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Post by orlando&keira4ever on Apr 6, 2008 8:05:38 GMT -5
Well, this is my first fanfiction, I’ve ever written. I don’t know is it good or not, so only you can tell me At first, huge sorry, because my English isn’t as good as I wish it would be, but I’m trying hard to do my best. So, here’s the prologue of it. Please tell me, should I continue or not and what do you think about it. If you’ll like it, I’ll try to update it as soon as I can. I don’t know is the title of the story good, so please tell me if you have any ideas about the title ;D What else can I say – simply enjoy _______________________________________________________________
LISTEN TO YOUR HEART
Prologue Keira stand in front of the mirror, in the shop. She has already tried about 10 wedding-dresses today and no one of them wasn’t good enough. She has been looking for a wedding-dress at least for two months and there were only two months left until her wedding day.
“This dress is perfect for you Miss Knightley, or should I say Mrs. Friend?” said the woman, who helped Keira choose the dress, she’s wearing at the moment.
“Guess you’re right. And better call me “Miss Knightley”. After all, I’m not married yet,” Keira replied.
“Of course, Miss. I’m sorry,” said the shop girl.
“That’s alright,” smiled Keira.
The dress, she’s wearing at the moment, look really nice and it was perfect to her. However, Keira wasn’t sure about buying it. She was quite sure, she won’t find anything better, but… The major problem was the marriage itself. Keira wasn’t sure, whether she’d made the right decision about marriage with Rupert. He loves her, that’s true, but… Does she love him? “Of course, I do,” she thought to herself, “I won’t marry him, if don’t love him, right?”.
“So, would you like to buy this dress, Miss Knightley?” asked the woman and waked Keira from her thoughts.
“What?.. Oh, yes, course. I’ll buy it,” Keira replied quickly.
“Great. I’ll pack it for you, Miss,” said the women and went to cash desk.
Keira followed her. Now she finally has her wedding-dress. That was the best thing today, but she knew that all her joy vanishes, when she’ll reach her house and meet Rupert. He’ll make scene and they’ll start arguing once again. Why? She didn’t know. Maybe, because she come home too late, or because he’ll simply be in bad mood. After all, she didn’t care. They have been fighting since he proposed. At first, Keira thought that everything’s going to be fine soon, but she was wrong once again. “Two people, who love each other and someday gonna get married, don’t fight everyday because of some kind of foolishness.” Orlando once told her, when they were talking about her relationships with Rupert, and now she understood he was right. _____________________________________________________________________Thanks a lot for reading my writings ;D Hope, you’ve enjoyed it. Rugile
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Post by becky on Apr 7, 2008 6:49:19 GMT -5
hey that is a great beginning dear.. hope you will continue.. =)
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Post by Trinity on Apr 7, 2008 14:48:43 GMT -5
That was a great story, I can't wait to read more, hope you update soon ^__^
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Post by orlando&keira4ever on Apr 9, 2008 7:49:15 GMT -5
Becky and Trinity, thanks a lot for such nice reviews. You inspired to write further ;D So here’s next update. I want to notice one thing: I don’t know is Orlando still dating with Miranda Kerr (hope – no ), but in my story she’s his girlfriend (till he gets together with Keira, of course ;D). Hope, you’ll enjoy it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________
Chapter One. Meeting in the rain
Rain was falling heavily down the dirty streets of London. Orlando was walking in the rain for at least few hours. He always liked the rain, especially when he was in bad mood, just like this time. Miranda wanted to spend all day with him, but he had other plans. When she told him, that he don’t love her at all and spends all time with his friends and co-stars. She also asked him to choose her or his friends. That was too much for Orlando. He had once sworn to himself, that he never dates a woman, who wants him to choose her or his friends.
However, he understood that them both (him and Miranda) need some time to think about everything, they’ve told to each other and be a little away from one another.
Now he needed someone, who could understand him, someone, who could tell him what he should do. And he knew, who’s that someone. But he didn’t know where is she. He hasn’t seen her for two or three months. He had just heard and read some articles and rumors about her life. He heard that she’s going to get married. He always wished her luck, but… deep in his heart Orlando wanted, that this won’t be truth. He knew that might sound selfish or jealous, but he was sure she won’t be happy with guy such as Rupert. He wasn’t good enough for her. No one was.
