He smiled at me. Then it quickly faded and he montioned me to look behind me. So I looked, and found Orlando and Kate walking toward us. Frankie and I looked at each other. Kate looked mad, but Orlando didn't.
"Hi guys. Nice night out isn't it?"
"Sure." I said.
"So what do you guys want to do?" He asked excitily.
"You guys?" Frankie said.
"Oh, I understand, come on Kate we'll go somewhere else." he said giving Frankie a dirty look. "Bye Patty.'' he said looking at me.
"Bye Orlando, have a nice night." I said back to him, though I sounded a little confused.
He put his arm around Kate and they walked away.
"What was that about?" asked Frankie.
He kinda sounded mad, confused, or annoyed. I wasn;t sure which. Though maybe it was all of them.
" I don't know but I would like to find out." I said still looking at Orlando trying to figure out what was going on.
"Do you want to just go to a movie tomorrow or something?"
"Sure, why not?"
"Ok, I'll pick you up at 8:00?"
"That sounds great!"
We said our good byes and waled our seperate ways home.

When I was about half-way home I started to wonder what happened that night. When I got to my front door, I stood there for a minute still thinking. I grabbed my keys and opened the door. I went up to my room to change into my pajamas and just settle down and try to sleep. But I just couldn't. I was still puzzled on what was going on. I was so confused. I liked Orlando. But he never said anything till I started talking to Frankie. But then Frankie was avery sweet guy and I know he liked me back. I didn't know what to do, so I tried to forget everything and fall asleep.

[Reens]

O, dirty look!

Wish he'll give me a ... err look, dirty!

[Miss Knightley]

Silly Orlando. And they say girls give mixed signals!

[Rainbow]

^^ haha serena you make me laugh girl!

Patty: Yay, nice update. thanks for putting the speech each on different lines ;D Most apreciated

And frankie can cook! or does he just wait? Obviously she should go for the best cook, the one that can make her romantic meals under the star light. ;D

Or not...

[Patty]

^ haha were heading towards the topic of food again! lol! haha!

[Patty]

Chapter 3

I woke up to my phone ringing. It scared me so I jumped out of my bed. I looked at the clock and it was 8:30 in the morning.
"Ugh! Too early........" I moaned.
I ran and answered the phone. It was my mom. The reason why she called was to check up on me. You know, soo how I was doing. I told her I was doing ok, but a little confused about things. I told her when I knew more about it. She said ok and that I hoped I figured it out. I loved my mom, I didn't know what I would do without her. I ran upstairs got dressed, did my hair, and brushed my teeth. I wore just a plain pair of jeans and a white baby tee with a zipper near the top. And I just threw up my hair in a ponytail. I heard a knock on the door and when I opened it I saw Orlando. He wasn't with Kate which surprised me.
"Hi. You want to come in?"
I motioned him to come in. He came in but I could tell he was nervous. He looked at me,
"I really need to talk to you."
He sounded serious enough.
"Ok, what about?"
I had an idea but I acted like I didn't know.
"That day I saw you staring at me on the beach........."
"I knew I was to obvious" I said cutting him off.
".......I realized that I wanted to get to know you better."
At this point I was starring at him still.
"What do you say, let's do something tonight?"
Now by this time I was literally freaking out. In my head of course. This is what I've wanted!
"ok......"
But then I thought about the movie with Frankie.
"Oh, but I can't. Not tonight."
I could tell he was really disappointed.
"Date with Frankie?" He sounded kinda upset.
"Yeah, look I'm really sorry but I already made plans. And what about Kate?" I think I was talking to fast.
"I dumped her. I realized there was someone else I'd rather be with."
And he gave me that puppy eyed look. I wanted to melt. Then he asked if he could have my phone number. I hesitated but gave it to him anyways.
About an hour passed and I heard a car horn honking outside. I inhaled deeplyafraid to tell him. I ran next to the car. The drivers side.
"Um....Frankie...can we call off the date please?"
"Sure.......why?" He looked concerned.
"Oh nothing bad, Orlando just came by, and I knida have a lot to think about. I hope you understand."
I felt bad, but I wasn't in the mood to go out. He said ok and gave me his number so I can call him tomorrow to talk to him about it.
"Thanks. Your really sweet."
I kissed him on the cheek and he said bye and drove off. I walked up my steps and went back inside.

[Rainbow]

haha were heading towards the topic of food again! lol! haha!

Oh my goodness your right. i must have a one tracked mind. Normal poepl would have it with inuendo but me.. food, lol.

Wow, great update. You use some nice descriptions:

I inhaled deeply afraid to tell him

he gave me that puppy eyed look. I wanted to melt

Muy bien

[Miss Knightley]

And he gave me that puppy eyed look. I wanted to melt.

What girl doesn't dream for that one perfect moment with him? Well done Patty.

[Patty]

Thanks guys.

[Rainbow]

Your more than welcome. can't wait to read more ;D

[Patty]

at least you guys like it...no one else does! lol! well on the kkforever board no one cares...I was hoping I could find at least one board that did. So you guys made me feel better.

[Reens]

Another nice update. ;D

Keep em coming.