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Post by Araminta Ditch on Aug 28, 2004 16:57:23 GMT -5
i have just finished reading this fic on the OB files and it was positively wonderfuil!!!!!
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Post by MrsWillTurner15 on Sept 4, 2004 19:36:38 GMT -5
OMG THANK YOU! IM SO SORRY GUYS FOR keeping you waiting like this! I had schol and stuff...ack! I will post the remaning of the story now!!!
Chapter 26
Keira and Orlando kneeled there on the ground together.
“Orlando, I just can’t believe someone I met practically for the first time. How can I believe that my father used to beat me and do things to me? How can I believe that my mother never loved me and wanted to forget all about me together so easily? I can’t just accept it to be the past of my life.”<br> Orlando just looked at her and brushed his thumb on her cheek.
“We all don’t have perfect lives. We’re lucky to even live. “<br> Orlando told her.
“ To live like me? I supposedly have a Sh*tty life . According to that slut, No one loved me. How can I live without love Orlando? To grow up in a world of hatred and betrayal. Of perverts and psychos. How is that living?”<br> He looked at her. Orlando then stood her up and said.
“A world without love is awful. But what’s worst is to love someone and they don’t love you back.”<br> He said slowly. Keira looked at him strangely.
He then quickly added. “ Besides. Living isn’t all the negatives things in life Keira. You need to take life and not let it take you.”<br> Keira then said sarcastically.
“ Oh ok papa, “ she laughed. Orlando chuckled and held her chin.
“That’s exactly what you should do. Forget your entire past think about the present and Smile.”<br> Keira hugged him. Her arms were around his belly and said.
“I only smile because I have friends like you. “
Orlando grinned big that moment. So big that his eyes closed.
“ It’s getting chilly. How about we go home?” he insisted.
Him and Keira walked out of the park. They waked through the streets of many little shops and people everywhere. The Sun was shining, but the oak tress would block it’s rays. Clouds were heavy and gave a light shade of pink. You could still feel the mist air from the grass every time you would breathe. Bird chirps everywhere. They sang joyful songs of harmony and praise. Life was still waking up. Ready for its normal duties, but prepared for anything. You never knew when the whole scenery would be destroyed by a burning meteor. Everything was unpredictable, but the show would still go on.
Orlando had his head down the whole time with his hat and big sunglasses. Keira looked at him strangely. Keira asked
“ Why are you so incognito?”<br> Orlando whispered
“Because..” Keira then whispered back,
“ Because why? And why are we whispering?”<br> Orlando laughed. Keira did too. She then saw a clothing store. She couldn’t resist and grabbed Orlando by the arms.
“What are we doing?!” he yelled.
” I want to see this store really quick!” she yelled.
She entered the smell of new material came upon her. Clothes all around her. Shoes, accessories, make-up.
“I’m in heaven!” she said with a sigh.
“And im in hell” Orlando mumbled.
Keira hit his tummy playfully.
“Fine Fine. I know you men hate this place. I just wanted to see. Let’s go home. “<br> Keira began walking. She wanted to see this store very badly, but she didn’t want to become selfish. She pulled Orlando, but he didn’t budge.
“No Keira, you deserve this. Go crazy or whatever you ladies do.”<br> Keira knew he was just being polite.
“No Orlando Don’t kid like that. It’s alright.”<br> He then picked her up. She screamed
“ Orlando, put me down. What are you doing?!”
he landed her in front of a rack of clothes. She stopped and stared. She looked back at him.
“May I? “<br> She asked. He nodded. And said.
“Your going to need something to wear. Especially where I’m taking you.”<br> She was surprised and asked “Where are we going?!”<br> he responded, “ There is a marvelous place right by the beach. It’s a new hall, and their holding a banquet. I found a flyer at the coffee shop when we were there earlier. We should go.”<br> Keira was very excited.
“ Thank you so much!” She squalled and started to do her thing.
He laughed. “ I’ll be waiting in the front.” He said loudly.
