Post by Azaria on May 11, 2005 18:55:15 GMT -5
Hey all, this is my very first Will/Elizabeth fanfic written the very next day after I saw the movie for the first time in theaters...
I hope you like it... as I go back and read this, I realize how much I've grown as a writer. I went back and edited a ton of things...but I left the format the same...lol it's kind of funny.
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters William Turner or Elizabeth Swann...
Rating: R
Winter's Night's Breeze
The winter winds were harsh this time of year. Jack Frost was at it again, nipping at Elizabeth's dainty little toes. Her chambermaid, Marina, was placing a hot plate under Miss Swann's comforter when She asked her
what her thoughts on "Commodore" Norrington were.
Marina: The Commodore is high ranking in your fathers Navy, a well respected man here in Port Royal. he can also take care of you, a very smart match
Miss...but, can he make you happy?
Elizabeth's head shot up "What are you saying?"
Marina: Nothing miss, just stating that ... well... Will Turner is also a smart match. Yes, he is a black smith but ... he loves you Miss Swann. I see the way you look at him. It is as plain as the sun that you love him too.
Elizabeth started to blush, "Even if it were true, my father would not allow it. He... well... I...."
Marina: I'll leave you to your thoughts Miss Swann, goodnight.
With that and a turn on her heels she was gone. Out of sight, out of mind.
Elizabeth laid down and snuggled beneath the warm covers. She was very tired, Commodore asking for her hand in marriage, falling off the cliff into the Caribbean, getting held hostage by a drunken pirate. You would assume that sleep would claim her quickly.
Yet, it would not, no, she was thinking about what Marina said. ..."He loves you ... you love him too!"
Did she love him ... yes it was true she liked him, but was it possible for
her to love him? She thought back to the very day Will came into her life.
"Yoho yoho... a pirate's life for me...," Elizabeth had been singing a pirate song she had learned out of one of her pirate books. She was truly fascinated by them. their careless abandon when it came to anything and everything.....except for treasure. When she looked out into the sea, there she saw him, a young boy floating atop a piece that looked to be part of a ship "Look a boy, a boy's in the water"
"Man over board!" Cried one of the crew members men scurried over to the starboard side to see what the fuss was all about.
Men dragged the boy up on to the ship. "He's alive." They carried him a few steps and set him upon the deck.
"Watch over him" replied her father.
She did as she was told while everyone else went to search for more survivors.
She looked down at him with curious eyes. She had spotted a medallion hanging from his neck. She picked it up and saw it to be a sign of a pirate. She quickly yanked it from his neck just before he came to.
"Ahhhh," His breaths were short
"It's OK we saved you...what's you name?"
"Will." He took a few more breaths "Will Turner" he past out again
"Did he say anything" inquired Latinate Norrington
Elizabeth: His name is William Turner, that's all I got.
present time
Elizabeth pondered on how she felt about William up into the wee hours of morning. Finally she fell asleep with the word William upon her lips.
Chapter 2
Swoosh, swish
Will was up late practicing his footwork and swordsmanship. He went through the motions as if he's done this a hundred times. His mind wasn't were it should have been, instead it was on the beautiful maiden Elizabeth.
Oh how he loved her, ever since that frightful day.
He had been on his way to look for his father, when a band of pirates attacked his ship. Luckily Miss Swann had seen him and cried for help. She had saved him. She was his angel.
He also thought about things he shouldn't have. Her rosy cheeks, her supple lips, her perfectly round bosom...
Will stopped his sword and whispered to him self, "Why do I do this? She doesn't need you, she has Norrington." He held his head down in defeat.
~*~*~*~
He kissed her so soft, so tender. Caressed her in all the right places. He thrust himself faster and faster, but he slowed down he wanted to cum with her. As she cried out in pleasure and frustration, He looked at her face, it was twisted with passion, he knew she was there and knew just the thing to push her and him overboard. he looked deep into her eyes and whispered just three simple words that could make her heart leap and her knees go weak... "I love you"...
Elizabeth woke up. She had been dreaming about William again. She looked out the window and noticed that the sun was almost up. It could have been 6 or 7 in the morning. Just then she heard a loud thump that came from downstairs. She grabbed her silk wrap and went to go check to see what it was. As she made her way down the staircase she heard murmurs ... whispers.
She distinguished that one of the voices belonged to her father the other she did not know. When the lobby came into view she saw an unknown character conversing with her father. She hid to where her father and the other person could not see her and she listened in. Normally she would have just disregarded it, but this case was unusual. Her father wasn't expected to awaken for another hour or so.
Governor: I believe she will do what is right and accept the Commodore's hand in marriage.
Unknown person: I believe that she has no feelings for the Commodore, that she really loves that William Turner.
Governor: She doesn't love him, they are just ... you don't think?
Unknown person: your right I don't think... I know. Honestly Governor, haven't you seen they way they look at each other?
