kelefenn
Reaching for Stars
Innocent Love
Posts: 103
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Post by kelefenn on Jul 30, 2007 22:09:13 GMT -5
Okay, so i've written one fanfic (chemistry) so i thought id try to come up with some drabbles. If they aren't very good, please tell me what i can do to improve. --kel-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Theme: Rain Pairing: Orlando and Keira (dur =] ) Words: 277 ( i heard they had to be within 100 and 300??? )
Rain pounded outside on the London streets. The balcony door of their hotel room sat ajar, rain was slowly dripping and splashing in as the young married couple relaxed. Orlando sat on the bed, looking relieved but worried. Keira placed the pregnancy test on a tissue and sat down beside him. “Madeline” Keira gently whispered placing a soft, airy kiss upon her husband’s lips. She twisted towards him and stretched her legs over Orlando’s lap. Orlando Bloom cuddled his wife and stared deeply into her eyes. “Ava” he replied. He to placed an innocent kiss on Keira’s lips, as she had done to him. “I heard that’s the new ‘it’ name in the states for celebrity couple's babys. I don’t want that all, Orli,” Keira playfully complained. She crossed her arms and pouted her lips to display her childish emotion. “Amora, then. Like ‘sleeping beauty’,” Orlando whispered so low under his breath it made Keira's skin crawl. The rain was beating harder and harder into the hotel room. Lightning cracked and the lights went out. Orlando placed a kiss into the blackness of the room upon Keira, to show, once again, his turn was over. “And if we’re blessed with a prince?” Keira whispered to the place that she knew Orlando’s face was. She concentrated on his heavy breathing. “Then we’ll call him Orlando jr., love,” Orlando teased. He caressed his wife’s long hair and ran his fingers down to her back. He childishly fidgeted with the hem of her short nightgown as she fell slowly back on the bed, still in his arms. She placed her head on his chest and together they silently fell asleep, dreaming of the little one starting to grow in Keira's tummy.
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Post by thankful24 on Jul 30, 2007 22:26:15 GMT -5
seriously amazing- i cant wait for you to continue!! i LOVED it- it was so sweet and romantic and i am seriously jelous of one miss knightley. write more- soon!!
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kelefenn
Reaching for Stars
Innocent Love
Posts: 103
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Post by kelefenn on Jul 30, 2007 23:45:06 GMT -5
So now i know, i kinda sorta realy like writing drabbles. I was going for sumthing different on this one and i dont know if i like it as much but oh well. And yeah, i post updates rly fast. =] ______________~~*~~__________________
Theme: Nail Polish Couple: Orlando/Keira Words: 299. it was originally 369, but it didnt meet drabble limit. =]
Keira undressed and glanced at the clock “5:26. Orlando will be back by 6:00. Guests are scheduled to come at 6:30. A quick shower won’t hurt”. She missed her husband the last few weeks; he was away on business. Supposed to be home yesterday, his flight was delayed.
Her shower was quick. She stood in her robe, looking at the steam-covered mirror. Slowly she wrote ‘Mrs. Bloom’ in the mist. Keira flipped on the CD player and strutted to her vanity. Her favorite nail polish was there; the label read “Pink Punch.” Keira start to sing and applied excessive amounts to each finger and toe, layer after layer.
After 2 songs, the music stopped. Keira looked around. Orlando stared at her with a smile across his lips. “Love, you have it boiling in here,” Orlando said faking to fan himself. Goosebumps ran over Keira’s skin as he removed his shirt. Keira squealed. She couldn’t contain herself. She jumped into his arms and passionately kissed him. He laughed and carried her into their room. He lay with her, kissing her as started to unlace her robe.
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Keira stared at the ceiling, hoping this would start their family, though Orlando wanted to wait. “A little late for that” Keira thought quietly with a chuckle “What’s so funny, love?” Orlando began kissing her once more, making it impossible for her to answer.
Neither heard the door crack open. “You two love birds are supposed to be hosting a party here. We’ve hosted ourselves for half an hour” Johnny Depp stepped through the door and saw the couple. He blinked several times as if blocking the image. Then, out of all things to say, he asked, “What’s on your chest Mr. Bloom?” Keira smiled, answering for him “Pink Punch.”