“ AW HAW! “ she responded with her hands full of jackets and shirts. He walked to the bench near the entrance door. He sat down, tipped his hat so it would cover his eyes, and crossed his arms. He closed his eyelids. Everything was calm and quiet. Someone entered the store, but he didn’t bother to see. Seconds later his hat flew across the room.
“ Hey ! What was that for?!” he yelled .
“ Calm, down man. It’s just me.”<br> Orlando stood up and asked.
“ What are you doing here John?”
he sat down next to him and said , “ It’s a free country man, besides. I was in town and saw your car parked outside. Thought I would check up on you. “
Orlando thought he knew John well. Obviously, not well enough. He his something and was very good at doing it. The way he spoke was different now and his eyes glowed a different color.
“ We both know that not true. “ Orlando said.
John ignored his remark and looked around.
“ Why you in a woman’s clothing store?”
Orlando kept quiet.
John then said, “ Keira is here huh?”<br> Orlando then shoved him and said, “You stay away from her. I don’t know what your up to man, but don’t confuse her.”
John lifted his hands in the air as if he meant no harm.
“ Hey man, I just wanted to see how she was doing. I mean after the night with you and Kate, who knows what that poor girl is doing.” He said.
Orlando then yelled “ Get the f*ck out of here!”
John laughed. “Alright , Alright. I got stuff to do anyways. Later G!” he said and walked out.
John laughed and lot a cigarette. He took a smoke and felt a sharp feeling on his finger. The fire on the match burnt his finger and he let it fall to the floor. He cussed at the match and his cigarette fell out from his lips. He bent down to pick it up. He saw a crumpled piece of paper and picked it up with his cigarette on the other hand. He unfolded it. It was the same Flyer Orlando was mentioning to. He put it in his pocket and went to his car. He got in the drivers seat.
“ Hey man, wakeup.”
He said shoving the man half drunk on his passengers drink.
“ What?”<br> John showed him the flyer.
“ What’s this ?” the man asked.
“ That’s where Orlando is going to be tomorrow. I’m sure of it. It has the scent of his cologne.” John said.
The man smiled and asked again.
“ With my daughter right?”<br> John started the car.
“ Yep Ron, with your precious daughter.”<br>
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Post by MrsWillTurner15 on Sept 4, 2004 19:42:19 GMT -5
Chapter 27
Keira went up to Orlando.
“ Lando, What’s wrong?”<br> Orlando looked tense.
” Nothing hun. Just forget it. “<br> Keira wanted to know what he was thinking but she didn’t ask anymore.
” If you want. You don’t need to get me anything. It’s fine Orlando. I don’t need any of this anyways. “
Orlando pinched her chin lightly. “ No Keira. I want you to get anything you want.
“Sky’s the limit hun. You deserve it. “ He said .
“ What do you got picked so far?”
she then responded, “ Well, nothing really , but..’ “ But what?” Orlando asked.
“ I just want one dress. “<br> “ Oh which one?” he asked searching around.
“ I don’t want to show you..” she said shyly.
Orlando squinted his eyes and his eyebrows twitched.
“ Why?! “ he asked
“Because I want to surprise you for tomorrow. Just kindly hand over the credit card and I will happily charge it for you” she said with a childish grin. “
“Ha ha no. I trust ya and all , but I would like to do it myself. “
he said laughing and walked up to the counter.
“ No Lando,I don’t want you to see the dress.”
She said in a childish voice and ran up behind him. She Jumped on him and covered his eyes. Orlando laughed and was highly amused.
“ Keira, your going to get hurt. Get off you little monkey. “ he said.
She jumped off and ran in front of him.
“ Fine. Just look at me the whole time until I say not to. Just look at my face. “<br> Orlando obeyed.
They stared at each other . Orlando looked deep into her eyes. It made Keira shiver all over spine. She blushed and Orlando smiled slightly.
“ This isn’t a punishment for me hun. I can do this all day.”
He said in a heavy british accent. Keira felt a strange sensation in her. She felt light and if she wouldn’t keep hold of the counter she would of flout.