Governor: But... he is a black smith. They aren't of the same class.
Unknown Person: Really Governor, it's not about how you feel its what Miss Swann wants and who she wants to love. You can't force her too marry,
unless....
Governor: Unless what?
Unknown person: Unless you were to make an arranged marriage.
Governor: Are those legal?
Unknown person: Yes, I believe they are.
Governor Swann: Then it's settled. She and the Commodore will be wed before her 20th birthday. That gives her two years to fall for him. I will discus this with my daughter, she'll understand. Good day Mr. Kale.
Elizabeth decided to make her presence known. "Father."
the governor jumped, "E...Elizabeth I didn't know you were awake. We need to talk."
Elizabeth: I know what you are going to say, and you can't make me marry the Commodore. I wont do. I don't love him. I love Will!
Elizabeth quickly covered her mouth, she was shocked to say the least. She hadn't expected that to come out, but she stuck with it. Because deep down
she knew it to be true, she loved William Turner.
She removed her hands and said it again "I love William Turner!"
Governor: Well I wont allow it!
Elizabeth: Why do you distaste Will so much? What has he ever done to you?
Governor: He.... How do you know you love him?
Elizabeth: How did you know that you loved mother?
Elizabeth knew she had won. The governor loved his daughter and he wanted her happy, and he did like William. He was an excellent swordsman and he made a respectable living. Yes, he mad up his mind, he knew deep down in his heart that Will could take care of his daughter.
The Governor smiled and Elizabeth ran to hug her father. She kissed his cheek and ran to her room
Governor: Where are you going?
Elizabeth: To see Will.
~*~*~*~
At the black smith
Will was hammering away when he heard the bell above the door ring. He looked to find Elizabeth standing there smiling
He wiped off his hands and went to Elizabeth.
William: Elizabeth what a pleasant surprise ... don't mind me asking but what are you doing here?
Elizabeth: I needed to see you...
Will: To see me?
"Yes you," replied Elizabeth coyly. "I wanted to tell you that," she went to his ear and felt him shiver. "I love you" she whispered.
He grabbed Elizabeth by the shoulders and looked her in the eyes. He could tell she was being sincere.
"You don't know how long I've been waiting to hear those words, I love you too," With that he took her in his arms and carried her to his loft.
Elizabeth woke up and noticed that Will had pulled her against him. She thought back to their love making. He was so soft and gentle it had been both their first time and she knew she would have no other. Will was the only man for her, and somehow she knew that Will felt the same.
~*~*~*~
AN: I hope you liked it...sorry if the characters seemed a little out of character...
I hope you like it... as I go back and read this, I realize how much I've grown as a writer. I went back and edited a ton of things...but I left the format the same...lol it's kind of funny.
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters William Turner or Elizabeth Swann...
Rating: R
Winter's Night's Breeze
The winter winds were harsh this time of year. Jack Frost was at it again, nipping at Elizabeth's dainty little toes. Her chambermaid, Marina, was placing a hot plate under Miss Swann's comforter when She asked her
what her thoughts on "Commodore" Norrington were.
Marina: The Commodore is high ranking in your fathers Navy, a well respected man here in Port Royal. he can also take care of you, a very smart match
Miss...but, can he make you happy?
Elizabeth's head shot up "What are you saying?"
Marina: Nothing miss, just stating that ... well... Will Turner is also a smart match. Yes, he is a black smith but ... he loves you Miss Swann. I see the way you look at him. It is as plain as the sun that you love him too.
Elizabeth started to blush, "Even if it were true, my father would not allow it. He... well... I...."
Marina: I'll leave you to your thoughts Miss Swann, goodnight.
With that and a turn on her heels she was gone. Out of sight, out of mind.
Elizabeth laid down and snuggled beneath the warm covers. She was very tired, Commodore asking for her hand in marriage, falling off the cliff into the Caribbean, getting held hostage by a drunken pirate. You would assume that sleep would claim her quickly.
Yet, it would not, no, she was thinking about what Marina said. ..."He loves you ... you love him too!"
Did she love him ... yes it was true she liked him, but was it possible for
her to love him? She thought back to the very day Will came into her life.
"Yoho yoho... a pirate's life for me...," Elizabeth had been singing a pirate song she had learned out of one of her pirate books. She was truly fascinated by them. their careless abandon when it came to anything and everything.....except for treasure. When she looked out into the sea, there she saw him, a young boy floating atop a piece that looked to be part of a ship "Look a boy, a boy's in the water"
"Man over board!" Cried one of the crew members men scurried over to the starboard side to see what the fuss was all about.
Men dragged the boy up on to the ship. "He's alive." They carried him a few steps and set him upon the deck.
"Watch over him" replied her father.
She did as she was told while everyone else went to search for more survivors.
She looked down at him with curious eyes. She had spotted a medallion hanging from his neck. She picked it up and saw it to be a sign of a pirate. She quickly yanked it from his neck just before he came to.