Suddenly, Orlando hit to someone’s body.
“Hey, watch where are you going!” shouted the familiar voice.
“Keira?! It’s you?” Orlando looked surprised.
“Orlando! It’s so nice to see you! I haven’t seen you for ages,” she started smiling from ear to ear.
“Me too. What are you doing here?” he asked smiling.
“Well… I’m not sure… I’ve just had a little fight with Rupert once again,” her voice sounded sad.
“Really? What happened?” a little spark of worry showed in Orlando’s eyes.
“Nothing unusual. It’s all my fault. I wanted invite some friends of mine and he was in bad mood, so…” tears showed in her eyes.
“Don’t cry, it’s not your fault. You have right to see your friends whenever you want and he has no right to not allow you do that,” he looked straight into her eyes.
“I suppose, you’re right, but let’s talk about something else right now. We’ve just met and I started talk about my problems with Rupert. How silly I am! Better, tell me about you. I thought you’re in L.A. When did you come to London? And why you didn’t tell me this?” Keira wiped her eyes and tried to smile.
“I’m terribly sorry, Miss Knightley, that I haven’t told you this. I’m here since last weekend. I simply was tired of L.A.,” Orlando replied, “Would you ever forgive me?” he added.
“Let me think, Mr. Bloom. No promises, but I’ll try,” she smiled back at him.
The rain finally stopped. They both were extremely wet, but happy. Keira finally forgot her problems with Rupert and Orlando stopped thinking about Miranda.
“Wanna have a walk?” Orlando asked.
“Of course,” Keira replied.
He took her hand and they started walking through the wet streets of London. Hand in hand, smiling and laughing. Anyone, who saw them, could swear that they looked like lovers. ____________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank for great reviews once again. Hope, you've enjoyed this update. All suggestions and ideas are very welcome Thanks a lot for reading my story. I'll try to update soon Rugile
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Reaching for Stars
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Post by elmira on Apr 9, 2008 14:18:00 GMT -5
It is magnificent!!!! When I , I was the happiest person in the world and I cried with happiness if Keira and Orlando would become together and so somewhat quicker!! Thanks you big is surprisingly and is more tremendous! I wait for CONTINUATION!!!! You the best!
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Post by elmira on Apr 9, 2008 14:19:12 GMT -5
P.S. "When I read!")) Sorry!)
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Post by Trinity on Apr 10, 2008 19:45:57 GMT -5
That was great, I loved it and I can't wait for the next chapter. This was really good ^__^
Oh and you can call me Zoe ^-^
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Post by orlando&keira4ever on Apr 16, 2008 9:08:57 GMT -5
At first, Zoe and Elmira thanks a lot for great reviews. You always inspired me to write further ;D so thank you Secondly, I thought that I can update story earlier but I had an English exam on Monday (thanks God, I passed it ) but then I've got some problems with my PC and after all I'm extremely happy, cause everything is finally alright (HOORAY!!!) so I can present you next update Enjoy __________________________________________________________________
Chapter Two. Hurt When Keira came home, Rupert wasn’t there, so she had enough time to change her wet clothes, have a hot bath and so on. When he finally showed up, Keira was watching "Fellowship of the Ring”.
“Hello sweetie,” said Rupert and smiled politely at her.
“Hi, darling,” Keira tried to smile too, but her good mood has gone away since Rupert entered into the house.
“What have you been doing since I went? Hope, it wasn’t very boring for you to wait me.”
“No, don’t worry. It was quite fun, I must say. At first, I had a walk and met Orlando. Can you imagine, he’s in London since last weekend?” Keira said.
“After all, I wasn’t waiting for you,” she thought to herself.
“Orlando? You’re talking about Bloom, right?” Rupert raised his voice a little bit.
“Yes. Who else? We talked for a while. I think, we must invite him for a dinner sometime, what do you think?” Keira was sure that Rupert really doesn’t want this but she always liked to tease him.
“Well, I don’t know, darling, our weddings is very soon and we have a lot of things to do but if you really want to invite him, I don’t mind,” he tried hard to not to lose his self-control.
“Oh, thank you,” Keira replied.
“What a hell happened to him? I was sure he hates Orlando but… people might change their selves sometimes,” she thought to herself.
“By the way, you’ve been watching “LOTR” once again,” he asked.
“Yes. Why are you asking? It’s great movie. You should watch it someday.”