“ Well, lets see if that’s true.”
She said flirty . She took her arm closer to Orlando’s body. She touched his collar and her hand slid down to his belt line. Orlando felt hot and was sensitive to Keira’s touch. She then swerved her arm to his pocket on his bum. Orlando cleared his throat.
“ Keira, not in public.” He said .
Keira was amused by his comment.
“ But Lando, Im just reaching for your wallet. “ she said and pulled out a leather rectangle.
Orlando’s heart started to pump again. Keira poked his nose
“ You silly bunny. What did you think I was going to do?” she said.
She knew exactly what he was thinking.
“ oh erm, nothing at all.” He said embarrassed.
Keira just shook her head.
“ I would like to buy this Please.” She said to the cashier still looking at Orlando.
The cashier giggled.
“ You guys are such a cute couple.” The cashier stated.
Orlando then said slowly, “ We aren’t dating. Just really good friends.”
Not leaving Keira’s face.
“ Oh sorry. Well, you guys would make the best couple. “ the cashier then said.
Keira just gave out her girly giggles.
“ That would be $405.00. Cash or Credit?” the cashier asked.
Keira gave her the credit card behind her back.
“ Credit please.” She said.
“ How long are we going to stare at eachother for?” Orlando asked.
“ Just until the cashier puts the dress in the bag.”<br> “ Already did.”
The cashier interrupted.
They didn’t move. They gazed into eachother eyes until it would hurt. The cashier cleared her troaght.Keira turned around.
“ Oh so sorry.” She said blushing.
“ Not a problem dear. It’s a beautiful dress. Im sure you will look marvelous in it. “ she said handing Keira the bag.
” Thank you.” She simply said.
“ Please do come again.”
The cashier said and gave back the credit card.
“ Im sure we will. Take care mam’ “
Orlando said and they left the store.
The day was already over. The shop owners were already hanging up their Closed signs. The light lamps were turning on. The cars were leaving and people exiting the stores with shopping bags and the mothers with their children hands in theirs. Keira and Orlando went to a fast food place and straight to Orlando’s home. They ate at his living room watching TV.
“You want more to drink Keira?” he asked her.
“ Yes Please.” She said.
He left the room to the kitchen. Keira took another French fry and a bite of her hamburger. I shouldn’t be eating so fast or the dress will never fit. She thought to herself. I’m going to look beautiful tomorrow and just for him. Keira looked back at the TV. She flipped the channels. And old black and white picture came on the screen. It was one of the old romantic movies. The woman were so beautiful. They were funny , flirty, and mysterious. The men were so handsome, sweet, honest , and wise. The scene was now a man and a woman standing in the rain, very much like her and Orlando did one time. The man in the tv got closer to the woman. He mumbled those three words she always wanted to hear: “ I love you maria. I love you so much.” Then the film ended with their love first kiss. Keira swooned. She then thought. I should let Orlando how I fell about him. She was contemplating is she should or not. She was very nervous. What if he doesn’t feel the same way about me? She asked herself. At that moment Orlando came in with two glasses with Coke in them.
“ Here ya go!”
Keira thanked him and received the glass and took a sip. Orlando looked at her.
“ What? “
she asked.
“ What are you thinking?” he asked her.
“ No nothing. “ she said . She smiled to herself.
“ Im going to do it. Im going tot tell him tomorrow.” She said thought to her self.
“ K Ron, You know the plan. I’ll come pick you up at around 7. Get your best suit.” John yelled and drove away.
Ron got inside his trailer home and went straight to the fridge. He took out a beer and open it. He took big gulps of it and let out a burp. He walked to his room. He laid on his bed. He sat up and crept to the edge next to his nightstand. He opened the drawer and found a old photo. It was Keira when she was just 4 years old. Her messy hair and her little jumper. She smiled big in the photo. She didn’t know that when she turned 5 her life would completely changed. Ron looked at it he then reached lower to the drawer and grabbed at heavy metal. It was his gun. He pointed it to the photo. “ Your going to pay sweet cheeks, your going to pay.” He shot the photo and let out a loud laugh.
