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Post by maddie845 on Jul 17, 2007 21:10:59 GMT -5
Hey! This is a story that I have been working on that I am about to share with you! Hope you enjoy!
Chapter 1:
“Good morning mom…” I said as I walked down the stairs.
“Hey! How did you sleep last night?” said my mom happy as could be, fully dressed and already starting her day.
“It was good.”
“Great!”
“What can I have for breakfast?” I said.
“Anything that is in the fridge.” My mom said.
‘Just another boring day…’ I thought to myself.
I ate waffles for breakfast while watching The Suite Life of Zack and Cody. Then I went upstairs and turned on my TV and started picking out my clothes. I picked out a pair of jeans, a stripped tank top and a pair of golden ballet slippers.
“You got a big date tonight?” said my dad as he walked into the room.
“Uh!” I said as I started laughing.
“It was 10 by then and I decided to go and get Jamie, we were going to see Pirates of the Caribbean: At World’s End today and we could not wait until 12:45.
I knocked on her door and her mom answered. “HI! Is Jamie there?” I said.
“Ya, sure… JAMIE!”
Jamie walked up to the door in shorts and a tank top.
“You look CUTE!” I said.
“You look cute yourself!” said Jamie.
We walked over to my house. “So whose mom is driving?” I asked.
“My mom said that she would drive if your mom would pick us up.” Said Jamie.
“Sounds perfect!”
“Mom can you pick up Jamie and I from the movie?” I asked.
“Sure!” said my mom.
“Looks like we are set!” Jamie said as she hi- fives my hand.
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Post by becky on Jul 18, 2007 2:20:04 GMT -5
sounds interesting......
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Maddie
Reaching for Stars
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Post by Maddie on Jul 18, 2007 2:37:07 GMT -5
lol sounds good, bit confused though but please update cant wait to read the rest
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Post by maddie845 on Jul 18, 2007 10:26:31 GMT -5
Here is the next chapter of the story since yall liked the first one so much!
Chapter 2:
“Time to go!” Jamie’s mom yelled up the stairs.
“Coming,” said Jamie.
We walked downstairs to get our shoes and walked out the door. We hopped in the car and went to Walgreen’s to buy some candy for the movie. We bought sour gummy worms, and 4 Hershey bars!
We arrived at the movie theater and went to buy our tickets. “I need two tickets for Pirates of the Caribbean: At World’s End.” I said.
We paid the cashier and got our tickets. When we walked into the movie theater we went to get some pop corn and sodas.
We walked into the theater and went to find a seat. We sat in the front row! We were so excited, this was the second time that we went to see Pirates of the Caribbean: At World’s End together.
“You ready for this?” I said.
“Yeahh!” said Jamie.
The lights in the theater dimmed and the movie started.
Jamie and I knew almost all the words and we also had the script with us that we got offline. Most people looked at us like we were crazy reciting the movie.
“When the song Hoist the Colours came on we sang along.
We watched the whole movie. Ate all of our popcorn and all our Hershey bars and gummy worms! We had such a stomach ache when we came out of the movies to go meet my mom outside the theater.
“Hey mom!” I said as we climbed in the car.
“Hey girls! How was the movie?”
“Awesome!” said Jamie and I at the same time.
“Alright next stop… Home!” said my mom being a little bit more perky than normal.
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Post by venus567 on Jul 19, 2007 0:35:09 GMT -5
awesome job!
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Jul 19, 2007 15:34:16 GMT -5
okay same as Maddie, a little bit confused, but other than that fantastic! cant wait for the next update!!
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Post by thankful24 on Jul 19, 2007 15:51:46 GMT -5
update soon!
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Post by maddie845 on Jul 21, 2007 10:00:26 GMT -5
hey! I am glad that you like my story! If you are confused or have any questions then you can private message me! Here is the next part of: A Dream Come True!
Chapter 3:
When we walked into my house we decided to go jump on the trampoline. “1, 2,3!” said Jamie as on three we all seat dropped.
Then we decided that no day as good as that one was complete without watching all three Pirates of the Caribbean movies.
“Lets go to my house.” said Jamie.
“Come on lets go find Pirates 1.” I said.
We walked around the house for a couple of minuets and we still did not find Pirates 1. Finally we checked again in the living room by the TV and we found it!
“Lets go get some: popcorn, candy, and snowballs like we always do when we watch Pirates.” Jamie said.
“Alright! It wouldn’t be Pirates without it!” I said.
We popped the popcorn, made the snowballs and got tons of candy. So we went up in her brother Eric’s room to watch the movie. We brought a lot of blankets to lay down on and brand in pillows and started the movie.
We sang along to the theme song and bounced back and fourth.
“We are such Pirates GEEKS!” I said.
“You know it!” replied Jamie still bouncing up and down.
