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Post by frida on Jul 29, 2007 19:31:47 GMT -5
Could somebody tell me how I can put my story here, I don;t know how to I would greatly apreciate if somebody could help me my e-mail is fridavaccari@hotmail.com
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Post by frida on Jul 29, 2007 22:58:40 GMT -5
I love Orlando Bloom, he is my favorite actor and I also think there is no girl prettier than Keira Knightley and they make the perfect couple and I hope that they do end up together in real life, I love pirates but I cried like crazy when will died.
I totally hate Rupert Friend and I think he is not worthy of Keira Knightley The same goes for Kate Bosworth so if you like either of them don’t read this story
English is not my first language so I apologize for the grammar errors
Here is my first attempt at an Orlando/Keira story
--------------------------------------------------------------------- Orlando Bloom walked out of him changing room after his last scene shot for the latest installment for the Pirates of the Caribbean trilogy, as he walked out he couldn’t help but think about the last five years he had been shooting the famous movies, and the great friends he had made, he thought about the fact that it was really over, the project he had been working for five years straight, he could finally take a break from all that craziness but his heart saddened for having to part from those friends he had made in so long, especially Keira Knightley, they had become great friends, almost best friends in that long time and he had fallen in love with her.
As he walked out on the porch his heart broke into a million pieces watching Keira kissing passionately her Pride & Prejudice cast-mate and current boyfriend Rupert Friend, she was smiling and whispering things in his ear, he was smiling smugly looking at Orlando as if he knew Orlando was in love with her and wanted to show her off; he wanted to march there and punch him straight in that face; he thought about telling her about his feeling but didn’t want to loose her as his friend and he was also dating someone else, he truly wasn’t in love with his current girlfriend Kate Bosworth and when he had planned about breaking up with her , she suffered from anorexia and he just couldn’t leave her alone during those moments, he was starring at the loving couple and didn’t see a blond figure approaching him.
-Hey Or ready to go- the voice spoke up -Kate, what are you doing here, I thought we were meeting in LA- he said biting his tongue and trying to put on a smile -I know but I wanted to come and see my boyfriend, I came to surprise you, aren’t you happy??-She asked pouting He tried to smile -Of course I am thrilled to see you Kate- -Oh I love you so much Orlando-she said looking at him in the eyes
He diverted his gaze to the other couple and saw them still kissing and thought how much he would love to be in Rupert’s shoes
-I love you too Keir….Kate- he finished closing his eyes scolding at his stupidity for such a dumb slip up, luckily for him Kate was too distracted to notice it -Ok, let me just go saying goodbye to Keira and the other cast- he said walking off -Or come on let’s just go-she whined -I’ll be just a sec baby- he quickly said and walked away As he approached Keira and Rupert he heard the argue and deep down smiled but soon heard her cry and got really angry -Keir come on don’t make such a big deal about this, I made a mistake and I apologized- Rupert spoke not making a big deal about it -Rupert how could you do this to me, I hate you so much-she sobbed -I explained I was drunk I am so sorry baby-he spoke up -what is going on here-Orlando spoke up letting his presence known, Keira turned to him and he clearly saw now that she was crying, all her make up was running down her cheeks and she moved to him and embraced him crying further in his shoulder. -Keir, sweetie are you okay, what happen-he asked worriedly -It’s none of your business Orlando, just get lost-Rupert spoke angry at him, approaching Keira and grabbing her wrist roughly and she cried out in pain -Take your filthy hands off her Friend or you’ll be sorry- Orlando spoke angry at him -mind your own business Bloom- he pulled Keira harder and suddenly felt himself fly to the ground after a fist impact in his face -oh come on, you idiot you broke my nose- he said angry grabbing his nose to stop the bleeding Orlando on the other side was too busy soothing Keira to listen to his whining -baby what happen, are you okay, I am here now, calm down- he whispered in her ear softly seeing as how her head was buried in his chest and her arms locked around him and holding him as he were her life raft. -he…he….