“It’s great, because Bloom is in it,” his voice sounded jealously.
“Oh, please don’t start again. I like this movie and that’s all.”
“But you’re watching it because of that f*****g Bloom!“ Rupert started to shout.
“Why are you jealous? He’s just my friend! Why are you always jealous?” tears showed in her eyes.
“Why? Don’t you understand? I love you very much but you… you always flirt with your co-stars, even if I’m with you. Now we’re going to get married but sometimes… don’t know how to say… sometimes I start thinking that you don’t love at all!” he kept shouting.
Keira couldn’t keep listening, her eyes filled with tears. She ran to her bedroom and shut the door behind her. She buried her head in her pillow and started to cry.
She has never felt so hurt before. He didn’t trust her at all! That was so unfair for Keira. She was always faithful for him but he couldn’t see this.
He took care just about his life, he never listened to her and he didn’t want to let Keira go out with her friends. He wanted that she spend all her time with him. He got jealous without any reason.
But when he proposed… when he asked her to marry him, she forgot everything he’s done and told her. She just wanted to start everything from the very beginning. She thought, she finally will be happy with him, because he promised her that he’ll change himself, he won’t be so jealous, he’ll listen to her and let her go out with her friends. He promised her everything: stars from the sky, the most beautiful flowers from earth that she’ll accept to marry him. And she accepted… They started to get ready for the weddings. Keira was in cloud nine but not for long. He kept all of his promises for a few weeks, when everything came back wrong. He couldn’t, it’s better to say – he didn’t want to change himself. A few weeks long fairytale ended so fast, just like it started.
Keira kept all these things deep in her heart and finally they all burst out. She wanted leave everything behind her, forget Rupert and start a new life with a new person but there was something that hold her. Maybe she was too responsible that she could just cancel and leave everything. But now she really understood that she isn’t to blame in all this mess. ______________________________________________________________________Thanks a lot for reading my writing I'll try to update soon. Suggestions and ideas are very welcome Rugile
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Post by becky on Apr 17, 2008 9:45:50 GMT -5
heya. great update =). I wonder that I missed the last one. I'm really interessted in that what will happen next.
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Post by Trinity on Apr 17, 2008 12:48:30 GMT -5
Yay a new update, this was so great but I feel so sorry for Keira for been feeling all this things and Rupert is just a jerk for been so mean to her.
I'm glad you passed on your English exam, congrats ^__^
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Reaching for Stars
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Post by elmira on Apr 18, 2008 13:13:39 GMT -5
Oh!!! Has well written!!! Soon there Orlando to appear!! I wait continuation!!!! The good fellow, me so to like it!!!
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Apr 21, 2008 16:32:19 GMT -5
this. is. amazing. not kidding. it makes me smile :] cant wait for the next update! keep writing
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Post by orlando&keira4ever on Apr 30, 2008 8:59:59 GMT -5
Rachel, I'm so glad my writings made you smile ;D *proud* Thanks a lot for all great reviews, they make me smile I'm in very good mood today, cause I finally find time to update the story (HOORAY!!!). You deserved it Here's new update. Enjoy ____________________________________________________________________
Chapter Three. True Love Will Find A Way
Orlando reached his apartments in very good mood. He have already forgotten run-in with Miranda. She was waiting for him.
“Hello, sweetheart,” she said cheerily, “At first, I want to apology. I’m sorry for that I’ve told you this morning. I know that your friends are very important for you and I have no right to force you choose your friends or me.”
“Hi, Miranda. Don’t worry about our little misunderstanding this morning. I had a thought about it, and now I understand that I should spend more time with you. After all, we’re dating,” he replied.
“Yeah... we’re really dating,” she started grin from ear to ear, “you know, darling, my parents are coming to London this weekend.”
“So?” Orlando was bit surprised.
“So, I persuaded them to stay at our home. That would be a great reason for you to meet them. They’re great people, I’m pretty sure, you’ll love them.”
“And they accepted, right?” Orlando tried hard not look angry or disappointed.
“Of course they did! Mum can’t wait to finally meet you,” she grinned.
“Why you didn’t tell me this earlier?”
“I tried to but your cell-phone was turned off! But better follow me. I’ve made something special for us,” she looked proudly.