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Post by xstepheezy on Jul 31, 2007 2:22:38 GMT -5
they're both amazing! keep writing them =]
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Post by pottypirate on Jul 31, 2007 2:59:01 GMT -5
aww so lovely. can't wait for more
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Post by *Syd* on Jul 31, 2007 4:40:06 GMT -5
wowee this is good!
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Jul 31, 2007 14:49:44 GMT -5
Kel, you are an ah-mazing writer!!! i love them!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
cant wait for your next ones.
where is the monkeys one??? or grease?? lol jk.
-Chel
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kelefenn
Reaching for Stars
Innocent Love
Posts: 103
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Post by kelefenn on Jul 31, 2007 15:15:28 GMT -5
Thank you. And i dont know chel. Im doing this, writing a book, zwinky ( XP ) aim myspace and i have a blog spot now ( www.xkhx.blogspot.com ) so ill work on it =]
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Jul 31, 2007 15:19:49 GMT -5
yay!! im updating mine as we speak. and then im gonna do the august challenge contest thing. you should do it too!! it sounds similar to drabble!
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kelefenn
Reaching for Stars
Innocent Love
Posts: 103
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Post by kelefenn on Jul 31, 2007 20:11:44 GMT -5
Theme:flowers Couple: Or and Ke
Orlando beamed as he saw the look of delight on his dear Keira’s face. “And that one,” Orlando pointed to another cloud, “looks like a cow on tree.” They were in the countryside of England near Keira’s parents’ house. They had followed the trail that led back to big beautiful trees and meadows covered in wild flowers.
“You know…I think I can actually kind of see that one,” Keira said suddenly serious. She sat up and smiled at Orlando. “Really? I knew you’d see it eventually, love,” Orlando said winking. “Hey baby? Do u know what I can also see?” Keira asked as she crawled closer to him on her knees.
“Hmm?” Orlando questioned back. She had seated herself on his lap with her arms around his neck.
“I can see us owning a beautiful little house, out in the countryside surronded with wild flowers, like these,” Keira said. Her mind was beginning to drift off into space.
“That would be lovely, ke,” Orlando thought. He, too, could vision it.
“Or, how much do you love me?” Keira stared deep into his eyes as she asked.
Orlando wrapped his hands around her waste, “More than all the flowers in the world.”
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Aug 1, 2007 9:53:50 GMT -5
aww cuteness!!!!!
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Post by aliaschic04 on Aug 1, 2007 12:52:05 GMT -5
Sweet! Nice drabble!
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kelefenn
Reaching for Stars
Innocent Love
Posts: 103
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Post by kelefenn on Aug 2, 2007 11:28:42 GMT -5
thanksssss ♥ Im working on a fanfic rite now. So ill update when i get the chancee.
--kel
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kelefenn
Reaching for Stars
Innocent Love
Posts: 103
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Post by kelefenn on Aug 28, 2007 20:13:55 GMT -5
Author: Kel aka kelefenn. Past works: 'Chemistry', and currently 'Who Knew' Rated: G (for goregous, teehee just joking) Theme: water, fireworks, engage =]
Breath-taking
Tears flood her flawless face, tracing her sharp features and following her cheekbones. Stars shined above and fireworks were being sent into the air somewhere on shore. She cleared her mind, listening to the waves bashing against the large ship and the slow beautiful music playing in the distance and of course to the words of her dear Orlando. She stared into his beautiful eyes. She knew he was working on asking the much-anticipated question. A gentle breeze fluttered by making Keira’s off-white dress sway at her calves. Orlando stared deep into the eyes of his beloved and continued speaking; “-and I've enjoyed every minute of it. That’s why tonight, on our one-year anniversary, I'm asking you this. Keira will you be wife?” The wind had blown her tears dry, her hair was a mess, but all she cared about, was one simple word, which is why she was astounded when the word would not break away from the back of her throat. Her mouth was dry and she couldn’t find words to speak. So what came out instead was the smallest, most gorgeous, and most remember-able thing Orlando had ever heard, as Keira inhaled and threw back a small sharp breath with a quiet shriek, as tears formed once again…and she threw herself into his arms.
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Aug 29, 2007 15:11:36 GMT -5
AHMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i think all of our 'anti-dead verbness' has paid off! lol but that was fantabulous Kel! i love it!
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