-she tried to speak but couldn’t stop her tears -It’s okay you don’t have to tell me-he rubbed her back and touched her hair lightly. -Bloom I am talking to you, donkeyhole-Rupert growled and his fist impacted Orlando but he barely stumbled back a few steps for he didn’t want to disturb Keira, for she was starting to calm down. A few minutes later Keira screamed and Johnny Depp and Jack Davenport rushed in to see Orlando and Rupert struggling in the floor, Orlando’s eyebrow and lower lip were bleeding but he managed to overpower Rupert and stood up rushing to Keira’s side, Rupert on the other hand was laying on his back his nose was broken and all his face was covered in blood, one of his eyes was closed, Keira hugged Orlando again and Jack along with Johnny took Rupert and dragged him outside throwing him in the trash -exactly where he belong-Jack said and they waked to see Orlando and Keira -what happen-Johnny asked -everything’s fine now, he was just being the jackass he usually is-Orlando answered still a little angry and Jack along with Johnny walked away seeing that everything was fine again but soon Kate approached them -Or the car is ready come on- Kate spoke angry -Kate don’t you see that Keira is hurt and needs me, I won’t leave her alone-he said angry at her -Come on she is a big girl, she can take care of herself-she spoke getting annoyed -shut up Kate, you have no idea what’s going on so don’t bother, I am not leaving her you can either keep quiet and wait or show yourself out but don’t expect me to go back to you when you act like this-he said angry trying not yell at her -Fine, I’ll see you back in LA-she huffed -don’t bother we are thru-he spoke up -You don’t mean that-she said annoyingly -Yes, I do now leave- She walked away and after a few minutes he scooped Keira in his arms taking her towards his room, walked by Johnny and Jack and they both smirked and as he arrived at his room she was already asleep and lay her down on his bed and as he covered her with a blanket she whimpered -Don’t go Orli please-she begged with a broken voice that tored up Orlando’s heart He tried to smiled at her and took off his shoes and jacket and layed down on his bed next to her, she hugged him again and fell asleep with her head on his chest; a few minutes later he did too.
Continue………………………….
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Post by *Syd* on Jul 30, 2007 3:02:28 GMT -5
wow ............ can't wait for more!
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Post by pottypirate on Jul 30, 2007 5:34:28 GMT -5
dun dun dun what did Rupert do?well done Orli for punchng him. update soon
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Jul 30, 2007 14:06:48 GMT -5
ah-mazing! cant wait for the rest!!
update again soon! =]
Rachel
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Post by xstepheezy on Jul 30, 2007 14:06:58 GMT -5
Very good so far! Update please
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frida
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Post by frida on Jul 31, 2007 22:45:12 GMT -5
second chapter
Keira opened her eyes and blinked at the sudden burst of sunlight that hit her eyes, it was already morning and she looked to the side expecting to see Orlando still sleeping next to her but feared the worst when she didn’t found him “Orlando, where are you?? Come this isn’t funny” she whispered, her voice trembling and stuttering There was no answer and she called again, a few minutes went by and as she was pulling the covers off to go find him, the door swung open, she looked up to see him in a black shirt, blue jeans and a white apron on top of his clothes also a chef hat on his head, as he saw her awake he smiled at her and showed her the tray he had in his hands “Hey there sleeping beauty, how did you sleep” he spoke in a cheery tone “I woke up and I couldn’t find you, I was scared” she replied still shaken up “I am so sorry, I got up early and wanted to fix you something to eat so I thought to myself, what better to cheer up someone than “breakfast a la Bloom” he told her smiling and placed the tray on her lap and lifting the lid of the various plates. “Orange juice freshly squeezed as I know you love it, scrambled eggs with ham and cheese, French toast, pancakes with butter and blueberry syrup, bacon, sausage and two bagels with cream cheese, hot chocolate also two glasses of healthy milk” he finished taking a sip of one of the glasses and she laughed when she saw he had a milk mustache “Come here, you have made a mess of yourself” she said taking a napkin and cleaning his upper lip, he smiled gratefully and looked towards their breakfast “I wonder... Did you bring the whole kitchen up here??” she asked with an unbelievable look on her face but nonetheless smiling “And the cherry on top” he said taking out a dvd from an envelope and placed it on the TV, after a few seconds of anxiousness from Keira to see what he had brought her, the first scene of Pirates of the Caribbean: At world’s popped on screen and gave him a loving smile “I know, Jerry lend me the unedited copy of the movie after much persuasion” he smirked “You, Orlando Jonathan Blanchard Bloom are the best friend a girl could have” she told him moving the tray aside and hugging him tightly closing her eyes and breathing in his perfume , he smiled like a true friend would but his face saddened at the comment of just being her friend.