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Post by MrsWillTurner15 on Sept 4, 2004 19:46:32 GMT -5
Chapter 28
Chapter 28
Morning came. Orlando woke before Keira. He yawned and stretched his arms. He scratched his tummy and rubbed his eyes. His hair was all messy; His necklaces were warm next to his skin. The window shades were down blocking the sun. The room was cool and shady. There was little light in it. He looked for Keira. She was still sleeping. He then saw her tossing and turning. He went up to her. She was sweating and mumbling things.
Keira was dreaming. She dreamt that she was drowning. She saw the apple tree again. She saw the whole world through under the water surface. Every time she would try to swim up she would sink lower. The harder she would try to get out the faster the very life in her was escaping in little bubbles. She then saw a little girl. She was small and held a teddy bear. She saw all this like a two way mirror. She saw a man pointing a gun at her. The little girl’s face was breathtaking. It hurt Keira. She tried to save her, but it was too late. Keira then saw the man pointing the gun down at her in the water. Keira woke up gasping for air. Orlando jumped.
“Hun are you alright?’
He asked her worriedly. He removed the hair away from her face.
“What was it Keira?” he asked her.
“It was man. He killed this little girl. I was drowning. He then tried to kill me. I was dying Orlando. I was dying. “ She said raspy.
She was having trouble breathing. Orlando sat next to her and held her. He calmed her down. He didn’t understand her dreams. They were so weird and graphical.
“Why am I having these dreams? Why are they like I’ve seen them before?” she asked him.
“I don’t know Keira. I’m so sorry Keira, but I don’t know. “<br> He whispered to her.
Orlando wanted to cheer her up and make her forget.
“Well, let’s try not to think about this. You know why?”<br> he said to her dopey.
“What is that?” she asked him.
” Today is the night. Today we go to that big banquet, member? You were supposed to surprise me with your dress. I’m very anxious.”<br> “Oh that’s right.” She remembered.
Today was also the night she never wanted to come. She was going to confess her love to him.
“What time does it start again?” she asked him.
“ 7 o’clock in the evening.”<br> “ ohhh.” Keira simply said and just sat there.
Orlando looked at her eccentrically. She was too quiet. Something was wrong with her. So he went around the other side of the bed. He slowly creep up to her side. He grabbed her with one arm and laid her on the bed.
“Orlando what are you doing!?” she yelled.
He went on top of her and close her face. He breathed in her face and said.
“Something I should of done a long time ago. I can’t help it anymore.” He said.
She felt his arms go up to her side and then…he tickled her. Keira roared with laughter.
“Orlando stop. Stop. “ She yelled.
Orlando kept going and faster. He was laughing at her. She then attacked him.
“ I’m not ticklish. “ he said and crossed his arms.
“We’ll see about that.” She said and went for his ribcage.
He tried so hard not to show that it was working. He laughed.
“I’m hungry.” He said and escaped from her.
“Me too.” She said and ran downstairs.
They made some eggs and toast. They talked about random things. They both secretly felt like they were able to talk about anything to one another.
The day went by fast.
“Oh my, It’s already 5. I’m going to get ready. How about you?”
Keira asked him. Orlando was in the backyard playing around with Geuro .
“ Oh ill will in a sec. “ he said .
“ Well, I’m going to use your room. So if you kindly please get all the stuff you will need. You will not be able to go in till after I say so”
Keira said with a smile.
Orlando slowly got to his feet and went upstairs. He gathered his suit and cologne. He went to the other bathroom down the hall and set down his stuff.
“ Thank you!” Keira yelled and shut the door.
She started the shower and undressed herself. She had bought her own shampoos and make up the other day at the store. She washed her hair and lathered her body with the luscious body soap.
Orlando liked his showers cold. It would always wake him up. He didn’t like to take forever in there.
Keira stepped out the shower room with only a towel around her body. The mirrors were fogged up. She wiped the glass with her hand to see a clearer view. She dried her self and brushed her hair. She put it in curlers and started to apply her make up.