Half way through the movie Jamie went to go get her puppy, Molly. When Molly came in the room she started trying to eat all of the food. So we had to put it up on the bed, but some of her drink spilled and we had to take Molly back out.
Jamie came back in with 409 and we cleaned it up. It surprisingly looked like we did not spill anything. So we put a towel over it so that it would dry because the carpet was still damp.
When the movie was over we decided to watch the bloopers. They were hilarious. It is funny to watch the cast mess up!
Jamie and I watched the bloopers over and over again until finally her brother came upstairs to kick us out of his room.
While we were deciding what we were going to do the phone rang and my mom asked Jamie if she could talk to me.
“Hello.” I said.
“Hey!” said my mom, “Maddie you need to come home I have a surprise for you that you are not going to believe.”
“Alright, but can Jamie come with me?” I asked.
“Sure! You will both love the surprise.”
“Jamie, my mom says for us to go to my house. She says that she has a surprise that we are not going to believe.”
“Let’s go then!” screamed Jamie.
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Post by thankful24 on Jul 21, 2007 10:56:07 GMT -5
ooooh its it the cast? update soon!
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Jul 21, 2007 19:02:53 GMT -5
okeydoke, not as confused now, update soon!!!
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Post by maddie845 on Jul 21, 2007 21:53:12 GMT -5
Hey! here is a plot twist in the story! hope you enjoy!
Chapter 4:
When I walked up to the house I opened the garage.
“Hey mom!” I said as Jamie and I walked in the door.
“Hey mad!”
“What is going on?” said Jamie.
“Go search the house and you will find it!” said my mom.
We started in the play room and searched all of downstairs but nothing! So we decided to go upstairs.
“Mom, why is my door closed?” I asked, "I left my door open."
“I don’t know…” said my mom in a mysterious way.
I slowly opened the door and right at that second Jamie and I looked at each other and SCREAMED!
“A…are you guys?”
“Um… what is the word that I am looking for? YES!” said a special voice.
“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” screamed Jamie and I.
“Omg! Jamie! I can not believe! Ah! Jamie they are the cast from PIRATES OF THE CARIBBEAN! In my room!” I screamed.
“Hey Maddie!” said Keira Knightley.
“Oh My God! Keira Knightley knows my name!” I said.
“Why are you guys here anyway?” asked Jamie.
“Well we were wondering if we could stay with you for a couple of days?” said Keira.
“Of course!” I said.
“Jamie, can I talk to you!?” I said not even being able to control myself.
We walked out the room and started to scream!
“Ok. Now that that is taken care of…” I said.
“Well I have just one question,” I said, “Why do you guys need to stay at my house?”
“Well we really wanted to get away from the paparazzi and we just picked a random house in Mandeville because this is the last place that anyone will look for us.” Orlando Bloom said.
“Well you can stay here for as long as you want!” I said staring at Orlando.
“Maddie, would you mind if I lived with you for a couple of days?” asked Jamie.
“No! Please stay with me!” I said.
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Post by thankful24 on Jul 22, 2007 11:23:29 GMT -5
ahaha i wish they would actually do that- cant wait for the next update!
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Jul 22, 2007 14:22:54 GMT -5
omg totally surreal!! i would probably wet my pants in this circumstance but your characters handled it much better than i would! lol great story; update soon!!
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Post by maddie845 on Jul 22, 2007 21:52:57 GMT -5
hey! i am so glad that you guys like my story! enjoy the next chapter!
Chapter 5:
“Uh! I am kinda not going anywhere anytime soon! What do you think… that I am going to let you spend all the time with them. Dream On!” said Jamie.
“Well duh! Not like I would let you go home!” I said.
“I think I am going to pee on myself!” said Jamie, “Be right back!”
“Alright you do that!” I said.
The cast members just sat on my bed and laughed. “Apparently they were used to this. Of course they were used to this! But they were probably not used to being inside a fans house. But whatever.” I thought.
“Hey Maddie, just an odd question,” said Orlando, “I noticed that you had a trampoline and I was just wondering if you know…”
“Of course! Lets go!” I said.
We all pushed and shoved our way onto the trampoline. We all laughed as we jumped up and down knocking each other over.
“1,2,3!” screamed Jamie and I as we seat dropped on three.
The Keira, Orlando, and Johnny just starred at us like we were maniacs. But we were. After a little while they got what we were doing and joined in with us jumping up and down and then falling on our butts.
“That was the most fun I have had in a long time!” said Johnny.
“Ya.” Keira said, “I have not been on a trampoline since I was just a little girl!”
“Well for now you can use it whenever you want!” I said.
“Really?” said Keira.
“Well you are kinda living here for a little while aren’t you?” said Jamie.
“I guess so!”
“So what do you guys want to do?” I said, “Are you guys hungry?” “No I am trying to watch my figure!” said Johnny.
Everyone cracked up laughing.