They ate slowly and were commenting on the movie, laughing at a few moments and the bloopers that were not cut out yet, Orlando stood up and tried to copy Keira’s scene “Oh Will please don’t leave me” he spoke in his best girlish voice and was met with a bagel to his face “Ha-ha very funny” she tried to look mad but his face was priceless when she threw him the bagel, he fell to the floor “Oh you’ve killed me Knightley” he agonized on the floor and closed his eyes but taking a peek which was caught by Keira “Oh come on get up, you are acting like a kid” she stood up and help him up but he pulled her down and started ticking her “Lando come on stop, you know I am very ticklish” she couldn’t stop laughing and after a few minutes he stopped and helped her up, they sat down on the bed again to finished watching the movie but he just looked at her “Wanna tell me what happen with ass-face Friend, it might help or if you wish I’ll go kick his ass again” he asked looking at her straight in the eye and tried to bring another smile to her face She looked down and as he was about to give up and change the subject she spoke in a whisper “He wanted to be honest and told me that while we were here finishing the movie he went to a few parties and had I great time, that I had no problem with, also he got drunk and cheated on me with a model, they slept together not once but a few times and he had the nerve to tell me that, he expected me to get over it in time and hoped that we could start our relationship over, he said I had it coming because I wouldn’t sleep with him, he thought I had been cheating on him with you so he wanted to get even by cheating too, I told him we were nothing more than just friends he apologized and wanted me to forget all about it” she started tearing up again “Oh sweetie, next time I see him I’ll kill him, if I didn’t hate him before I do now, well I hate him more than before” he hugged her as a few tears came down her cheeks “I don’t think I’ll ever be able to forgive him, he is such as donkeyhole” she spoke in between tears Orlando closed his eyes and his heart broke as he gave her advice on love “At the risk of making a fool of myself I’ll tell you that If you love him, you’ll find in your heart to forgive him” he touched her hair to sooth her “I care about him a lot, I wanted to love him but we haven’t been together that long, I wanted to fall in love with him to forget about the one who I am really in love with” she said moving her face from his chest and looking at him straight in the eyes “Well there you go, dump the stupid git and go after the one you really love, I never liked him anyways and the cast couldn’t stand him either” he smirked as he looked at her and got lost in her eyes “And you just think to tell me this now” she joked poking him in the chest He stuck his tongue out to her “So I recall Kate yelling last night, I don’t recall how she came to be here I remember her annoying little voice?” she asked frowning, racking her brain trying to remember the events from the previous night “Yeah, she wanted to leave right away and was making a fuss because I didn’t wanna leave you alone, threw a tantrum and left” he explained looking somewhere other than her eyes “Oh I am sorry, should I talk to her for you” she asked frowning at the thought, but trying to be a friend for Orlando “Naaa, don’t worry about it, our relationship was over much before last night, I care about her but I just stayed with her to support her thru her treatment but this, it’s just too much, the last straw, she’s been acting way too jealous and couldn’t stand when I hanged out with you” he tried to smile at her “I am sorry” she half smiled “Don’t be, I am fine, I just hope she will be too” he said only now thinking of what Kate must be doing “You’ll find someone else, I am sure” she said touching his hand lightly, looking at him straight in the eyes he diverted his gaze back to the tv as the scene were they get married and kiss was just playing, she looked that way too and blushed at her thought. They looked at each other, neither saying anything just feeling comfortable with each other’s company; he then remember her comment a few seconds ago and looked up to answer it but was caught in her eyes but his in a flash dropped to her lips. “I surely hope so” he whispered still looking at her lips finding it hard to tear his eyes from them, they were his definition of perfection, he felt bewitched by her beauty, finally managing to looked at eyes he felt he could drown on the brown pools that were her eyes, he unconsciously approached her not being able to resist the urge to kiss her, his heart beating loudly on his chest, as he got close he noticed that she came a little bit closer to him , they were so close she could feel his warm breath on her lips ,she licked hers expectantly and closed her eyes half blushing and half waiting for the kiss she had been dreaming for so long.
