Failure of Inner Strength

[Miss Knightley]

My blood boils
And spills onto the sandy ground
Making murky sandpaper

Why didn’t you stop me?
You stopped me before
But now you fail me

All I want is the solitude of my pain
Reveling in the darkness of eternal light
To be free from my torturous thoughts

WHY DIDN”T YOU STOP ME?
I thought I could rely on your strength
But it was just a part to play for you

I’ve cried for release
And it never came
Because you were there to save me from myself

Why didn’t you stop me?
Because you were tired of fighting too
Just like me

And now it is done
No more pain, no more sorrow
Just freedom
Blissful freedom

[Loreley]

it's beautiful but it also scares me everytime I read it. *shivers*

[Rainbow]

Depressing!
I like it...

My blood boils
And spills onto the sandy ground
Making murky sandpaper < - that a really grose metaphor. eugh!! lol I swear i'm never gonna be able to look at sand paper in the same way again. I'm still trying to decide whether i like it or not, but it definately had an effect. lol


the darkness of eternal light <- nice!

[Miss Knightley]

*hugs Amy* No worries, love. I'm still hanging in there.

*laughs at Horizon* I don't know if that should be taken as a compliment or not.

[Rainbow]

Meant completely as a compliment. i think hehe
Definately great writing.
It just slightly grosed me out. haha

[Reens]

It is so disturbing that it is good. *huggiez*

[Rainbow]

^ ditto that ;D