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Post by Araminta Ditch on Sept 9, 2004 14:26:53 GMT -5
aww that chapter was so adorable!! lol, I agree with melissa, orlando and kiera should just get married, do the dirty, and get it over with.  |
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Post by venus567 on Sept 9, 2004 15:43:26 GMT -5
It must be pretty tough for parent to explain such things to a little kid! Fanastic update!
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Post by Araminta Ditch on Sept 9, 2004 21:25:47 GMT -5
ah yes, the whole birds and the bees talk. I remember that talk....i was traumatized for years. But hey, you get over it  |
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Post by Jems on Sept 12, 2004 3:15:33 GMT -5
^lol, yeah you get over it...eventually Lovely update, I loved the "Birds and the Bees talk" hehehe! Update soon ;D |
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Post by Reens on Sept 12, 2004 19:17:48 GMT -5
What birds and bees talk? *mumbles*
I think I gave my parents that one... didn't I *thinks hard*
Nice update babe
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Post by Rainbow on Sept 13, 2004 8:43:18 GMT -5
awww, too cute.
Nice one!
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Post by orlisdamnhot on Sept 14, 2004 9:35:53 GMT -5
Mmmm, just love this fic! never knew my buddy milly had so much talent! (shut up mj, you do) *shakes head amusedly and pinches milly's cheek* aww, you're just so CUTE when you're all stubborn like this! (oh, and if anybody's wondering, milly is one of mj's nicknames) anyway, she told me to tell you guys that she's having some trouble with her computer and she'll post again as soon as its fixed.  |
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Post by Araminta Ditch on Sept 15, 2004 6:02:53 GMT -5
What birds and bees talk? *mumbles* I think I gave my parents that one... didn't I *thinks hard* Nice update babe your parents give the birds n bees talk to YOU. Its the whole miracle of life chat. |
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Post by OrliKeiraluva on Sept 15, 2004 9:27:42 GMT -5
Mmmm, just love this fic! never knew my buddy milly had so much talent! (shut up mj, you do) *shakes head amusedly and pinches milly's cheek* aww, you're just so CUTE when you're all stubborn like this! Aaaaaah! Lala!! You've always had the need to embarass me! Ever since we were three! lol! Oh well, I guess we can both say that I got my revenge every time! lol! I'll keep quiet for your sake..  Anyway, here's the next chappie! My computer is still full of it, I'm at a friend's house right now and I cant stay on long, so sorry for not replying to everything, especially the fics, cus I dont have enough time to read them and relpy...so sorry...  "What about his head?" Mel asked frowning, looking at the almost complete snowman. "What about his head?" Orli repeated and looked at Keira with a smirk. "Umm, how about this?" Keira replied after a moment of thought and picked up a little branch and a few stones. She pushed the branch and the little stones into the big ball of snow, which was the snowman's head. Now he had a nose, eyes and a mouth. She grinned triumphantly and looked at Mel for confirmation. The little girl looked at it thoughtfully for a moment. "But his head will get cold," she said simply and looked at them curiously. Keira's hand slowly travelled to her head and touched her beanie thoughtfully. She frowned, but smiled slyly when her eyes settled on Orli's beanie. His eyes followed hers and he took a step backwards, a smirk on his face. "Oh no you don't," he declared as Keira slowly advanced on him. "Keira Knightley, don't you dare steal my hat!" Keira jumped to grab his beanie, but was caught midair by Orli, who toppled over with her on top of him. They lay there in a laughing heap and it wasn't long before Melissa jumped onto Keira, declaring it a doggy pile. Mel rolled off after a while and giggled at Keira who moved her position from lying on Orli to sitting on his stomach with her arms crossed. "You see honey? The woman is always in control," she declared and bounced a little to receive a few 