To be Continue……………………..
So cliffhanger now, I hope you all like it, I hope to get many reviews and I apologize for any grammar mistakes, as I have told you before English is not my first language and I do my best
Frida Vaccari
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Post by pottypirate on Aug 1, 2007 3:47:50 GMT -5
awww that was great. update real soon
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Aug 1, 2007 9:57:02 GMT -5
amazingness!! cant wait for the next update!!
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Post by frida on Aug 9, 2007 9:27:01 GMT -5
I don't think many people is intrested in this story which makes me think maybe you guys don't like and i am wondering if i should continue it
Frida Vaccari
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Aug 10, 2007 20:02:22 GMT -5
i am very interested! please continue!!! please?
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Post by *Syd* on Aug 11, 2007 4:05:01 GMT -5
no please continue. please
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Post by becky on Aug 12, 2007 10:54:28 GMT -5
Hey this story is really really good.don't worry about that not much read this stroy at the beginning it is often so....so please keep on with this story......
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Post by frida on Sept 19, 2007 23:32:53 GMT -5
I apologize for the lack of update, I know its been almost two months since I posted the last chapter but I was so busy with university and then there was an earthquake here in Peru and it just took me a long time to type the new chapter.
Previously on A love that lasts forever
They were so close she could feel his warm breath on her lips; she licked hers expectantly and closed her eyes half blushing and half waiting for the kiss she had been dreaming for so long.
As she leaned closer and their lips met both were smiling on the inside thinking this was what they wanted, but as fast as their lips met Keira broke the contact and stood up in a hurry gathering her things from the floor and speaking very fast
“ I am sorry Lando I shouldn’t have done that, Rupert and I just broke up, I know you are still hung up on Kate and here I come trying to confuse you even more” she walked to the door but Orlando stood up and with long strides got to the door first blocking her way out
“Lando please just let me go” she whispered looking down not daring to look at him in the eye but missing his mischievous, he brought his hands to her chin lifting her face so her eyes would meet his, hers were full of confusion and he brought their lips together for yet another kiss, she wrapped her arms around his neck, this one lasted a little longer, both tasting what the other felt like, as the kiss grew passionate she tangled her fingers in his hair loving how it felt, his hands rested on her hips, he softly moved pushing her towards the bed still kissing, they layed there unable to keep their lips away from each other’s.
They were so wrapped up in the kiss that didn’t feel the knock on the door followed by two men bursting in
“Orlando we can’t find Keira……..” Johnny trailed off as he witness the scene and smirked
Jack cleared his throat to acknowledge the couple of their presence.
