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Post by Reens on Dec 9, 2005 20:52:25 GMT -5
Hindsight How enchanting a sight of a wave crashing in meeting the shore. Heaving its battered bosom with imprints of ripples on sandy surface. Willingly sacrificing all curiosities to know, to feel, to touch. Wanting to grasp a ground to stand on, in her cries for a last embrace. A parting kiss. A release of another kind. Kindness of her pristine motives lost in a wither of uncertainty. It was uncharacteristic to give up in the eternal quest of longing. For that instance but, she does. She gives up with a decided quiver of unspoken whispers. The ghost of known equilibrium lingered, sweeping contrition in the rushed transcendent flow. Hanging on to the last freckles. Forever searching closure. Forever parting unrequited. Elizabeth drew her gaze back to the boat where two of the man who've rescued her life more than once, sat in resignation. For different reasons, she knew. They will return to H.M.S. Dauntless and go back to their lives. She watched the sweeping wave die back in the ocean and accepted its fate.
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Post by venus567 on Dec 10, 2005 13:03:30 GMT -5
interesting! ;D
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Post by Jems on Dec 10, 2005 18:59:41 GMT -5
Absolutely, simply beautiful.
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Post by Reens on Dec 11, 2005 3:21:25 GMT -5
I am chuffed you approve Sorry I forgot to include the A/N. This is after the cave scene where Will misses his "opportune moment." Although I am sure by the end you figure that out anyways.
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Post by Rainbow on Dec 16, 2005 17:45:39 GMT -5
ooh poeticness, I got lost in the words and sea metaphors. So much in so few words! I like it, very much.
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