Drabble Challenge: Rachel

[missawesomeness11]

i decided to try my hand at drabble... so yeah, here goes.

Theme: "Laughter"
Couple: Orlando/Keira [+ Rhiannon, who I made up ;D]



Orlando heard a giggle coming from behind the couch. He caught Keira's eye and pointed to the sofa. She smiled and nodded.

Orlando and Keira simultaneously jumped behind the couch and shouted, "Gotcha!" The little girl squealed with delight. Orlando picked up the three-year-old and gently tossed her up into the air. He then passed her onto Keira, who sat her on the couch and began to tickle the child.

"Daddy!" the little girl squealed amid her laughter. "Daddy, help me!"

Orlando smiled as he said, "Rhiannon Marie Bloom, are you suggesting that Mummy is being mean to you?"

Gasping for breath, she choked out, "YES! Save me, Daddy, save me!"

"Rhi-Rhi, I'll save you!" Orlando proclaimed as he grabbed Keira from behind.

"Traitor!" Keira said, laughing.

"The only way to cure a tickle monster, Rhi-Rhi," Orlando told his daughter, "is to smother here with kisses!" He turned Keira around and kissed her on the forehead, on the cheeks, on the nose, and then on the lips.

"I'm cured!" Keira proclaimed proudly, turning to face her daughter. "Rhi-Rhi, Daddy saved us both!"

"Hooray!" the little girl shouted, her chocolate curls bouncing. "Now we can be one big, happy family!"

Orlando smiled, placing a hand on Keira's growing belly. He liked the sound of that.
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ok, that was my first attempt at drabble. i thought it was ok. now i wanna know what you think!

..*..Rachel..*..

[pottypirate]

awww that was so cute. can't wait til your next

[kelefenn]

Awesome, but out of all the names u know, Rhiannon? But shes (the one we know) evil. lol jk jk but seriously. lol Aesome story tho

[designerdenimx3]

cuteness!

[xstepheezy]

That was cute!

[missendicott]

So adorable! ^_^

[kelefenn]

wheres the next? lol jk jk. i know ur bussssssy

[missawesomeness11]

okay im finally updating my drabble! yay!!

Theme: Terror
Pairing: Orlando/Keira

She rocked back and forth on her cold kitchen floor. All she knew was that she was alone. Alone. So alone. She was never meant to be happy. She was supposed to be miserable; she didn't deserve true happiness. At least that's what they said.

"They" were the voices in her head, attempting to convince her that she had done the right thing. The tears that still cascaded down her cheeks and splashed onto the tiles convinced her otherwise.

Suddenly the door swung open. He glanced around the room, running his fingers absent-mindedly through his thick chocolate curls. She could see the worry and pain etched in his face. What had she done?

He caught sight of her. "Keira." He whispered her name with remorse, pity, and, worse of all, love. She didn't deserve his love.

She felt his arms wrap around her, pulling her closer to him. She should have resisted, but she knew that would only cause him more pain. She loved him too much.

Great shuddering sobs escaped her body while he held her, gently rocking her back and forth. Finally, she quieted.

"You shouldn't be here," she whispered. "Not after what I did to you." She raised her head from its comfortable resting place on his chest.

"I know you only pushed me away because you love me," he stated, caressing her tear-stained cheek. She knew it was true. She kissed his fingertips in thanks for understanding and not hating her like he should have.

"Besides," he whispered as she rested her head on his shoulder. They leaned against the cold fridge. "It's my baby too."

She nodded as she started to doze off in her boyfriend's arms. He was right. It was his baby too. Orlando would make a great father. She was sure of it.


Theme: Dad
Pairing: Orlando/Keira

Keira gave one last heave, one last cry.

"Great job!" the doctor congratulated her, holding up the screaming infant for her to see.

"Is it a boy or a girl?" she asked her husband exasperately.

Orlando wiped her forehead with a cool cloth. "A beautiful baby girl," he whispered.

Keira smiled. She grabbed Orlando's hand and gave it a squeeze. "We did it," she murmered.

He pressed his lips to her cool forehead. "You did great, honey. I love you."

"I love you too," she replied, fiddling with his fingertips.

The doctor resurfaced, holding a little infant in her arms. She gave the baby girl to Orlando. "Here's your healthy little girl!" she said. The doctor then left the two amateur parents to admire their new child.

"Oh my God," Orlando whispered.

"What?" Keira asked, alarmed. "Is something wrong with the baby?"

He shook his head. "No, she's perfect... It's just that..."

"What?"

He turned to her, misty eyed. "I just realized that I'm a dad."

Keira's face broke into a relieved smile. "Yeah, you are. And a damn good one you'll make, too."

"You think so?" he asked, gently cradling his newborn daughter.

Her smile grew wider. He was a natural. "I know so."



so whatd'ya think??
did i lose my drabble touch?, lol

Chel

[kelefenn]

Not at allllll. =]

umm wheres ur myspace?? (sorry of topic)

[missawesomeness11]

deleted, but not by me! im making a new one =]

[venus567]

awesome job!

[Trinity]

That was great, I loved them all, you did a great job ^-^

[missawesomeness11]

aww, thank-you

[Trinity]

You're very welcome dear ^-^