Post by takemybreathawayxo on Oct 15, 2007 19:19:45 GMT -5
Okay, so I absolutely LOVE reading Keira/Orlando fanfics so I decided to take a shot at one myself. Comments are always welcome!
The story is supposed to take place while Keira and Orlando are down in the Caribbean and there only about 2 or 3 weeks left filming....so here we go.
The Caribbean sun was setting as he watched her from his balcony. He gazed out over the ocean, sparkling in the red-pink light from the sunset. He heard the seagulls laughing at each other, while swooping low over the deep blue water. He closed his chocolate brown eyes as he breathed in the salty air, feeling his body relax as the stress from the day melted away. He ran his hand through his dark hair, which was pulled back into its normal pony-tail. He slowly opened his eyes as he looked down to the sandy beach, where an elderly couple was walking hand in hand. He looked out again at the ocean, scanning the horizon until he saw her. And there his gaze stayed.
Her golden-brown hair trailed loose behind her, as she walked slowly along the pier. Dressed in only jeans and a cami, she was absolutely stunning…beautiful.
He sat watching her, in awe at her beauty. He loved everything about her, right down to her stubbornness and bluntness; the way her eyes sparkled and danced when she laughed, and the dazzling smile she gave when she saw him. A smile beautiful enough to take a man’s breath away – his breath away. He rose from his seat, deciding that he couldn’t just sit there watching her. He wanted to talk to her, to feel her soft, smooth as he held her hand, or to feel her body pressed against his as he held her to him. With all these thoughts in mind, he made his way down to the pier.
Like? Don't Like? So-So?
I have a whole lot more written but I only wanted to post the first bit incase you didn't like it, but I would be happy to post the rest.
~ TakeMyBreathAwayXO
The story is supposed to take place while Keira and Orlando are down in the Caribbean and there only about 2 or 3 weeks left filming....so here we go.
The Caribbean sun was setting as he watched her from his balcony. He gazed out over the ocean, sparkling in the red-pink light from the sunset. He heard the seagulls laughing at each other, while swooping low over the deep blue water. He closed his chocolate brown eyes as he breathed in the salty air, feeling his body relax as the stress from the day melted away. He ran his hand through his dark hair, which was pulled back into its normal pony-tail. He slowly opened his eyes as he looked down to the sandy beach, where an elderly couple was walking hand in hand. He looked out again at the ocean, scanning the horizon until he saw her. And there his gaze stayed.
Her golden-brown hair trailed loose behind her, as she walked slowly along the pier. Dressed in only jeans and a cami, she was absolutely stunning…beautiful.
He sat watching her, in awe at her beauty. He loved everything about her, right down to her stubbornness and bluntness; the way her eyes sparkled and danced when she laughed, and the dazzling smile she gave when she saw him. A smile beautiful enough to take a man’s breath away – his breath away. He rose from his seat, deciding that he couldn’t just sit there watching her. He wanted to talk to her, to feel her soft, smooth as he held her hand, or to feel her body pressed against his as he held her to him. With all these thoughts in mind, he made his way down to the pier.
Like? Don't Like? So-So?
I have a whole lot more written but I only wanted to post the first bit incase you didn't like it, but I would be happy to post the rest.
~ TakeMyBreathAwayXO