Orlando’s hair wasn’t curly when it was wet. The hair was straight. He let it self dry while he put on his boxers and then his socks. He took hold of a white long sleeved shirt and wrapped it on his firm body. The leather was see through especially because his chest was still a bit damp. He put on his pants and then his belt. He put his coat on and tied his tie. He looked in the mirror and saw that his curls were starting to appear again.
Keira took out the curlers and her hair was softly curled. She added a golden barrette on the side of her head. She went for the dress. This was her favorite part. She slipped on the soft fabric over her and strapped on her shoes. She checked one last time on the mirror and was happy what she saw.
Orlando got out of the bathroom. He slicked his hair in the front but his curls hanging on the side. His go-tee and mustache were tamed and tucked his necklaces under his shirt.
He knocked on the door.” Keira, it’s 6:30. We’re going to be late love.” He said straightening his suit.
She discovered that his shoelace was un tied and bent down to do so. Orlando didn’t hear the door open and he heard Keira whispered
“ I’m ready.”<br> Orlando shot up and her presence shocked him. His mouth was open but empty of words. He gazed over Keira. She twirled.
“ What do you think?”
She said smiling. She wore a golden lustrous satin dress. It flowed with the movements of her body. It had the lingerie-influenced lace up corset design with ribbon lacing along the front. Her hair was down in soft curls and her eyes shot out like the sun. Orlando smiled. His eyes were twinkling.
“I have never seen anyone so beautiful in my life.” He said and reached for her hand and kissed it.
“ You look, amazing Keira.”
Keira blushed and replied,
“ So do you Orlando.”
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Post by MrsWillTurner15 on Sept 4, 2004 19:56:58 GMT -5
Chapter 29
“ You ready then?”<br> Orlando asked holding out his hand. Keira gave him her hand in his palm and replied,
“ Let’s do this thing”
she said as she winked. The walked slowly downstairs. Keira walked with Poise and manner.
“ Well, you sure did surprise me.”
He admitted to her.
” Really? Or are you just saying that?” she asked cocking her left eyebrow.
“ No really.”<br> He said.
“ Oh you got something on your nose.”
He told her.
“ Oh no, where? Where?”
she said wiping her nose gently. She didn’t want to use a napkin or it would smear the foundation.
“ Right here.”<br> Orlando said while he wiped it off gently off her nose.
“ Oh thank you. I wouldn’t want to have this thing on my nose and make me look ugly!”
she said childishly.
“ Nothing can make you ugly hun.”
He said sweetly. Keira giggled.
” Um, Orlando . “<br> she began to say. She thought maybe this would be the perfect chance to tell him.
“ Orlando I have something to tell you..”<br> “ Yes Keira?” he said as he walked closer.
Keira tried to say something.
“ I..I . Oh never mind. I wanted to know what time it is. “<br> she said frowning. Orlando checked his watch
“ Late. We got to get going. “<br> He said while he opened the door for her. Then he walked to the drivers seat and they drove off. They came to a big white building with flowers everywhere. A big golf course just outside. It had big windows and the doors where made of glass.
“ Oh my gaw..”
she said.
“ Big huh?” he replied.
“ Big and Beautiful.” She said.
They parked the car. They walked up to the two glass doors where two butlers were awaiting them.
“ Good evening monsieur. “ one said
“ Good evening Madame” the other one said as he bowed .
Orlando smiled and nodded.
” Good evening to you too.” Keria replied.
They entered the two big door into a big hallroom. It was empty. There was a glass wall just at the end of the room that people were on the other side of.
“ I guess everyone is on the other side.”
Orlando said.
“ You mean this isn’t the party?” she asked him.
“ No, It’s just a hall.”
Keira couldn’t believe it. There was a chandelier made of just diamonds. The couches were at one corner with a fireplace and a cherry wood mantelpiece. The carpet was white with flower design. The room was very well lit.
“ Oh I forgot just one thing. “
Orlando said while searching in his chest pocket.
“ What?” Keira asked.
