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Post by venus567 on Aug 15, 2004 14:23:18 GMT -5
Okay I wrote this fanfic tow months ago and now I'm posting it here hope you all like it! TEXTTEXT Disclaimer: I do not own nor have any connections with Orlando Bloom and/ or Keria Knightley. Nor do I know any of thier family members. Characters such as Morris, Mark Wade and George Washburn are fictiuous. The Whiskey Ring is as well fictiuous. Okay this story is completly diffrent. It's inspired sort of by New Begingings BY Dee. Don't worry this is completly different. Chapter One Orlando walked over to Keira 's house. She taken care of his dog while he finished shoting Kingdom of Heaven. Keira had moved into her own place after she finished shooting for King Arthur. It had been a mutal decsion on her family and her part. She wanted to live independently for awhile and so she was. For Orlando this was easier. After all it made him nervous to have to make conversation with the Knightleys, as he had first taken time before befriending Keira. As a token to test whether they could really have any realtionship besides being fellow co-stars, Orlando had asked her to watch his dog for a couple of weeks Keira had replied," Don't worry Orlando. Your dog is good as ever under my care." Orlando had smiled slightly and declined the offer of tea as he had a flight to catch. -------------------------------------------------------------[ Orlando knocked on Keira's door. There was no reply. However he heard the whining of his dog, Buck(have no clue if Orlando has a dog, if he does , no clue about name) Orlando sensed something amiss. He dug in his pocket for the rubber gloves he had worn before when helping his other plant her garden. He opened the door steathily. The sight that awaited him was quite appalling. Okay update later!
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Post by venus567 on Aug 15, 2004 14:30:53 GMT -5
p.s If anyone is wondering I'm Saturn567 on theobfiles!
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Post by *Syd* on Aug 15, 2004 14:36:43 GMT -5
hey i'm so glad that you came. i love all your fics you are such a great writer.
x x x
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Post by Araminta Ditch on Aug 15, 2004 17:57:23 GMT -5
Hmm...intersting. Update soon. I'd like to find out what is so 'appalling' to Lando.
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Post by venus567 on Aug 15, 2004 20:37:31 GMT -5
Chapter2
Orlando spotted Keira cowering in a corner. He rushed to her side. "Keira what's wrong?," he asked with concern. Keira whimpered,' I saw a murder occur. They 're be any second! They'll kill me Orlando!" Orlando asked,"What did you see? Did you see these people before?" Keira whimpered," Yes I think so. I saw them in the newspaper. They're escaped convicts from the London prison." Orlando had a sudden memory of hearing about The Whiskey Ring. Orlando asked," Is it the Whiskey Ring?" Keira's face went completely pale and she fainted. Orlando knew he had to call the police. He looked down at Buck. He pat him on the head and said,'Good job Buck! Just keep an eye on her while I call." Buck barked in agreement and stood closer to Keira's unconscious body.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ The police chief arrived with two of his officers. Keira had regained consciousness moments before. She nervously gave a testimony. Cheif Morris asked," What is your relation to the witness?" Orlando replied,"we're friends. I came here to get my dog and I found her here all scared." Morris nodded. "Alright I'm sorry to say this but our force is ill-equipped at the moment. I'll send a plainclothesman over as possible," Morris said assuringly. Keira shook her head. She had gained her composure now. "I appreciate your concern but I don't want to be watched 24/7. Now that they you are on to them I'm sure they'll try to keep a low-profile for now. I shall alert you if sight them again.." Keira stated adamantly. Morris shook his head. He took Orlando aside. "We got to watch out for this one.," Morris whispered. Orlando nodded. Morris left with his men a few moments later. !
Chapter3
Keira struggled to fall asleep. She finally fell asleep one in the morning. About half-hour later she heard Buck growling. She approached the dog and patted him. "What's wrong boy?,"she asked with concern. Buck continued to whine satring at the door in fornt. Suddenly a figure appeared. Keira screamed. It was Mark Wade! He was the leader of the Whiskey Ring.
Mark grabbed Keira and mufflled her screams with his hand, His ally George Washburn threatened Buck with a knife. Buck backed away towards the kitchen, but continued to whine. Mark asked," George whose dog is that? It better not be a police one ," he said to Keira as he held a knife to her throat. George looked at Buck. "It's the dog of Mr. Orlando Bloom."
