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Post by Araminta Ditch on Aug 14, 2004 19:35:41 GMT -5
Hey peeps. I got so inspired by all your poems that i decided to write one meself. TEXT ~Was it you?~ TEXT Was it you who first whispered those words in my ear? Was it you who once told me I had nothing to fear? Was it you who pulled me out when the water pushed me under? Was it you who stopped the rain and quelled the sudden thunder? You saved me from my fears You kept me from falling Your smile made me lay awake when the darkness kept on calling Was it you who saved my life? Was it you who kept the peace? Was it youwho made my nightmares cease? I want to thank you for what you did. It made me stand and fight When I could have ran and hid It made me what I am today Was it you who picked me up? Was it you who helped me stand? Was it you who brought back color when the world was feeling Bland? I think it was, I think you're real You were the one who made me feel Like I belonged
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Post by Miss Knightley on Aug 15, 2004 8:06:45 GMT -5
that's so sweet, and has a haunting quality about it...makes you wonder if this person is a real person or only a fantasy.
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Post by Reens on Aug 16, 2004 18:41:35 GMT -5
Nice
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Post by Loreley on Aug 30, 2004 13:40:55 GMT -5
wow!! this is so beautiful!
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Kayla
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Post by Kayla on Oct 4, 2004 17:04:37 GMT -5
Wow! You guys are really talented at poetry....its pretty breath taking to be honest...just...wow!
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Post by Araminta Ditch on Oct 4, 2004 17:07:31 GMT -5
awww thanks
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Post by Jems on Oct 4, 2004 17:09:15 GMT -5
very nice
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Post by Rainbow on Oct 4, 2004 17:30:51 GMT -5
wowzers, how did i miss this. Aww this is great!
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Post by Araminta Ditch on Oct 4, 2004 17:48:15 GMT -5
tankies
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Post by stargazer on Mar 18, 2006 21:43:50 GMT -5
Woah....that was....just....Woah...i absolutely loved it! great job!!
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Post by Lola on Mar 19, 2006 19:58:22 GMT -5
Beautiful!! ;D, I loved it!!...
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Post by starlight1534 on Apr 7, 2006 20:43:54 GMT -5
I really liked that. That's publishing material!
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