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Post by designerdenimx3 on Jun 27, 2007 13:02:44 GMT -5
Hehe, loved it! Orlando is a very extremleye good looking dork. Update soon!
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Post by pottypirate on Jun 27, 2007 13:25:42 GMT -5
aww he's so sweet. loved it ;D
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Post by xstepheezy on Jun 27, 2007 20:27:37 GMT -5
Aw what he did was so cute! haha
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Post by missendicott on Jun 27, 2007 21:19:23 GMT -5
That was a good chapter! Updateness would be lovely!
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Post by penguinsrpals on Jun 27, 2007 21:46:50 GMT -5
Love your story! Orlando is too sweet! Looking forward to seeing what happens next! Keep up the amazing work! Please update again soon!
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Jun 28, 2007 7:33:15 GMT -5
omg im on a roll-- two updates in a row!!!!!!!! yay!!!
Chapter 16
Keira apprehensively followed Orlando into Johnny Depp’s already jam-packed mansion. Orlando grabbed her hand, and they made their way through the crowd to where Johnny stood, greeting his guests. “Or! Keir! There’s my two favorite swashbucklers!” Johnny said, giving Keira a hug. He then gave Orlando a light punch on the arm and said, “Hey, Or, where’s that smokin’ hot date you said you were bringing?”
Orlando blushed as he replied, “You just hugged her.”
Johnny’s eyes sparkled with amusement as he said, “Ah! So it is you’ve found yourself a girl!”
“Shut up!” Orlando said, rolling his eyes, but smiling nonetheless. “You want something to drink?” he asked Keira.
“I’ll have... a Coke,” she decided, thinking of her last hangover. “Okay,” Orlando said. “I’ll be back in a jiffy. You won’t even notice I’m gone.”
Yeah right!, Keira thought as she stared longingly at his retreating back. Johnny studied her, trying to make out what was going through her head. She was too lost in her thoughts to notice. Then, suddenly, Johnny Depp knew what was plaguing Keira Knightley.
“How long?” he asked, a knowing smile dancing upon his lips. Keira tore her eyes away from Orlando’s back and unintelligibly asked, “Huh?”
“How long?” Johnny asked as his smile grew wider.
Keira was confused. “Johnny, I don’t understand what you’re asking!”
“How long have you been in love with Mr. Bloom?!” Johnny practically shouted.
“I don’t know what you’re talking about,” Keira mumbled, keeping her eyes on the floor, her face growing redder by the second. “Cut the bullsh*t, Keira,” Johnny said. “We both know the truth, and the truth is that you are head-over-heels, madly in love with Orlando Bloom.” Keira hung her head and then whispered, “Four years.”
“What?” Johnny asked. It was possibly the thing he least expected to hear. What he had expected to hear was “You’re right” or “What do I do?” or “No, I’m not!” What in the heck of the world was she talking about?
“Four years,” she said again. Okay, she’s officially lost it, Johnny thought to himself. Keira noticed that Johnny still looked confused, so she added, “The answer to your question.” Johnny paused. “You haven’t told him yet, have you?” She shook her head. “What if he feels the same way?” Johnny asked.
“You sound like The Voice.” It was out of her mouth before she thought about it. She immediately regretted saying it, and her face reddened.
“What voice?” Johnny wanted to know. Thought confirmed: Keira Knightley is crazy, he thought to himself.
“It’s nothing,” Keira told him. “Just forget about it.”
Johnny gave her a look that clearly said, “Oh my God, I’m talking to a lunatic,” but he chose to press on with the matter at hand rather to pursue the topic of “The Voice.” “You should tell him how you feel. You’ll wonder about what could’ve been if you don’t tell him how you really, truly feel. I’ll bet my lucky knickers he feels the same way!”
For the first time in her life, it dawned on Keira just how important Orlando was to her. She didn’t want to lose him. “You know what?” Keira asked. “I never thought I’d say this, but Johnny... you’re... you’re right.”
“Of course I am, love,” Johnny replied, his eyes twinkling. “I’m Johnny Depp!”
“I’m gonna go find Orlando and tell him how I feel!” With that, she was off to find her one and only and pledge her undying love to him.
“That’s the spirit, love!” Johnny called after her. After she disappeared into the crowd, he sighed and said, “Oh boy, I need a drink!” ------------------------------------------------------------------------ this is possibly my favorite chapter!! hope you guys enjoyed it! thanks for being such awesome readers!!!!!
-Rachel-
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Post by pottypirate on Jun 28, 2007 11:07:03 GMT -5
yay she's gonna tell him ;D update update
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Post by penguinsrpals on Jun 28, 2007 12:29:50 GMT -5
I love it Rachel! “Of course I am, love,” Johnny replied, his eyes twinkling. “I’m Johnny Depp!” - my favorite line! I'm so happy Keira's going to tell Orlando! Looking forward to seeing what happens next! Keep up the amazing work! Please update again soon!
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Post by xstepheezy on Jun 28, 2007 13:26:10 GMT -5
Whoohooo That was an awesome chapter!