'oofs' from Orli. "You see, we have to keep these boys under control and show them who's boss from time to time." At that Orli reached up and started tickling her. She screamed and tried to get away, but Orli grabbed her and rolled onto her to keep her from escaping. He tickled her merciless, and to her horror and amusement he lifted her shirt to blow a raspberry on her stomach. She screamed and called for Mel to help her, which she obliged happily. In seconds Orli was covered by a giggling toddler. "Eeeeeek! I'm under attack!" he yelled and fell back, acting like the tiny girl was having the slightest effect on him. Keira got up and took his beanie while Mel was tickling him and shoved it onto the snowman's head. "Orli, Orli," she tutted, turning around to face him. "When will you learn? Us girls travel in packs!" Mel finally stopped tickling him and he got up with a pout. He walked up to her and reached past her to take his beanie from the snowman's head. He stuck his tongue out at Keira and shoved the beanie onto his head sarcastically. "Well, now that we've all tortured me and built a snowman, let's go sledding!" he said excitedly and raced into the backyard, reappearing a moment later pulling a sled along. After an hour the three of them returned with wet bumbs and cold fingers from all the falling off the sled. Keira gave Mel a hot bath before tucking her into bed for a nap. After that she and Orli took turns to take showers and met up again in the livingroom. "Hmm, coffee would be wonderful right now," Keira declared and looked at Orli expectantly. He caught on what she was trying to do and played dumb for a while. "Yeah, that'd be great." "Off you go then man slave," she ordered with a smirk and held out her hand to him when he got up. "I'll give you a hand." He pulled her up and they went in search of coffee. After a moment of searching they decided to go out to a nearby coffee shop instead. Johnny entered tiredly, holding a smiling Jack as they were pulling on their jackets. "hey Johnny, we're going out for a cup of coffee, you want to come?" Keira asked and Johnny seemed to grimace at the thought. "I'm real sorry munchkins, but I'm dead on my feet. This little tyke has been keeping me up." He motioned to Jack, who was giggling at the face Orli was making. "He just doesn't want to go to sleep." He groaned and closed his eyes miserably. "Alright, but if you want, we could take Jack with us to give you some rest," Keira suggested and Johnny's head snapped up. "You sure? His a real handful." "No, not at all!" Orli replied happily. "We love your kids." Johnny smiled and handed Jack to them. "Oh thank you so much guys. You have no idea how much I appreciate this." "It's no problem at all, now off to bed with you," Keira demanded and he smiled before making his way upstairs. The two smiled and left after getting Jack into some warmer clothes. |
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Post by Kayla on Sept 15, 2004 16:19:59 GMT -5
This story is awesome! Your really talented. Cant wait for the next bit...Mel and Jack are so cute...!!! ;D
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Post by Rainbow on Sept 15, 2004 16:59:50 GMT -5
haha, they need to have childrean. How beautiful would their children be, wow!
Adorable update. But it's given me the sudden urge to hurl a snow ball at Renee, why Renee. I dunno, it's just so fun...
*hurls snow ball at renee and hides behind Orlando and Keira's snowman*
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Post by Araminta Ditch on Sept 15, 2004 17:13:17 GMT -5
aw what an adorable little chapter. I WANNA THROW A SNOWBALL!!!! hmmm.. *throws another snowball at Renee* Why, Hari, This IS Fun!
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Post by Rainbow on Sept 15, 2004 17:20:23 GMT -5
haha, yeah its fun! [high fives Ash] My fellow, gang up on renee buddy  [Tackles Reens to the ground and gives her a big kiss on the cheek] love you really babe. [Glances at Ash, evil grin spreading face as she chaces her and hurls many snow balls] |
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Post by Araminta Ditch on Sept 16, 2004 19:48:34 GMT -5
NoOoOoOo!!!!!
