elmira
Reaching for Stars
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Post by elmira on Nov 7, 2007 5:32:31 GMT -5
Further!!! I ask you, very good story, such romantic and grasping!!!
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Post by orlando&keira4ever on Nov 8, 2007 4:54:30 GMT -5
Your story is amazing. I hope you feel better soon.
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Maddie
Reaching for Stars
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Post by Maddie on Nov 24, 2007 3:11:36 GMT -5
i love this story it is fantastic! your english is great for someone whos first language isnt english! i hope your feeling better soon, would love to see an update when your better!
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frida
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Post by frida on Dec 30, 2007 19:08:10 GMT -5
Ok I officially suck, it took me more than two months to update, even though I had surgery its not excuse enough, I have to apologize again Ok onto the next chapter, I won't bore you with excuses
Previously: “Lando what am I going to do now” she cried out “Do you want to marry him” Orlando asked fearing her answer “I don’t know, I am not sure, I think a part of me does” she cried and Now
Chapter 4
Everyone left the room quickly as to give them privacy, Orlando’s heart broke seeing the girl he loved in so much turmoil and even though it tore his heart up he made a difficult choice and slowly as if wishing something were to stop his unstoppable fate, as he reached her, she was on her knees in the carpet, her eyes on the floor and her cheeks were covered in tears, he got on his knees next to her and hugged her tightly and she breathed in relief, he wiped the tears from her cheeks and lift her face to meet his eyes, which were filled with love and devotion and a little self doubt -Keir I love you, I will handle any choice you make, if you really want to get back together with him then do, before anything else I am your friend and I want what’s best for you, just think about it- he spoke softly and pressed a soft kiss in her forehead and stood up to leave her think by herself, he shuffled his feet all the way to the door in hopes that she would stop him and tell him that she was going to choose him but he reached it and closed it without interruptions and leaned back on the door and closed his eyes, a lonely tear made way down in cheek but he quickly wiped it away and putting a strong face walked back to his room, as he left Johnny walked into the room to check on the couple and was surprised to find Keira alone crying on the floor
-Keira, where is Orlando???- -He left saying I should think by myself about what I wanted- she got out between sobs He reached out to her and hugged her and she cried even harder -I know it must seem like everything is bad but maybe this is good, just stay here and think about your feelings for Orlando and Rupert, don’t rush yourself, if you love Rupert then go ahead and marry him, I know that Orlando will still be your friend but you will have to let him forget you, but if there is even a small chance that what you feel for Orlando is stronger than what you feel for Rupert then go right now and talk to him because he is more than worth of your love, he has loved you for so long but was willing to be just your friend seeing that it was what you needed, he is a great guy, but you have to make a choice- he said while wiping the tears of her cheeks -I don’t want to hurt anybody Johnny- she sobbed -No matter what you do somebody is going to her hurt, the important thing is that you follow your heart or it’s not going to be only one heart broken but yours as well- he said helping her into a chair and touching her shoulder in comfort and giving her a warm smile, he then walked out of the room giving her space to think.
Keira was heartbroken, she loved Orlando, he was just everything she had always wanted in a guy but deep down was scared of how much she loved him, he could crush her heart with a few words, she had never felt that before and it was scary for her also the thought that she had been with Rupert for nearly three years, everybody thought she was going to end up marrying him and for a while that’s what she wanted, he was there saying everything she always wanted him to say, being the guy she always wanted him to be but it just wasn’t enough anymore but it was expected of them to get married, her heart was in turmoil she wasn’t sure what to choose and after almost an hour of sitting still in Jerry’s room she stood up bracing herself for what was going to be the hardest decision of her life.
Meanwhile as Johnny walked out of Jerry’s room having left Keira a little calmer he walked to the elevator and into Orlando’s room only to find him with a bag on his bed packing -What do you think you are doing man- he asked - I can’t do this to her Johnny, I love her too much to have her going thru this heartache, I have been thru this before and it tore my heart apart, I just can’t handle her tears being my fault, the only thing I can do is leave, I’ll come back when things are settled, I hope that is before the premiere, I can’t bare to watch her suffer for me, I am removing myself from this equation, the only thing I want is for her to be happy even if its not with me- he finished looking down but not crying -oh come on, that is the worst you could do, she needs you right now, you can’t run away, this is…..- he started but was cut short by Orlando -don’t, just stop what your saying, you can’t know what I am feeling so don’t try to talk me out of this just tell her that I love her and want her to be happy and I will always be her friend- he said closing his bag and lifting it from the bed. -You are ruining her chance at happiness by leaving man- -Don’t make this harder please man- he asked -Fine, I won’t interfere but please wherever you are going, let me know when you get there I don’t want to worry- he smiled at Orlando -I’ll call when I get home- he returned the smiled but it didn’t reach his eyes With one last look at the room and at Johnny he walked out of the room with his bag on his shoulder
Keira walked out of Jerry’s room and to the elevator with a serious look on her face and went down to the lobby to see Rupert, as she got out of the elevator she saw him there smiling at her with that cocky grin he always had when he was sure of something and she approached him smiling too -Keira, baby I love you- he kissed her and the reporters took pictures, unfortunately Orlando was also getting out of the elevator to witness the love scene between them and lowered his eyes he headed to the door in a hurry to avoid more pain Keira pushed away from the kiss and frowned -Don’t ever do that again you arrogant, cocky, jerk- she slapped him - I could never marry you Rupert, I don’t love you get that thru your thick head, if there was a time I would have said yes, it was before found out you cheated on me, that is the lowest thing a man can do, you aren’t worthy of me, I deserve someone who loves me for who I am and what I want to do, so take your filthy hands of me jerk- she spoke angrily for everything he had put her thru and took the ring from his hand and threw it at his face followed by a second slap, afterwards she turned around heading towards the elevator being followed by the press, she passed Johnny on her way there who was just getting out of the elevator and he smiled sadly at her and stopped the reported from getting in the lift as she pressed it to close and smiled happily thinking of what she had done and her heart flutter at the thought of going to see Orlando to tell him that she loved him and she wanted to be with him forever nothing would stand in their way now, as she got out and walked to Orlando’s room the butterflies in her stomach were stronger and she reached for the door to open it, scared and thrilled at the same time at what was about to happen and she turned the doorknob and pushed it open she saw it empty. Continue…….. Ok not really a cliffhanger but I felt it was a good ending for this chapter, tell me what you thought of it and I will try to get the next one soon seeing as how I am on summer vacation, if you have any ideas as to what you think should happen next, they will be greatly appreciated
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Dec 30, 2007 20:00:35 GMT -5
idears... idears... not any at this very moment, but i will rack my brains for some =] fantabulous as usual, hon =]]]] keep up the goooodddd work!!!! and dont worry bout the update thing, been there done that =]
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Post by orlando&keira4ever on Jan 2, 2008 2:05:36 GMT -5
Great update! I loved it. ;D But ideas... not any right now. I'll try to think about it, but no promises.
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Post by *Syd* on Jan 2, 2008 14:30:32 GMT -5
fantastic. i love it!
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Post by charlottelovingok on Jan 4, 2008 14:34:56 GMT -5
Please update soon! I love it!
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Post by snowbird on Feb 21, 2010 12:10:17 GMT -5
I really love this story! Glad that Johnny was there as a Voice Of Reason! Please, continue!
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