“ What are you looking for? “<br> “ For this.” He said.
He held out a little black long box. He opened it and there laid a diamond wreath necklace.
“ OH MY Gawd! Orlando who’s that for?” she asked
“ For you Keira. I figured you needed a little something to lay on that perfect neck of yours.” He said with a side smile.
“ Orlando No. It’s beautiful, but I just can’t wear that. I’m not worthy enough.” She said.
“ Keira, It’s for you and your going to put it on. It’s just a little thank you gift for coming here with me tonight. “
“ Oh Orlando , I’m more then happy to be here with you. Oh it’s gorgeous. Thank you.”
She said while she hugged him and kissed him just at the end of the lips. Orlando chuckled. He took the necklace and Keira turned around. She lifted her hair exposing her back and shoulders. Orlando smelt her sweet scent and put the necklace on her. Keira let down her hair and ran up to a mirror. She admired it. Orlando looked in the mirror also and said to her,
“ You look perfect. Fit for a queen.” As he took hold of her waist and ushered her to the party.
The room was lit with only candles with dim fire. The wine glasses sparkled with bubbling clear liquid in them. There were roses and rose petals on the tables. The silver spoons, forks, and knifes would give you a blurry reflection if you ever looked down at them. The woman were gorgeous and the men were handsome. They were very nice and welcoming.
“ Cool huh?”<br> Orlando whispered to her.
“ Aw haw.” She said speechless. Her necklace sparkled that it caught everyone’s attentions. They smiled and went on with their business. The music played softly and was smoothing.
“ May I have this dance?”<br> Orlando asked bowing down disguising his voice with an old English tone.
“ I’ll be honored” she said.
They walked hand in hand to the middle of the dance room. Everyone smiled and winked at them.
“ Do you know any of these people Lando?” she asked as he swayed closely with him.
“ Maybe. “<br> Hee replied as he spinned her in his arms. They danced together for hours. Orlando made Keira laughed. They talked and swirled at the same time.No one could take this moment from them. Or so they thought.
“ May I cut in?” a strange man asked Orlando.
Orlando and Keria looked at him. The man smiled.
“ Sure .”
Orlando said letting Keira go.
“ Thank you Orlando.” The man said.
“ No problem man. Keira would you like something to drink?”<br> “ Yes please.”
She responded and Orlando left.
“ So you know Orlando. Sir?” she asked him.
“ Yes. Yes I do. I heard a lot about you madam.”
He responded.
“ Keira. You can call me Keira.”
The man appreciated it.
“ Keira. Beautiful name as well as the owner. “ he said as they danced.
” Oh thank you , sir. And your name is?” she asked him.
“ Oh please excuse me, my name is George. George McDermott. I am the duke of Ireland. “ he said.
“Oh dear duke , good evening. “ she said as she bowed.
The duke laughed.
“ No need for that. Just a dance with you is enough.”<br> Keira blushed.
“ So what brought you over here?” she asked him.
“ Oh, I am sponsoring the makers here. They invited me here . SO here I am. Beautiful isn’t it?” he asked her.
“ Oh lovely.” She replied.
“ I say, that necklace of your ‘s is marvelous.”
He interrupted.
“ Oh thank you. Orlando got it for me.”<br> She said as she looked down at it.
“ Is that right? Well, you know what my pappy used to say.”
“ What is that?” Keria asked him.
He then replied, “ There’s not a diamond in a room that sparkles as much as a woman in love.” Keira laughed silently.
“ Well, your Pappy was a very smart man.”<br> The duke smiled.
“Can I cut in?”<br> A rusty voice asked tapping the Dukes shoulder. He bowed to Keira and kissed her hand.
“ Thank you Keira.” He said to her.
She smiled . The man took hold of Keira harshly.
“ Your hurting me. Who are you anyways?”
she asked the man.
“ What, you don’t remember me sweetcakes?”
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Post by MrsWillTurner15 on Sept 4, 2004 20:07:07 GMT -5
Chapter 30
Keira looked at him. She hated that nick name. She hated it with a passion.