"Ahhhh," His breaths were short
"It's OK we saved you...what's you name?"
"Will." He took a few more breaths "Will Turner" he past out again
"Did he say anything" inquired Latinate Norrington
Elizabeth: His name is William Turner, that's all I got.
present time
Elizabeth pondered on how she felt about William up into the wee hours of morning. Finally she fell asleep with the word William upon her lips.
Chapter 2
Swoosh, swish
Will was up late practicing his footwork and swordsmanship. He went through the motions as if he's done this a hundred times. His mind wasn't were it should have been, instead it was on the beautiful maiden Elizabeth.
Oh how he loved her, ever since that frightful day.
He had been on his way to look for his father, when a band of pirates attacked his ship. Luckily Miss Swann had seen him and cried for help. She had saved him. She was his angel.
He also thought about things he shouldn't have. Her rosy cheeks, her supple lips, her perfectly round bosom...
Will stopped his sword and whispered to him self, "Why do I do this? She doesn't need you, she has Norrington." He held his head down in defeat.
~*~*~*~
He kissed her so soft, so tender. Caressed her in all the right places. He thrust himself faster and faster, but he slowed down he wanted to cum with her. As she cried out in pleasure and frustration, He looked at her face, it was twisted with passion, he knew she was there and knew just the thing to push her and him overboard. he looked deep into her eyes and whispered just three simple words that could make her heart leap and her knees go weak... "I love you"...
Elizabeth woke up. She had been dreaming about William again. She looked out the window and noticed that the sun was almost up. It could have been 6 or 7 in the morning. Just then she heard a loud thump that came from downstairs. She grabbed her silk wrap and went to go check to see what it was. As she made her way down the staircase she heard murmurs ... whispers.
She distinguished that one of the voices belonged to her father the other she did not know. When the lobby came into view she saw an unknown character conversing with her father. She hid to where her father and the other person could not see her and she listened in. Normally she would have just disregarded it, but this case was unusual. Her father wasn't expected to awaken for another hour or so.
Governor: I believe she will do what is right and accept the Commodore's hand in marriage.
Unknown person: I believe that she has no feelings for the Commodore, that she really loves that William Turner.
Governor: She doesn't love him, they are just ... you don't think?
Unknown person: your right I don't think... I know. Honestly Governor, haven't you seen they way they look at each other?
Governor: But... he is a black smith. They aren't of the same class.
Unknown Person: Really Governor, it's not about how you feel its what Miss Swann wants and who she wants to love. You can't force her too marry,
unless....
Governor: Unless what?
Unknown person: Unless you were to make an arranged marriage.
Governor: Are those legal?
Unknown person: Yes, I believe they are.
Governor Swann: Then it's settled. She and the Commodore will be wed before her 20th birthday. That gives her two years to fall for him. I will discus this with my daughter, she'll understand. Good day Mr. Kale.
Elizabeth decided to make her presence known. "Father."
the governor jumped, "E...Elizabeth I didn't know you were awake. We need to talk."
Elizabeth: I know what you are going to say, and you can't make me marry the Commodore. I wont do. I don't love him. I love Will!
Elizabeth quickly covered her mouth, she was shocked to say the least. She hadn't expected that to come out, but she stuck with it. Because deep down
she knew it to be true, she loved William Turner.
She removed her hands and said it again "I love William Turner!"
Governor: Well I wont allow it!
Elizabeth: Why do you distaste Will so much? What has he ever done to you?
Governor: He.... How do you know you love him?
Elizabeth: How did you know that you loved mother?
Elizabeth knew she had won. The governor loved his daughter and he wanted her happy, and he did like William. He was an excellent swordsman and he made a respectable living. Yes, he mad up his mind, he knew deep down in his heart that Will could take care of his daughter.
The Governor smiled and Elizabeth ran to hug her father. She kissed his cheek and ran to her room
Governor: Where are you going?
Elizabeth: To see Will.
~*~*~*~
At the black smith
Will was hammering away when he heard the bell above the door ring. He looked to find Elizabeth standing there smiling
He wiped off his hands and went to Elizabeth.
William: Elizabeth what a pleasant surprise ... don't mind me asking but what are you doing here?
Elizabeth: I needed to see you...
Will: To see me?
"Yes you," replied Elizabeth coyly. "I wanted to tell you that," she went to his ear and felt him shiver. "I love you" she whispered.
He grabbed Elizabeth by the shoulders and looked her in the eyes. He could tell she was being sincere.
"You don't know how long I've been waiting to hear those words, I love you too," With that he took her in his arms and carried her to his loft.
Elizabeth woke up and noticed that Will had pulled her against him. She thought back to their love making. He was so soft and gentle it had been both their first time and she knew she would have no other. Will was the only man for her, and somehow she knew that Will felt the same.
~*~*~*~
AN: I hope you liked it...sorry if the characters seemed a little out of character...
you make me blush...lol