Orlando nodded. Miranda took his hand and went in the living room. Everything there seemed to be very romantic. Candles, flowers, wine and other “cheap” lovers’ stuff. She was heading straight to the small tea table, covered with red roses. There were two glasses and a bottle of red wine.
“You like my surprise?” she asked in excited voice.
“It’s really beautiful, luv,” he answered politely.
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Next morning Keira woke at almost 11 o’clock. She wanted to sleep longer but her cell phone was ringing fifth time that morning so she couldn’t sleep, never mind how much she wanted. The caller was her mother. Keira understood that she won’t call five times so “early” (to Keira) in the morning without any important reason.
“Hi mum. Why you called me so early?” said Keira sleepily.
“Good morning, Miss Knightley. Early? It’s almost 11 o’clock! Keira, you must to be in the restaurant an hour ago! Don’t tell me, you forgot this,” replied her mother. Her voice sounded bit angry.
“That’s not funny, mum. I know that I must be in the restaurant at 10 but definitely not today, because I’m sure that the 14th is tomorrow,” said Keira. She tried to laugh.
“You’re wrong, darling. The 14th is today. By the way, I still don’t understand why you’re not here ‘cause Rupert came exactly at 10. Why he didn’t take you with him?”
“I don’t know, mum. Don’t worry, I’ll get to the restaurant in five minutes” said Keira and dropped the phone.
She dressed up extremely quickly, grabbed the keys and left her house.
Luckily, the restaurant wasn’t far away from her apartments. It was the one of the most popular places to celebrate weddings in London, especially with celebrities. However, celebrating there always means a giant fest with tons of guests and paparazzi. Keira never wanted this kind of celebration. She always dreamed about quiet fest, just with family members and closest friends in some beautiful place far away from civilization and paparazzi of course. Celebrating in popular restaurant was Rupert’s idea. That’s why he invited all brightest nowadays celebrities. Some of them Keira didn’t ever know. She hasn’t seen the full guest list yet.
When she got to the restaurant, it was 10 past 11.
“Miss Knightley, how lovely to see you,” said Rupert, who met Keira at the front door. His voice sounded ironically, “I think, you should know that we’re almost finished dealing with the administrator. She thinks that’s very rude from you not to come.”
“Don’t lie, Friend. Hello Keira,” Sienna Miller showed up.
“Sienna, so nice to see you,” Keira greeted her friend.
“Me too Keir... Me too. Better go inside, everyone’s waiting for you,” Sienna replied smiling.
“Why are you talking with her like this, Rupert? You’re going to marry, you should love each other, not fight,” she added, when Keira went into the restaurant.
“I love her but she doesn’t love me,” he said in malicious voice and followed Keira.
Sienna stayed there for a while.
“He’s right, she doesn’t love him. Never mind what will happen, her heart will always belong to pirate. Even if she gets married with Rupert, true love will find a way,” she said silently. ______________________________________________________________________Try update soonish ;D
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Post by elmira on Apr 30, 2008 12:17:04 GMT -5
Oh... Surprisingly! To me very much like!!! So all is beautifully described, romanticism!!! I wait for continuation!!!! This just fine!
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Post by Trinity on Apr 30, 2008 17:13:46 GMT -5
This was great, so good and she is so right, true love will find a way no doubt about that ^-^
Great update once again and I can't wait to read more, this is just amazing.
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Post by missawesomeness11 on May 4, 2008 19:22:59 GMT -5
again, another wondeful chapter. :] cant wait for the next update!!
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Post by orlando&keira4ever on May 23, 2008 8:54:49 GMT -5
Thanks a lot for great reviews They always made my day. I must apology that I haven't update the story for a while. Hope you aren't very angry After all, there's the new update and the last one till I get back from holiday. I'm going to Barcelona for 2 weeks. I promise I try to find sometime and keep writing. Enjoy ;D _________________________________________________________
Chapter Four. Invitation
It took about 20 minutes and Keira finished talking with management of restaurant. They were really nice and Keira started thinking that Rupert’s idea celebrate their weddings here wasn’t so bad at all. She was ready to go home but Sienna stopped her.
“Hey, Kei. You’re free now, right?” asked she.
“Yes. Why are you asking?”
“Well, we really need to talk.”
“OK. What’s wrong?”
“I think we should go somewhere else because there’re some people who might be very interested in our conversation.”