“ What did you just call me?” she asked.
“ Oh come on, Like you don’t remember me. “ he said.
His breath smelt like beer. Such an awful smell. His eyes were bloodshot and his hair was black. He had a big skin mark on the side of his head. He wore a old suit. He had a small beer bottle on his chest pocket.
“ I am sorry Sir. But I have to go. “
She walked fast looking for Orlando. He wasn’t at the punch bowl. He wasn’t seen anywhere. The man was following her slowly. Keira was getting nervous. She went outside. She went to the butlers holding the doors.
“ Have you seen my date? The man I came with. Orlando Bloom.”
She asked impatiently. The man was walking across the hall.
“ Im sorry madam. I just changed shifts with the other two earlier this evening. Is something wrong?”
Keira was getting scared.
“ Yes , this man is following me. He is stalking me..”
The man walked through the doors and grabbed Keira by the wrist.
“ Look sweetheart. If you say anything, I will kill Orlando. “ he said as he kissed her neck.
Keria’s heart sank.
“ Please, don’t hurt him.”
She whispered . she tried to breath normally.
” Excuse me miss, is this man bothering you?” the butler asked holding a walkie talkie.
“ No..NO..everything is fine.”
She said slowly. The man took her to the garden just next to them. He sat her down. He reached for a cell phone.
“ Yes, I got her. OK” he said to the receiver and hanged up.
“ What do you want from me?” she asked.
” You’ll see. By the way, you look beautiful tonight. Is that dress easy to get out of?” he asked her while he touched her chin.
“ DON’T TOUCH ME!” He grabbed her throat and said,
“ You have no choice unless you want something to happened to your boyfriend.”<br> Keria gasped.
” Where is he?” she asked.
“ Oh he is inside with a friend of yours. He is about to pay him a little visit.”
John put the cell phone back to his pocket. He spotted Orlando at the corner. John lit a cigar and walked his way to him. Orlando was holding two wine glasses. He was looking for Keira.
“ Orlando, what are you doing here?” john asked as he took a glass from his hand.
“ John, what are you doing here?” he asked him harshly.
“ Are you still mad at me? You need to lighten up. I just came to pick up Keira. She called me. Apparently, she wasn’t having any fun with you.”
He said. Orlando looked at him,
“You lie. Where is she?!” he asked abruptly.
“ She is now under my care now. So if you excuse me.”John said.
Orlando’s fist ran straight to John’s nose.
“ You sh*tface!”
John yelled and pushed Orlando to the punch bowl. The tables turned and the glass broke. John ran outside. Orlando chased him.
“ RUN,RON TO THE CAR!”<br> Ron grabbed Keira and threw her inside the car.
” ORLANDO!!” she yelled with all her might.
“ KEIRA!” Orlando yelled and the car drove off.
John opened the door from the passenger seat and brought out his gun. He began shooting randomly. Fortunately, missing Orlando. Orlando couldn’t take his car to follow him. John knows his car.
“Excuse me sir, but I need to use your vehicle.”
He said and grabbed a stranger’s car and began to go after John.
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Post by MrsWillTurner15 on Sept 4, 2004 20:11:48 GMT -5
Chapter 31
“You think you got him??”
Ron asked John.
“ Ya, I think so.”
“ Nooo ,,,Orlando.” Keira yelled.
Streams of salty water ran down her cheeks.
“John your in this too?! You b@sturd! How can you do this?”
John snapped back at her.
“This is the only reason I can get you. Keira, you need to understand that I need you.” He said.
Keira slapped him again. John was going to attack but Ron stopped him.
“Leave her alone. You can mess with her when we get there. “<br> Keira slid to the side window in a fetal position. She was scared. She didn’t know what they were going to do to her. They got to a small motel. Some of the Motel sign letters were missing or didn’t work. The pool in the front was green and the chairs were black with dirt. There was no tree in sight as well as people. John picked Keira up in his arms. He placed a cloth in her mouth. Ron went to the check in desk. Keira squirmed in John’s arms. He hit her right in the rib cage. She was so weak and couldn’t do anything back. Ron kicked open the door to their room. John threw Keira on the bed. Keira saw the phone. She headed for it. Ron shot the phone in her hands. Her knuckles bleeded and her skin was raw.
