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Post by missawesomeness11 on Jun 30, 2007 9:17:11 GMT -5
geez, when I wrote the part about the blonde, i didnt even THINK of miss Kate Bosworth... should have done that... oh well, it works this way too! ok- this one is short, but maybe i'll update again today. hopefully before my brothers baseball game. that is extremely boring.. anyways, i'm rambling, but heres the next update:
Chapter 19
“You really think so, Johnny?” Orlando asked his old friend. “You think she’ll accept an apology, even though I screwed up bigger than big?”
“Mate,” Johnny said, sinking into a chair. “I know women. Most of the time. Except for that one time in Paris where I thought she was a woman, but it turned out to be a man in a dress with a wig and suspicious packages under his dress.... I think I still have the scar actually.... But anyways, back to Keira. Miss Knightley is the kind of woman who... who likes men who put themselves, and their egos, on the line for her.” It also helps if your name is Orlando Bloom, he added to himself.
“Thanks for the advice, Johnny!” Orlando said, hurrying off to find Keira. He asked everyone he met if they had seen her, and one by one they all shook their heads. Finally he came across one pretty brunette girl who said she had seen Keira go into the downstairs bathroom, but that had been an hour ago. No one had seen her since. The girl also offered Orlando her number, but he chose to ignore that part. He was in hot enough water as it was. Orlando decided to try the downstairs bathroom. The door was slightly ajar, and he heard voices inside. He crept closer for a better look. --------------------------------------------------------------- again, i know its short, but tons of excitement in the next chapter! *i promise!*
thanks for being such awesome readers!!!
((Rachel))
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Jun 30, 2007 11:16:30 GMT -5
Update soon!!!! I love this story!
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Post by xstepheezy on Jun 30, 2007 12:14:31 GMT -5
Oh my, the suspense! Can't wait for the update!!
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Post by pottypirate on Jun 30, 2007 13:16:03 GMT -5
you left us on a cliffy!!! Update fast
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Post by missendicott on Jun 30, 2007 17:36:00 GMT -5
" I think I still have a scar actually." Haha! Wonderfulness. Update! ^_^
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Jun 30, 2007 19:58:42 GMT -5
hey heres another update! two in one day, two in a row! thats amazing! anyways, thanks for the wonderful comments!!!!!
Chapter 20
“I love you,” Rupert whispered into Keira’s hair. She said nothing. “I need you, Keira,” he told her. She was silent, teardrops rolling down her face. “Well?” he asked impatiently.
She spat on his foot. “I hate you!” she told him. “I never loved you! I’ve been in love with someone else the whole time! I hate you, I hate you, I hate----“
“ENOUGH!” screamed Rupert. He slapped her across the face. She cried out in pain as she placed a trembling hand to her burning cheek. “You’re just a little whore that nobody cares about,” he sneered. “You’re an unlovable b*tch. Unlovable to everyone but me. I’m the only one who can love you.”
“You’re the unlovable bastard!” Keira yelled.
Rupert’s eyes flashed. He raised his hand to slap her again, but someone stepped out of the shadows and grabbed it.
“Don’t you dare lay a hand on Keira!” Orlando warned him. “Never again! Not while I’m around.”
Keira sighed with relief. God had answered her prayer!
“You!” Rupert snarled.
“Me,” Orlando said quietly. “What are you gonna do about it?”
Rupert swung a lazy punch at Orlando, who dodged it easily. Orlando’s arm launched at Rupert’s face, finding its target. Rupert let go of Keira’s arm with a yelp of pain as blood poured from his nose. Keira backed away, trembling, to a corner.
Then two burly security guards walked into the bathroom, followed closely by Johnny Depp.
“There he is!” Johnny cried triumphantly, pointing at Rupert. “That’s the little booger that snuck in here tonight without being invited!”
“And he abused Keira,” Orlando added. He pointed to Keira’s arm, where Rupert’s fingers were etched into her skin.
“Take him away, boys!” Johnny told the two security guards. They promptly lifted Rupert up and carried him out. Johnny left with them, wondering out loud how the little booger got in. ----------------------------------------------------------------
i love writing Johnny's lines, I must say. anyways, thanks for being such awesome readers!!!!
->Rachel<-
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Post by xstepheezy on Jun 30, 2007 20:52:57 GMT -5
Yay an update! Orlando came to rescue Keira
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Post by thankful24 on Jun 30, 2007 21:19:47 GMT -5
oooh! great update- cant wait to see what you do next!!
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Jun 30, 2007 21:22:19 GMT -5
Oh, wow! That was great! Orlando saved her ;D
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Post by missendicott on Jun 30, 2007 21:56:45 GMT -5
Hooplah for Rupert getting what he deserves!
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Post by pottypirate on Jul 1, 2007 5:14:47 GMT -5
Yay for Orlando punching Rupert. I love reading Rupert getting hurt. injured Rupert is goooood ;D
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Jul 1, 2007 14:03:45 GMT -5
yeah, and Becky, the ironic thing is that Rupert just got a broken nose in your update too!! haha how i love irony! anyways, i have a slumber party to attend tonight, so this is the only update for today.
Chapter 21
“I’m so sorry, Keira,” Orlando apologized. “I never meant to hurt you.”
“I know,” she said. “I was just... I dunno what I was. I guess I was jealous.”
“Jealous, huh?” Orlando smiled. “Well, I think you had a right to be. After all, you’re my date, not her.”
“I suppose,” she said, even though she knew she would’ve been jealous no matter what.
Orlando stepped closer, closing the space between them. He wrapped his arms around her. “I was so scared when I saw him slap you!” Orlando confessed. “I knew I had to do something. So I told Johnny what was going on, and then I came in here to stop him.”
“To save me, you mean,” Keira said.