Orlando and Keira broke apart to find their unexpected guests there and Keira blushed
“Guys have you ever heard of knocking maybe?” he asked a little angry that they interrupted his make out session with Keira
“We knocked but you two were too preoccupied to notice us” Jack also smiled as he answered
Keira blushed a deeper shade of red
“Did you guys came here for something or you just came to bother my girl here” he said looking mad at them
“We were just looking for Keira, she was supposed to meet us in the lobby, when she didn’t show we got worried and came to ask you if you had seen her and apparently you have been keeping her busy huh”
“Ok well go away now before she dies of embarrassment, you can see she’s fine” Orlando spoke to his friends
“We’ll go, we didn’t mean to interrupt” Jack said dragging a smirking Johnny with him closing the door as they exited
“Well that was embarrassing” Keira spoke regaining her voice after both guys left
“They’ll forget it in a while if not I have a few things I can blackmail Johnny for our sakes” he gave her a goofy smile and she couldn’t help but smile too
“Did you mean what you said to them” she asked suddenly
“About??” he asked confused at the sudden burst
“You said I was your girl” she spoke blushing yet again
“If you want it, I want to be with you Keira but if you rather be alone I’d understand and I’ll always be your best friend” he told her looking directly in her eyes
She lunged herself at him and hugged him
“I do Lando, I want to be with you too” she leaned in and kiss him softly on the lips
He smiled and spins her around in his arms
“so let’s make this formal” he got down on one knee” Keira Christina Knightley would you like to be my girlfriend??” he asked with a smile on his face
“ I don’t know, I need so time to think about it” she teased him
“Keira” he scowled
“I was just messing with you Bloom, I already answered that I do want to be your girlfriend”
He kissed her yet again but before it could turn too passionate she broke the kiss
“What, what, what” he spoke in a hurry not wanting to stop kissing her
“ we have to go to Jerry’s room remember, the meeting, we can come back and make out all you want later love” she said trying to stand up but her legs felt like jelly after all of the previous event
“I think we can miss one” he said putting his arms around her waist and pulling her to him
“ Lando come on we have to, it’s the last one, come on we’ll come back here to pick up where we left off” she smirked as this time she did stand and hold her hand to him, reluctantly he stood and took her hand and his; smiling blissfully the couple walked out of the room and headed to Jerry’s.
As they walked down the hallway they passed a few cast and crewmates also heading that way; when they got to the room they door was open an as they walked in they heard Johnny singing
“Orlando and Keira sitting in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G” Jack joined him a few second later
“Ok enough is enough” Orlando said acting angry, Keira turned to him “don’t mind them honey, they are acting so childlike” she said trying not to blush
Suddenly her cell-phone rang
“Hello” she asked
“Rupert we are thru leave me alone, listen to me just for once please” she spoke getting angry
“Keira just look out the window please” he begged as she closed her cell and approach the window along with everyone in the room to see planes in the sky and parachutes holding a huge billboard that said “ Keira Knightley will you marry me” and Rupert was on the entrance of the hotel waiting for her answer.
“Oh my gosh this is not happening! I am going to be sick” she said feeling lightheaded and rushed to the bathroom and sounds of her throwing up echoed thorough the room
“Kier, sweetie, are you okay?” Orlando asked rushing to the door
There was so answer and when he was about to break the door to come in she came out and he enveloped her in a hug
“Lando what am I going to do now” she cried out
“Do you want to marry him” Orlando asked fearing her answer
“I don’t know, I am not sure, I think a part of me does” she cried
Continue……………………………..
I hope you guys like it, tell me what you think or want to happen I will take it in consideration, I will try my best to update soon and not wait another two months for a little time to type
Frida Vaccari
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Post by alleblack on Sept 20, 2007 0:02:03 GMT -5
Hey, didn't you post this on fanfiction.net? The reviewers were really rude, something about breaking a rule? Well, I think that it is a great story and you should definetely continue!
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Sept 20, 2007 15:20:29 GMT -5
yes i agree! continue!!! saw it on fanfic.net also... they were sooo rude. not all of them, mind you, but some. i love this story though =]
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Post by venus567 on Sept 28, 2007 15:12:04 GMT -5
great job! yeah usually they don't allow fics with actual celebs as the main characters on fanfiction.net.
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Post by frida on Nov 5, 2007 15:17:13 GMT -5
I apologize for the lack of update but I had exams and I wanted to update afterwards but I had surgery so I couldn't do much for a while, i hope i can have it up soon because i feel better now
Frida Vaccari
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Post by venus567 on Nov 5, 2007 19:06:19 GMT -5
feel better soon! ;D
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Nov 6, 2007 16:09:52 GMT -5
yeah feel better!! and dont feel bad about updating; i have TWO stories on hiatus as we speak, lol. damn writers block!! but you sound very busy... wish i had that excuse
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