“Nope. Wrong thing to do.I suggest you just sit there.” John said.
He closed the door and sat on a chair. Ron stood in the corner with the gun in his arm.
“What do you want John? What do you want from me!?!?” she yelled.
John then replied,” Keira, I told you I loved you, but you rejected me. You’re in love with that f*ck up, Orlando. He always got what he wanted, but not anymore. He’s dead.”
Keira cried noisily,
“ No no, he’s not dead. “<br> He interrupted.
“ If he wasn’t don’t you think he would be here by now?”<br> Keira didn’t respond.
“ I don’t believe you. “
John then added,
“ No Keira, you don’t want to believe. You don’t want to believe that Orlando didn’t love you. But too late now.”
Keira didn’t know what to believe. John was probably right. Right about everything. Orlando was dead and he didn’t love her. He was just being playing with her.
“ Oh , I forgot to tell you something else. Your going to like this one.”
Keira looked at John with despiteful eyes. He then said,
“ Ron come here. “<br> he said
“ Keira, This is Ron Knightly, your father.”
Keira throat went dry and her tongue swelled up. Her lids didn’t blink and muscles didn’t move.
“ What? “<br> Ron then said,
“ Yep, he right sweet cakes. Do you remember me now?”
He showed her his badly bruisen skull.
“You did this to me. “ he said.
Keira’s head pounded in pain.
” Oh and I got something else to show you. Maybe your amnesia will be gone after this”
Ron said.
John brought in a little girl in her arms and laid her next to Keira’s body.
“ This was your daughter. What a beauty we made Keira.” Ron said.
Keira suddenly remembered it all.
Every time she would try to swim up she would sink lower. The harder she would try to get out the faster the very life in her was escaping in little bubbles. She then saw a little girl. She was small and held a teddy bear. She saw all this like a two way mirror. She saw a man pointing a gun at her. The little girl’s face was breathtaking. It hurt Keira. She tried to save her, but it was too late
Her nightmares were her memories and her visions of the flowered field and the man were her dreams. Dreams she wanted to come true. All she wanted was love and security. The little girl on that memory was her daughter. She was born four years ago. After, she was born from her own womb her father took her away. She took his uncle’s home. His uncle was an evil and perverted man. No doubt he did the same thing to her little girl as Ron did to Keira.Ron didn’t want anything to do with her little girl. She never got to see her. She was too weak after her 12 hour labor. She would only come back to see her father because she would always ask about her daughter. He never wanted to answer her. He grew furious and would hit her. Keira never had the guts to report her father. He swore that if he did he would kill their little daughter.
Keira remembered it all clearly now. She covered her mouth with her hand . She breathed heavy. The memories were like poison. Poison the her mind and heart. She grabbed the little girl’s hand. It was lifeless.
” She’s dead as well as your mother. I found your mother that one day at the coffee shop. She pissed me off so killed her too.”
Ron admitted. John laughed ,
Ron continued,
“ The girl was getting useless to my uncle. And I didn’t want her. And you wouldn’t remember her so I killed her too.”<br> He threw something as Keira. It was the same necklace her mother gave her.
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Post by Araminta Ditch on Sept 4, 2004 21:30:46 GMT -5
ah yes, this part was a little disturbning to me...kiera having a daughter with her father. ack! creepy. still wonderful story though! love it,
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Post by DEE1 on Sept 6, 2004 21:36:19 GMT -5
okay before i tel you how great and good thsi story is i'm going to givea lil CC just a LIL. okay 1st you need to work on grammar and spelling. @ work on using lesss ismple sentences. Otherwise you ahvea great plot and sotry line going and you definatly cna write, you jsut need a lil work, i say great job and keep going thsi si really good, and sad makes me want to cry msot of the time so sad. great job!!!~DEE
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