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George found Keira's phonebook within mintues. He found Orlando's cell number. It was now 2 in the morning. Mark and George switched places. George took over scaring Keira while Mark talked to Orlando. Orlando groggily answered. "who's this?,"he asked very annoyed. Mark said,"This is Mark Wade. We have your dog and Miss Knightely under our care." Suddenly Keira broke free from George's grasp and screamed,"Don't come here Orlando!" Keira's screams from the other side reached Orlando's ears. He was completely alert to the situation then. He quickly prepared to go rescue his friend and hsi beloved dog Buck.
Chapter 4 Orlando reached Keira's house. Buck ran to greet him and began pulling on his shirt sleeve, indicating he wanted Orlando to follow him. Orlando became alarmed as Buck lead him towards a clearing behind the housing development. . Orlando saw marks of someone being forcefully dragged.
Orlando called out," Keira are you alright?" Buck barked a few feet ahead. Orlando's fears revealed themselves as Keira lay unconsious in the clearing. Orlando pulled her out the clearing. He attempted CPR and even shaking her shoulders a bit but to no avail. He carried Keira's limp body to his car. He called Morris on the way. "i'll meet you there Mr. Bloom," was all Morris replied.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ Doctors and nurses rushed in and out of the emergency room. Orlando sat in a orange plastic chair, waiting for Morris. Morris arrived finally. He tapped Orlando on the shoulder. "I've received word, our department as gotten more reinforcements. They'll arrive soon to make sure nothing else happens," Morris stated. Orlando merely no Dr. Thornton approached Orlando . Morris had left to check on the reinforcements. "Mr. Bloom I'm sorry to tell you this but Miss Knightley has gone into a coma, Thornton stated solemnly. Seeing Orlando's crestfallen face, he added,"She still has a larage amount of brain activity. She can still come out of it," Dr.Thornton finished. Orlando decided to go call Keira 's family
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Chapter 5 The whole Knightley family gathered in the waiting room. Orlando noticed some of Keira's cousins looked very much like her. He recalled the times when Keira was awake and lively like them. However when they took turns visiting Keira, each family member or friend came outside with sorrow expressed fully on their faces. Keira's close relatives, her parents and older brother Caleb took it the hardest.
Caleb approached Orlando in a fury. "Bloom you know who did this? Who was it? Did Keira tell you anything before they...," Caleb trailed off. He was too choked up to say any more. Orlando looked at him solemnly. "It was guys from the Whiskey Ring. Keira saw them commit a crime," Orlando stated. Caleb looked shockedly at Orlando. Orlando asked,"She probably didn't tell you I presume. She even refused police protection. Buck couldn't help her either but he did lead me to where she was," Orlando finished ruefully.
Caleb nodded a thanks and went to talk to Morris who'd arrived with guards. Orlando sat back in his chair wondering how Keira was doing. Suddenly his mother Sonia was beside him. Sonia asked," Would you come with me to see her." Orlando nodded and they went to see Keira.--------------------------------------------------------------------- Keira was surrounded by life-assitance tubes. Her head was bandaged and she lay still. Yet Orlando knew she was still alive. He wanted her to awaken so it would be like the old times like on the sets of POTC.
Keira meanwhile was somewhere else in her subconsiousness. She wakened on the sets of what seemed like a small town in the 1600's. As she heard the voices she realized only a few sounded like they possessed a British accent. Keira realized she was no longer in England or anywhere in the United Kingdom. She was else where. Suddenly she heard,"There she goes! That's the witch!"
Alright update later!
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Post by Araminta Ditch on Aug 15, 2004 21:52:39 GMT -5
hmm...this fic is a bit different. Interesting plot. try not to rush the events though.
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Post by venus567 on Aug 16, 2004 12:46:45 GMT -5
Thanks! Here's chapter six! Chapter6
Keira covered her face with the corner of her cloak. She turned and stood to the side. The men rushed past her. Keira sighed. But then she thought why should she be worried? Suddenly someone tapped her shoulder. Keira whirled around in surprise. It was Johnny in his Jack getup. He asked," Miss Swann that was a close one!" Keira frowned," Why are you calling me Miss Swann?" Jack smiled. "So you're letting me call you Elizabeth?" Keira gave him a quizzical look. Jack asked," You don't reconize me do you Elizabeth. Come let me walk you to the hideout. If you don't mind, Will told me of it so I could come see you two," Jack added. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Upon seeing Orlando in his Will Turner getup, Keira realized she was in Port Royal. Keira walked over to Will who embraced her tightly. Will let her go and said,"Never go out like that again." Keira knowing now that she was Elizabeth, asked"Where's my father?" Will grimaced. Jack decided to break the news. "Governor Swann is no longer with us Elizabeth," Jack stated. Keira's eyes filled with tears . "How did it happen?," Keira asked as she attempted to hold back her tears. "They had him captive since he tried to reprimand several people who lied about innoccent women being accused of being witches." Keira looked deeply into Will's eyes and asked," Was I one of them?" Will glumly nodded. Suddenly there was a riot outside. Jack got ready along with Will to protect her. Keira stammered," No I'll confront them myself."