“The only person that needs to watch her figure is me.” Said Keira.
“Ya right as if!” said Jamie.
“You look great as it is! Heck you always look great!” I said.
“Aw well thanks!” said Keira.
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Jul 23, 2007 12:47:07 GMT -5
ok, so maybe one of your characters did pee their pants, like i would. guess i spoke/wrote too soon!! anyways, love it so far, keep up the fantabulous work!!
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Post by maddie845 on Jul 23, 2007 13:00:25 GMT -5
thanks for the awesome feedback! i am glad you guys like it! here is more!
Chapter 6:
“Ya! Maddie speaks the truth!” said Jamie.
“You guys are so sweet!” said Keira as we joined into a hug.
“Girls and Guys! Time for dinner!” yelled my mom up the stairs.
“Coming!” we all yelled.
“Wow I haven’t had a home cooked meal in a long time.” Said Orlando.
“What are we having it smells delicious!” said Johnny.
“We are having: Italian sausage, home made macaroni, and green beans.” Said my dad.
“Aw yum!” said Keira, “Right now I am so hungry that I could eat a cow!”
“Well get ready because here comes dinner!” I said.
My mom and dad brought us dinner and put it on the table. They gave us forks and knives to eat with and we said prayer. Then we all started eating.
After dinner was over we decided to get into our pajamas. Then we wanted to watch a movie. Keira said that she already owned Pirates of the Caribbean: At Worlds End. So we decided to watch that.
“Maddie, this has been the best day of my life.” Said Jamie as we were putting on our pajamas up in my room as everyone else was getting dressed in either a bathroom or the office.
“Are we ready?” said Keira, “Do we have all our snacks?”
“Uh… Lets see. We have popcorn, cookies, drinks, and candy.” I said.
“Do you guys think that that is enough?” said Orlando.
“Uh… I think we are forgetting something!” said Jamie.
“What would that be?” said Johnny.
“Snowballs!” said Jamie. “Of course! Every time Jamie and I watch a Pirates movie we always make snowballs!” I said, “Do you guys want one? We have cherry and lemon lime flavoring.”
“I will take cherry!” said Keira.
“Can I have a lemon lime?” said Johnny.
“Of course!” I said.
“What about you Orlando?” Jamie asked.
“Can I have a cherry… no lemon lime… no cherry… um.” Orlando said.
“Would you choose!” said Keira jokingly.
“I guess I will have lemon lime.” Said Orlando.
Finally our snowballs were ready and we sat down to watch the movie…
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Post by elizabethswann1 on Jul 23, 2007 13:25:04 GMT -5
Aw! I love it Maddie. In case you guys are wondering, I am Jamie that she is talking about! :)Update soon.
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Jul 23, 2007 18:57:49 GMT -5
update again soon; i love it!!
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Post by maddie845 on Jul 24, 2007 12:54:10 GMT -5
Hey! glad you guys are reading my story! here is the next chapter enjoy!
Chapter 7:
“Alright! Everyone ready!” said Keira as she put in the movie.
“Ya lets do it!” we said.
The movie started and we all laid down somewhere on the floor or on the couch. Keira laid on the couch. I sat with Jamie on the big chair. Orlando and Johnny laid on the floor.
We all sang to Hoist the Colours as we did in the movie theaters! Half way through the movie we decided that we needed to make more snowballs. So we sent Johnny and Orlando to go make them. All of a sudden we heard what sounded like an explosion from the kitchen.
“What is going on?” said Keira.
“Uh… nothing!” said Johnny.
“I know you Johnny and nothing is not in your vocabulary!” said Keira.
We walked in the kitchen to find ice gone everywhere. “What happened?” I said.
“Well… Orlando turned it on when the lid was not on properly and well…” Johnny said.
We all cracked up laughing. Keira, Jamie, and I relieved Orlando and Johnny from their snowball making.
We returned to the movie and finished it. We looked at the clock and it was already two in the morning.
“Ok guys now we have to figure out where everyone is going to sleep.” I said.
“Well we could just sleep right here.” Orlando said, “Couldn’t we?”
“Sure,” I said, “but we will have to make another pallet for Jamie since we both can’t sleep up here!” I said.
“Ya we might want to do that.” Said Jamie.
We made a pallet on the floor for Jamie and we all went to brush our teeth. Then we laid down to get ready for bed.
“Maddie, I just wanted to say thanks. For letting us stay here you know. It is really nice! I am having a wonderful time. I feel like you guys are our family. Thanks.” Said Orlando.
“Ya thanks!” said Johnny and Keira.
“Aw you guys are great!” I said as Jamie and I joined into the hug.
“Goodnight guys! See you in the morning!” I said.
“Goodnight!” replied everyone else.
Then we all fell asleep.
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Jul 24, 2007 19:16:23 GMT -5
still lovin' it!!! update agin really soon!
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