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Post by Araminta Ditch on Aug 20, 2004 14:37:21 GMT -5
yay for another excellent chapter!
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Post by venus567 on Aug 21, 2004 22:04:50 GMT -5
Thanks for your reply! NEXT Chapter!
Chapter 12
Keira saw them form the corner of her eye. She could never forget those faces at least not in tis lifetime. Seeing Keira's pale ex-pression, Orlando realized they were in in danger. Now he too knew how they looked like. Orlando took Keira's hand and squeezed it hard. Orlando called for the bill. The couple paided it Then sneaked ou the back door.
Mark Wade and anotherof his cronies greeted them. Orlando and Keira froze for a second. What were they going to do now? Mark Wade and his cronie headed towards them. Keira instictively knew what they had to do. "Remember that sequence when you and Johnny had to knock down those soldiers?," Keira whispered. Orlando nodded. Mark Wade snickered,"What are two whispering about? There isn't anyway you'll escape alive now!" Suddenly Keira dropped kicked the cronie(his partner). This distracted Mark enough that Orlando was able to sock him one. George Washburn arrived with another cronie. But they would now have to face a car chase across the streets of London. For Orlando and Keira had already got in his car and driven off.------------------------------------------------------------------------ Orlando drove as fast as he could. He asked," Is anyone chasing us?" Keira turned around. It was George Washburn. Keira replied," It's his second best, Washburn." " If we got through Wade we can beat this guy too," Keira added. Orlando grinned. " Okay Keira I'm going to try to serve a turn here. Buckle up my lady!," Orlando declared. Keira did so and hoped it would throw them off their tails.------------------------------------------------------------------------ Orlando made a perfect u-turn in a one way alley. They made it through and served towards Keira's now abandoned townhouse. George Washburn had followed right into Orlando's plan. Keira furrowed her eyebrows . Why was the police here?
Alright update later!
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Post by Araminta Ditch on Aug 22, 2004 3:17:37 GMT -5
yay! another update!
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Post by venus567 on Aug 22, 2004 15:42:03 GMT -5
OkAY HERE'S TH REST!
Here's the rest! Thanks for comments! HERE'S MORE! Chapter 13
Orlando pressed the brakes and got out of the car. Keira got out after him. She was quite appalled. "Orlando why is the police here?," Keira asked. Orlando replied,"Keira this was a plan to catch the culprits. I guess Johnny's plan worked," Orlando added. The police spotted George Washburn's car and rushed after him and his cronies.
The Knightleys and Johnny along with Morris greeted Orlando and Keira. Keira exclaimed," Johnny what did you do?" Johnny grinned. "I was shooting for one of my films when I overheard the two of them talking to their girlfriends,"Johnny said. (Keira's expression to that in the one in POTC when Elizabeth realizes the medallion is what the Pirates are looking for) Keira exclaimed," So you flirted with them to get the information!" Johnny nodded. Caleb contiuned the story."Next Johnny called me. I called Orlando and told him of the plan. Orlando agreed and he also said he had to tell you something Keira," Caleb finished, giving Orlando a quzzical look.
b]Chapter 14[/b] Orlando blushed, "Caleb I told her already." Orlando said . Keira's parents waited to hear what it had been. Keira siad,"He loves me." Caleb looked ready to collapse. Keira's parents glowed with happiness. Johnnywished them well and murmed something about talking to Vanessa. Morris rejoined them after his phone call. "Everyone the culprits are in custody!", Morris declared.
Caleb turned to Orlando. "You better take care of her." Caleb stated sternly. Orlando smiled. "Don't worry Caleb. You can count on the fact something like this won't happen to her again," Orlando stated. He turned to Keira. "Well love since the court date won't be for awhile, why don't we finish our date?," Orlando asked hopefully. Keira grinned. "Why of course love!," Keira replied happlily.
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~The End~ "Sometimes a surreal expreience can really alter your fate."
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Post by venus567 on Aug 24, 2004 10:27:57 GMT -5
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Post by Loreley on Aug 24, 2004 12:54:48 GMT -5
absolutely no problem
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Post by Araminta Ditch on Aug 25, 2004 20:40:04 GMT -5
that was a cute little fic, and I loved the ending. very very adorable.
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Azaria
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A PIRATE AND HIS LADY
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Post by Azaria on May 13, 2005 23:59:51 GMT -5
and the vertic is (drum roll please.....)
I LOVED IT... kept me in suspence!
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Post by venus567 on May 15, 2005 12:45:31 GMT -5
Thanks! ;D
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