Alright update later!
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Post by Araminta Ditch on Aug 16, 2004 14:50:50 GMT -5
hmmm.. I've never seen this done before. I like it ;D keep up the good work, hun
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Post by venus567 on Aug 16, 2004 19:47:02 GMT -5
Thanks for your comments! Here's more! Chapter7
Will furrowed his eyebrows. He took a hold of Keira's arm to stop her. Keira gave him a solemn look and he let her go. Keira opened the door to the rioters. One man exclaimed,"There she's turning herself in!" Two rioters grabbed Keira and they marched off to the town's center where'd announce her execuation.
Will turned to Jack. "You have a plan don't you?," Will asked hopefully. Jack looked at him incredously. "Will don't you remember how you saved my life?," Jack asked. Will gave him a shocked look. "You mean at the opurtune moment?," Will asked. Jack nodded and indicated for Will to follow him. ----------------------------------------------------------------------
Keira cowered as one of the men looked like Mark Wase held a knife to her throat. He announced,"Why don't we mess up the illusion on his witch's face, shall we?" Keira cringed at his spiteful ex-pression. She hoped Jack had a plan. The man continued,"Who's first to test the allusions of this witch?" Rachel, who acted as Elizabeth's maid stepped forward and and was about to lunge at Keira, when suddenly Jack knocked to the ground and Will socked the Mark Wade look-like. Before Keira could sigh with relief however, George Washburn's look-like grabbed her by the throat.
okay update later!
I was wondering if someone can make me a banner? Thanks!
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Post by Araminta Ditch on Aug 16, 2004 21:18:02 GMT -5
this is great!! Keep up the fab. work!
i don't know how to make any banners, but I'll ask around for you.
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Post by venus567 on Aug 17, 2004 14:14:43 GMT -5
THANKS! Here 's chapter eight. If I don't get anyone else's reply right away I'll probaly wiat a bit longer to post more.
Chapter8
[Will served and yelled,"Elizabeth watch out!" Jack shot the George Washburn look-like as Keira was able to stilt her head in time. The amn fell! He was dead. Keira was still mortified as she realized the close call. Will caught her as she fainted in his arms. Will said,"Elizabeth wake up." -----------------------------------------------------------------------
Keira gasped on the hospital bed. Orlando heard her heavy breaths. "Keira are you wake?" Orlando got up from his chair as Keira started to thrash around in her bed. Orlando knew she wasn't totally awake, so tried to grab her arms. It was quite a hassel as Keira couldn't stop moving. Suddenly she felt arms around her wrists. She got scared. "Get away from me ! Let go of me !", Keira screamed. Then she opened her eyes and realized it was only Orlando. Keira grabbed his arm.
She said,"I think I know you." Orlando face became crestfallen. Had Keira lost her memory? Keira's mother arrived. "Oh Orlando she's awake! God bless you!," Mrs. Knightley exclaimed. Orlando looked at her with the grimance. "Mrs. Knightley there may be a problem," Orlando stated.
------------------------------------------------------------------- Mrs, Knightley asked," Did she loose her memory?" She walked over and sat down. "Keira do you remember me?,"Mrs. Knightley asked. Keira's eyes opened wide. "I think your my mother." Mrs. Knightley loked towards Orlandp. Keira looked at Orlando and smiled. "He's my savior Mum!", Keira stated. Orlando breathed a sigh of relief, then turned red as Keira's words registered in his mind.
ALRIGHT UPDATE LATER~
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Post by Reens on Aug 17, 2004 16:30:43 GMT -5
Hey Sat, Direct and to the point, thats my girl. Welcome
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Post by venus567 on Aug 17, 2004 17:03:25 GMT -5
Thanks Serena!
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Post by Araminta Ditch on Aug 17, 2004 23:22:30 GMT -5
Wow, Serena! LOVE the siggy! Do you know where i could get one or who can make one for me?