Orlando shrugged. “I guess I’m more like Will than I thought.”
Keira looked up at him. “You’re my knight in shining armor, Or.” The moment felt right; she knew she had to tell him sometime, so she added, “I love you.”
Orlando looked down at her and smiled. “You love me?” he asked, his eyes twinkling. “How long?”
Keira sighed. What was it with men and that question? First Johnny, now Orlando! “Four years.”
“You remember Kate, right?” Orlando asked.
Keira nodded. Please don’t say you’re still in love with her! Please, Orlando, don’t say that!, she willed silently in her head. She kept her lips glued tightly together so she wouldn’t be tempted to call Orlando’s ex-girlfriend Kate Bosworth a b*tch. That, she knew, would be improper and impolite.
“Yeah, well... we broke up because... because I was in love with someone who... well... who wasn’t her. Ironically, I was in love with... I was in love with you.”
“Really?” Keira asked shyly. “You were in love with me?” Were, not am, she added to herself. “No,” Orlando said. Keira’s face fell as she thought, Well, there goes my happily ever after! “I am in love with you still.”
Keira looked up at him and smiled. He smiled back and then swept her up in his arms and kissed her.
When they broke apart, there was a loud cheer. Half the party was standing outside the bathroom door! In the very front and clearly the ringleader of this spying escapade, was Johnny.
“Finally!” he said. “I’ve been waiting for four freakin’ years for this to happen!”
Keira and Orlando laughed. “So have I, Johnny,” Keira said, looking up adoringly at Orlando. “So have I.” -------------------------------------------------------------------
okeydokey, theres only one more chapter to go. maybe two. i made write one more. i dont know yet. hehe. welp, anyways, hopefully it'll be finished by tomorrow.
toodles for today! [boy that was fun to type!]
~*~*~Rachel~*~*~
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Post by pottypirate on Jul 1, 2007 14:19:28 GMT -5
woo there together.
Yeah Ruperts nose got broken in T.W.H.R.F.S but it did in Path to Love too 3 punches in the nose for Rupert. wooo hooo. What can i say i like the idea of Orli punching Rupert in the nose. Also the Groin is a good part for him to get injured.
anyway update soon.
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Jul 1, 2007 15:49:24 GMT -5
YAY! Wonderful update
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Post by xstepheezy on Jul 1, 2007 18:56:45 GMT -5
finally haha loved the update!
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Post by thankful24 on Jul 1, 2007 20:22:59 GMT -5
oooh great chappy!
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kelefenn
Reaching for Stars
Innocent Love
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Post by kelefenn on Jul 2, 2007 15:24:59 GMT -5
OMG! Thats great! plz plz plz update soooooon! ~~~kelli~~
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Jul 2, 2007 15:31:06 GMT -5
mmkay... after lots of thought, i've decided that this is indeed the last chappy. but after this, i think i'll do some drabble and maybe start another fic. anyways, this is my found farewell to "The Thing With Love Is". Thank you to everyone to has enjoyed reading it! Even if you didn't enjoy it, thanks for reading it anyways!
Chapter 22
One week later...
Keira’s stomach was filled with butterflies as she sat in the back of the limo. Sure, she was nervous, but yet she felt as if nothing could go wrong tonight. Tonight she and Orlando were going public about their relationship at the premiere of his new movie. They had only been dating for a week, but they were in love. Nothing else mattered, right?
Orlando squeezed her hand. “Don’t worry!” he told her. “You look beautiful.”
She smiled shyly at him. She had worn “The Dress” for good luck. The black one with pink polka dots. The dress of her dreams.
“It’s time,” Orlando whispered as he prepared to exit the limo. “No matter what happens, I love you.”
“I love you too,” she whispered back, feeling like she was seventeen again, going to the prom. She could hear Orlando’s fangirls shrieking hysterically outside. She felt her stomach flip over.
“You ready?” Orlando asked her. She nodded, afraid that if she opened her mouth, she would throw up. On the lucky dress. In the gorgeous limousine. On the amazing Orlando Bloom. One word: EWWW!!!!!!
The door opened, sending a pool of light into the previously dark limousine. Orlando stepped out of the limo, grabbed Keira’s hand, and hoisted her out into the sunshine.
The crowd went silent. Deathly silent. Oh sh*t!, Keira thought to herself. They don’t like us a couple! Oh sh*t, oh sh*t, oh sh*t!
Just then the crowd erupted into a deafening cheer, even louder than when Orlando’s limo had pulled up. Keira couldn’t help it. She grinned. She looked up at Orlando, her darling Orlando, and saw that he wore a similar grin on his face.
“I have another premiere next week in London,” he said over the roar of the crowd. “Are you interested?”
“Are you kidding?” Keira shouted back. “I wouldn’t miss it for the world!”
Orlando looked down at her, not believing how lucky he was. Then he swept her up in his arms and kissed her passionately, oblivious to the screaming fans and mad photographers around them.
There was the sound of thousands of camera’s clicking away madly and thousands of fans “awww”ing as they broke apart.
“I love you,” Orlando whispered in her ear.
“I love you,” Keira replied. In that moment, Keira Knightley knew she had found her happily ever after.
The End ------------------------------------------------------------------- i loved writing this fanfic, and believe me, its not easy to say goodbye to it. but everything has to end sometime, right? anyways, thanks for being such awesome readers!!!!
=] Rachel [=
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Post by missawesomeness11 on Jul 2, 2007 15:32:14 GMT -5
hey thanks Kel! when you finally gonna start working on yours??
=] Chel [=
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Jul 2, 2007 15:38:18 GMT -5
Just like the fans in your story, i did a big "AWWW!!" That was so cute and a great ending! Loved it! Can't wait to see what you write next
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