“You mean Rupert?” Keira asked smiling, “I agree. We could go to the park. There shouldn’t be a lot of people at this moment so we’ll be able to have some privacy.”
“OK.”
Both girls went to the park and sat on one of the empty benches.
“What do you want to talk about?” started Keira.
“At first, I want to say that you’re my friend and I wish only the best to you,” Sienna replied. Her voice was shaking a bit.
“I know this. There’s no need to telling me this. I trust you.”
“Kei, I think you’re making a terrible mistake right now,” Sienna took a deep breath, “You don’t love him. Why are you doing this?”
“I don’t understand you, Sienna. You, better than others, know, that I love him,” Keira tried to look certainly.
“Please, stop lying. I know you too well. Do you really want to ruin your life?”
“Ruin my life!? What are you talking about, Sienna? I’m going to marry the man I love and you’re telling me that I am gonna ruin my life?” Keira raised her voice. However, deep in her heart she knew that Sienna was right.
“Stop shouting and listen to me. Why do you give up? I know you love Orlando. You have always loved him. Since first Pirates. He loves you too,” Sienna wanted that her friend finally face this to herself.
“How could you know? He’s dating with Miranda Kerr,” tears showed in Keira’s eyes.
“So you agree that you love him?” Sienna smiled.
“I didn’t say so,” Keira replied and they both started laughing.
“Now you finally face it. That means you’re gonna fight for him?”
“I can’t. I’ll marry Rupert,”
“You should try… to do something before it’s too late.”
“It’s already too late,” said Keira and started crying.
“Oh, Kei…” Sienna hugged her.
They both were sitting on the bench in the empty park. Neither of them said a word.
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“I love you, Or,” Miranda moved closer to him.
“Me too,” Orlando smiled to her.
“I’m so glad we finally found some time to be together.”
“Yeah…”
Miranda tried to kiss his lips but Orlando moved and stood up.
“Is there anything wrong?” Miranda asked confusedly.
“No, nothing.”
“So why you don’t let me kiss you?” she stood up and keep asking.
“I’m really sorry, luv. I just feel bit tired.”
“But Or,” Miranda was close to crying.
“Darling, I’m sorry but like I told you I’m extremely tired and bit shocked. Your parents are coming this weekend and I still can’t believe this.”
“But it’s not the reason why you don’t let me kiss you. You don’t love me?”
“How can you say so? Of course I love you, Miranda, listen to me,” he grabbed her arm but she ran to her room and closed the doors behind her.
“Miranda, come back. Miranda!”
“Oh my God. Why is she always doing like that?” he thought to himself.
But she was right. He didn’t love her.
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Cell phone ring broke the truth.
“Kei, your cell is ringing.”
“Oh, yeah,” she replied and picked it.
“Hello. Is this Keira?” asked very familiar voice.
“Yes, it’s me. Who are you and how can I help you?”
“Hi, Kei. You didn’t recognize me? How could you?”
“Johnny! We haven’t talked for ages. How are you?” asked Keira.
“I’m fine, Miss Knightley. But you’re so rude. You didn’t even apology.”
“Apology? For what? What have I done?” Keira looked confusedly.
“You didn’t come to the AWE premiere. You think we forgot that?”
“Johnny, you know, I had a lot of work back then.”
“Work! You changed us to work!” his voice sounded angry.
“Please forgive me, Mister Depp.”
“I’ll try. The real reason why I call you is that we are having party!”
“Party?” Keira was completely surprised.
“Yes, the cast of Pirates is having party in London. You must come.”
“In London? What sounds great but when?” asked she.
“This weekend. So are you coming?”
“I don’t know. I’ll try.”
“If you didn’t come, I won’t talk with you anymore.”
“OK, I’ll come.”
“I’ll be waiting.” ____________________________________________________________________Hope you enjoyed it Rugile
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Post by spinat on May 23, 2008 11:14:39 GMT -5
this was great, me likey this have fun in Barcelona. You lucky girl
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Post by becky on May 26, 2008 9:25:09 GMT -5
great great dear
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Post by missawesomeness11 on May 27, 2008 21:27:23 GMT -5
wow, Barcelona! the farthest away i've ever been is... Washington DC. ahahaa. and i lost my voice so my friend danielle had to order all my food and crap... thats why i love her :]
anyways, great update! keep up the good work!!
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