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Post by venus567 on Aug 18, 2004 11:30:47 GMT -5
Okay here's my next update! Chapter9
Orlando was in a bewilderment. Why had Keira called him her savor? When he'd found her she was unconscious. Orlando decided to visit his mother Sonia since she often worked in her mini-garden in the late evenings, he decided he to meet her there. It was evident that Sonia had been there for awhile. She was quite engrossed with her work. Orlando sat down nearby, and waited for her to notice him.It didn't take long. "Hello Orlando!, How's Keira?', Sonia asked instantly. Orlando smiled slightly. "You always know when I'm around. Keira awakened from the coma," Orlando said with ambivalence. Sonia nodded. "Yet you're worried that she hasn't completely awakened form her anxieties," Sonia stated knowingly. Orlando nodded. "Mum I've realized why you like it here. It's a great place to think," Orlando stated plaintively. As Orlando got up to leave, Sonia said,"Remember Orlando always follow your heart." Orlando replied," I will." He hugged his mother and headed back to London.
----------------------------------------------------------------------- The following day at the hospital,a worried Mrs. Knightley greeted Orlando. "Orlando she gets scared quickly except when you or Johnny visit," she stated. Orlando replied,"Caleb talked to the doctor. This happens after a coma. There must have been some conflict in her mind which reflects people that were in it," Orlando added. Mrs. Knightley asked,"Did Mr. Morris report about the Whiskey Ring?" Orlando replied,"No. They've seemed to have disappeared." Keira must have heard their words. She mumbled,"Don't you remember? You and Johnny already killed them." Mrs. Knightley and Caleb who'd just arrived stared at Orlando in surprise.
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Post by Araminta Ditch on Aug 18, 2004 14:15:31 GMT -5
fabulous update!
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Marisela
Star Gazer
Don't look. Step away from the light!!!
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Post by Marisela on Aug 18, 2004 14:19:14 GMT -5
hehe glad your here, and posting this Saturn tis fantastic
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Post by venus567 on Aug 19, 2004 12:05:39 GMT -5
Thanks for your comments! And thanks Marisela for welcoming me! Okay here's the next update! Chapter10
Keira had been moved from the drabness and white of the ICU,to a a room with a floral wallpaper. Her parents insisted she now be cared for at home. The day before Keira was to be released, the Knightleys met withthe doctor. They wanted to be sure whether or not Keira's musings had been true. They asked Johnny and Orlando to meet them in the hospital cafeteria.
Johnny arrived with Orlando and the Knightelys waiting for him. Johnny pulled a chair out and sat down. Orlando was hesitant to start first, so Johnny took the honors. "Mrs. Knightley as you know I've been in town for a few days now. During the time this incident took place, Iwas with my family in France. So therefore I couldn't have shot anyone,"Johnny finished giving each of the three family members a look over of seriousness. Keira's parents maintained looks of solemness while Caleb had a frown of disturbance.
Now it was Orlando's turn. " I received a call around 1:30 in the morning from one of them. He told me that they had Keira and my dog Buck under captivity. By the time I got there they'd left Keira for dead in a creek outside her house. Buck led me to it otherwise, I do not think anyone would have found her in time," Orlando finished. Caleb's ex-pression went from a frown to a solemn look that both his parents maintained.
Caleb asked," You're telling me that neither of you has seen the guys that did this to my sister?" "This means Keira is the sole witness besides for your dog Orlando," Johnny muttered thoughtfully. Orlando nodded. "Keira's going to need plenty of protection," Orlando stated. Mr. Knightley said,"I want my daughter to be safe and be able to recover. Orlando will you help us out?" Orlando glanced at Caleb. He didn't seem to want to object. "Alright Mr. Knightley. We should start forming a plan soon though," Orlando replied.
Okay update later!
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Post by Araminta Ditch on Aug 19, 2004 15:38:19 GMT -5
nice update!
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Post by venus567 on Aug 20, 2004 13:27:55 GMT -5
Thanks! Chapter 11 Keira went out to tea with Orlando one afternoon. She had heard he'd broken up with Kate. "Orlando I'm so sorry about you and Kate," Keira said. Orlando looked at her with complexity. "Keira it wasn't your fault. Kate and I realized that we weren't right for each other. She sensed that someone else was out there for her and I too realized something.," Orlando said.
Keira sipped her tea. "What did you realize Orlando?" Orlando looked at her and said," I realized how much I love you. When you woke up form that coma all I wanted to do was tell you that I was ready to be with you forever," Orlando finished. Keira looked at him and almost choked on her tea that she was about to swallow right before he said those words. "Orlando do you really think,,,, Keira trailed off as she noted Orlando's ex-pression. He was looking straight at two men who seemed they were up to no good. "Keira stay calm. Tell me if those are the guys that did it," Orlando whispered.
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