*runs away blindly while randomly throwing snowballs over shoulder*
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Post by captainfla on Sept 17, 2004 20:08:03 GMT -5
Great update!!!!!!!!! Sorry i haven't read in a while i've had exams Can you do me a favour My fic, Flawless has no readers do you mind reading?  ? Thanks Love Always Lara / Fla P.S. Update SOon!!!!!!!!! |
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Post by atadley3127 on Sept 21, 2004 21:15:44 GMT -5
new to the site n just read the story.....really good cant wait for the next part
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Post by OrliKeiraluva on Sept 22, 2004 9:23:46 GMT -5
They decided to walk to the coffeeshop as the snow had stopped quite a while ago. Orli had Jack cradled in a blanket in his right arm while his left arm was dropped lazily around Keira's shoulders, her arm being around his waist for warmth.
"Hmm, it's beautiful, isn't it?" she asked as she looked around her. Everything was covered in a white blanket of snow. Orli smiled down at her, his eyes warm with love as he nodded. Jack gave a little giggle and did what he did best, touoched Orli's face fondly. They guessed it was his way of showing them that he was happy or excited. They looked at him and each pulled a face to his delight.
They got to the shop and went inside to a little table by the window. They put Jack in his little carry rocker safely on a chair next to them. They ordered two coffees and just spoke of random things while they slowly sipped the warm liquid.
"His definitely going to be a ladiesman when he grows up," Keira declared as she looked fondly at Jack, tickling his tiny little foot to make him laugh.
"Yeah, and Melissa," Orli agreed. "If I wasn't about twenty years older than her I'd definitely give her a go." He winked at Keira and she frowned sarcastically.
"So, what's on your agenda for the rest of the week?"
"Oh, the hobbits are all coming down here for a week or so to visit," he replied excitedly.
"Really? That's great! Megan is coming on Wednesday for a few days too."
"Great! Then we can all go clubbing together!"
"Argh, you and your clubs Orlando Bloom."
"Hey, be nice. I am an elfgod after all." He pouted and looked at her with puppydog eyes, making her laugh.
"Mmm, keep telling yourself that, you might start believing it yourself after a while."
"What? You said it yourself a while ago."
"Yup, but let me tell you a secret." She motioned for him to come closer and whispered in his ear. "I lied." Orli looked disappointed and looked away mock disappointedly.
"Fine, I know when I'm not loved." He folded his arms over his chest and huffed a bit. Keira just looked at him reproachfully and he started smiling again. "I hate it when you do that."
"Do what?" she asked innocently.
"Make me smile when I'm trying to act like I'm angry." He groaned.
"Well, what can I say. I've just got it," she replied cheekily.
"What's 'it'?"
"Just 'it.'"
"Hmm, riiight. Do I have 'it?'" he asked hopefully and Keira snorted.
"You wish!" She laughed at his expression and he started pouting again. Keira smiled and put her hand on his arm. "Aww, I'm just kidding honey, you've definitely got it." Orli smiled triumphantly and put his hand over his heart.
"I've never been this happy," he said and acted all girly, making even Jack laugh. "Umm, maybe I shouldn't give the kid wrong ideas here."
"Yes, that would be appreciated."
"Are you ready to go?" Orli asked as he finished his coffee. Keira nodded and picked Jack up out of the rocker, Orli taking the rocker in his one hand while his other one folded around Keira again. They made their way home and decided that it would be best if they headed home, giving the Depps their home back again.
Of course, Melissa was crushed with this news but they ensured her that they would be visiting soon. But something was very out of place when Orli came to his door after walking Keira to her own door. He stopped right in his tracks when he spotted someone sitting on the stairs to his apartment.
It was his ex-girlfriend, Caroline...
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Post by Rainbow on Sept 22, 2004 10:02:48 GMT -5
Dun dun daaaahhh! Woot, neat update... more please  Yup i think they both most definately have 'it' Hello and welcome. Hope you have fun here |
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Post by atadley3127 on Sept 22, 2004 14:46:56 GMT -5
Hello and welcome. Hope you have fun here thanx....really good update...cant wait to hear...well read...what goes down |
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Post by venus567 on Sept 22, 2004 15:34:30 GMT -5
fabulous update!
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? Thanks Love Always