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Jun 28, 2007 20:14:56 GMT -5
oh my golly goodness 2 updates in one day!!! couldn't resist, mate!
chapter 17
As Keira made her way through the crowd, her head was spinning. She was going to tell him! Oh God, she was going to tell him!!! She tried not to hyperventilate as she imagined this going wrong in a thousand ways, nearly all of them ending with her in tears. Except for the one where she was dead. That couldn’t really happen right: to die from telling your feelings to someone and they don’t feel the same way?? Oh yes, it can!, she panicked in her head. It’s called depression! Oh my God I’m gonna die of depression! Wait, Keira Knightley, calm down! You are acting like the lunatic Johnny believes you are! If all goes wrong tonight, you must hang on to your sanity, hear me? If nothing else, at least you can prove Johnny wrong! She made her way over to where the drinks were. She saw Orlando, two cokes in his hand. She was about to call out his name, but it died in her throat as a pretty blonde girl put her hand on the back of his head and drew her closer to her. The unknown blonde then whispered something in his ear, something that made him laugh. The blonde then leaned in to give him a kiss, but Keira tore her eyes away, not wanting to see it.
Tears fell down her face, and her heart shattered. At that moment, Orlando looked up, the blonde’s lips inches from his own face. He saw Keira standing there, tears slowly sliding down her face. God, I’m an idiot!, he thought to himself.
“Keira!” he called out. She promptly turned and began to walk away, not knowing or caring where she was going. She just needed to get away from all of it: Orlando, the blonde, the blaring music, the flashing lights, everything! “Keira!” Orlando called again, pushing the blonde girl out of the way and pursuing Keira. “Keira!” he said, out of breath, as he caught up to her. He grabbed her arm and wheeled her around to face him. Tears were now falling freely down her beautiful face. “Keira.... Look, I don’t even know that girl!”
“So that makes it better?” she choked out, pulling her arm out of his grasp. “So that makes it okay?” Tears were now streaming down her face and splashing onto the floor. “I thought that maybe...” She was crying to hard to finish. She turned and ran, sobbing, to the nearest bathroom.
Orlando stood in the middle of the crowded room. He was in shock. She thought that maybe... what? Probably that you weren’t such an donkeyhole, he thought to himself. Things are so messed up now. But I’ve got fix them. I’ve got to. ----------------------------------------------------------------------- i know its such a depressing chapter, but it had to happen! the next chapter gets exciting! yay for exciting! sorry- im kinda hyper. hehehe hooray for hyperness!!!! okay, i gotta lay off the chocolate
anyway- thanks again for being such awesome readers!!!!!
***!Rachel!***
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Post by missendicott on Jun 28, 2007 20:45:45 GMT -5
Wow. Sadness enveloped me during that chapter. That stupid blonde brought back memories of Kate... *twitch*
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Post by pottypirate on Jun 29, 2007 3:48:41 GMT -5
awww poor Keira. agreed the blonde reminded me of Kate. update update Orlando has to do something.
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Post by thankful24 on Jun 29, 2007 10:19:25 GMT -5
dude update soon- you cant leave us hanging like that!!
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Jun 29, 2007 10:22:09 GMT -5
i decided to update again so you wont be let hanging for too long...
Chapter 18
Keira had finally stopped crying. She was in one of the bathrooms in Johnny Depp’s house. She had sobbed for the last half hour, but now she was finished. Why did it have to be like this?
She sighed. But she still loved him. She still loved him so much. She was jolted from her utterly depressing thoughts when there was a gentle knock on the bathroom door.
“Go away!” she snapped, her voice hoarse from so much crying.
Instead of heeding her warning, the intruder barged right in. “Miss me?” he asked. Keira’s throat went dry, and her body went numb. She looked up, and her worst fear was realized. Rupert Friend stood in the doorway, a malicious grin on his face. “How did you find me?” she whispered, fear pulsing through her veins.
“I asked around,” he said. “Keir-bear, we need to talk.” He took a step towards her. “The talking has already been done, Rupert!” Keira told him. “We’re over! There’s nothing else to be said!” She tried to step around him.
He grabbed her arm and squeezed it so hard that it burned. He put his face right next to hers and snarled, “Nothing’s over until I say it’s over!”
“Ouch!” Keira cried. “Rupert, you’re hurting me!”
Instead of letting go, Rupert dug his fingernails deeper into Keira’s skin. She gasped in pain. “I’m going to make you’re life a living hell for what you did to me,” Rupert whispered. “You pissed me off. Now you’re going to pay!"
Keira started to sob. Please God!, she silently prayed. Please send me a knight in shining armor to come and save me! Please! ------------------------------------------------------------ next update coming soon!!! thanks for being such amazing readers!!!!!
..*..Rachel..*..
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Post by thankful24 on Jun 29, 2007 12:17:19 GMT -5
ooohhh geeze- you better update soon- cause keira neds to be saved!!! great update!
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Post by penguinsrpals on Jun 29, 2007 12:21:17 GMT -5
Ahhhhh! I had a bad feeling their was going to be some blonde kissing him! Not Rupert! Looking forward to seeing what happens next! Keep up the amazing work! Please update again soon!
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Post by pottypirate on Jun 29, 2007 12:52:13 GMT -5
update update Orli must come and save the day
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Post by xstepheezy on Jun 29, 2007 13:13:45 GMT -5
Oh No! Where is Orlando?! We need him to save Keira! Update soon
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Jun 29, 2007 20:33:57 GMT -5
Oh! I missed three updates! But now i'm all caught up, and seriously, don't leave us hanging like that! Update soon! Please?
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Post by missendicott on Jun 29, 2007 20:50:20 GMT -5
Kick Rupert in the face! He deserves pain!!!
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