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Post by designerdenimx3 on Aug 10, 2006 14:39:01 GMT -5
Ok, this is my first fan-fic that i've written/posted and i want to ask you guys to do something for me. So far, i've written 7 chapters to this little story, but i'm only going to post the first two and then i want you to honestly tell me what you think. If you hate it, tell me. If you love it, great; then i'll post more Or if you want to make suggestions, do so. I just don't want to post a 15 chapter story that no one reads. Thanks!
Chapter One: She could hear muffled screams as the long, dark limousine approached Leicester Square, the area holding the Pirates of the Caribbean: Dead Man's Chest premiere. Her excitement was building as she opened the door and stepped out. The instant her slender body was out of the car, she became blinded with the bright flashes going off all around her. Hundreds of fans, paparazzi, and news reporters screamed her name.
"Keira, Keira! Over here!" they all shouted at here. But she completely ignored them. There would be plenty of time for interviews and autographs later. Right now all she could focus on was finding the cast and crew. Johnny, Lee, Mackenzie, Naomie, Jack, Gore, Jerry, and most importantly, Him.
After stopping to sign a few posters, she spotted them near the doorway. Keira hurried over. It had been about three months since she had last seen everyone.
"Oh Keria! There you are! What took you so long?" questioned Johnny. He then gave her a quick hug before he could answer.
"Be quiet Johnny, you know i'm never on time!" Keira responded.
"Excuses, Excuses." he sighed. "Anyway, we were just about to take some pictures with the cast."
"What?" Keira said, looking up at him. "Oh! Right, the cast!" she had completely forgotten that she was at the premiere. She had been lost in her thoughts about something, or should i say, someone else.
"Come on!" Johnny told her, shaking his head and rolling his eyes. They then both hurried over to the rest of the cast. Keira greeted everyone as happily as she greeted Johnny. But something didn't feel right. Something was missing...
"Hey guys?" she asked between shots. "Where's Orlando? He told me he would be here and i haven't seen him in forever!"
"Oh well um-" stammered Jack. "He actually had to go take care of something, er, someone. But he should be right back!"
"Ok, right. Cool." Keira responded, trying her best to sound convincing. But she wasn't fooling anyone. Especially Johnny and Jack.
"Is it me, or do you too have a feeling that tonight is going to be very interesting?" questioned Jack to Johnny.
"Oh, it's not just you. Tonight's about to get very interesting indeed, mate. Very interesting indeed....
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Aug 10, 2006 15:00:59 GMT -5
Chapter Two Keira frantically looked around the room. It had been four and a half hours since Jack had said Orlando would "be right back". But he was nowhere to be found. Heck, he wasn't even at the "movie" part of the premiere. I mean, why ever bother coming to the premiere if you aren't going to see the movie. She sighed and decided to have a good time anyway. Keira wandered over to the table where Jack, Johnny, and Mackenzie were seated. She sat down and just as she opened her mouth to speak, a familiar voice filled her ears.
"Keira! It's so great to finally get to see you!" he told her. As soon as she heard his voice, Keira jumped up, turned around, and gave Orlando a long, tight hug.
"I really missed you Orlando." she whispered in his ear.
"Me too, Keira." Orlando whispered back. "Me too."
They pulled away from each other and Orlando silently observed her. She was amazing.
"Wow!" he said breathlessly, as he ran his fingers through his head of chocolate brown curls. "You look absolutley stunning!"
"What? This?" she said. Keira looked down, as if noticing her ensemble for the first time. She was draped in a floor-length, burnt orange, designer gown with a deep v-neck and a gold, studded belt wrapped around her waist.
"Oh, well thanks Or. You don't look to bad yourself." Keria told him.
"Thanks Keir."
"So, Orlando," Keira asked. "I haven't seen you since March! How have you bee-" someone had interupted her.
"Orlando! Come on! I want to show you something!" Kate, the girl who had stopped Keira from speaking, begged.
"Oh! Kate! Hi." Orlando said, surprised. "Um, Keira? Could we finish this later?"
"Ya! Sure." Keira replied with a rather forced and fake smile.
"Ok great!" He said as Kate pulled him away. "Talk to you later."
"Whatever" Keira sighed as she sat down, slumping in her chair next to Mackenzie Crook. Part of her was thinking about how annoyoed she was at Kate. But, the other part of her was thinking that Kate had the right to do that. Afterall, she was Orlando's girlfriend.
On the other side of the table, Jack and Johnny started whispering, never taking their eyes off of Keira.
"You know, Johnny. I think your right. This night has gotton very interesting." Jack stated.
"Of course i'm right! I mean, I'm Johnny Depp!" He said with a smile to signal that he was kidding,
"Shutup!" Jack laughed. He was still wacthing Keira watch Orlando and Kate dance with each other. "Hm...I wonder.." Jack said to himself.
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Post by *Syd* on Aug 10, 2006 15:59:52 GMT -5
gggggrrrrrrrrr kate and her timing. for your first fan fic your pretty damn good. you've got me wanting more. hint hint!!
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Post by missendicott on Aug 10, 2006 16:03:49 GMT -5
This is lovely! The drama is inticing! I don't know what that means, but it's inticing! I loved Johnny's last line
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Post by aliaschic04 on Aug 10, 2006 16:08:47 GMT -5
Ooooh. This fic sounds interesting to me. It kinda sounds like a commentary on what happened during the premiere.... tying in the pics and everything. Update por favor!! ;D
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Aug 10, 2006 16:42:04 GMT -5
Thanks guys! I'll post chapter three sometime tomorrow!
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Post by venus567 on Aug 10, 2006 16:50:30 GMT -5
Fabulous job! Absoultely adore it! ;D
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Post by Lola on Aug 10, 2006 17:30:10 GMT -5
It´s really really good!!... grrr...I hate Kate!
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Post by thankful24 on Aug 10, 2006 18:19:32 GMT -5
Ohh i want more!!! NOW!!! haha, pretty please with sugar on top? this is really good!!
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Aug 11, 2006 12:07:54 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments guys. If you liked the drama in the last two chapters, then you should like it in this one to. Just, don't hate me for it.
Chapter three: It had been a little longer than a month since the London premire and Keira Knightley couldn't wait to get started filming the second half of the thrid Pirates movie. She had arrived in the Caribbean yesterday, two days before everybody else. She was hoping to have some time to herself before everyone else arrived. Today was her last "me" day, because tomrrow everyone would get here and rehersals would begin. Keira had just woken up and stepped outside onto her balcony. It was 9:13am and a beautiful day. She yawed, thinking about what she was going to do. Probably lay out on one of Dominica's pristine becahes, soaking up the sun.
The next day...
While Keira did enjoy a few days to herself, she couldn't wait to see everyone again. Even though she had seen everyone about four weeks ago, Keira missed them like crazy. Fliming was scheduled to take place from August to the very end of October. Three months with some of her best friends. Life was good. Well, until Orlando showed up that is. Keira had been rather mad at hime when he had rudley left her to go party with his girlfriend.
Keira was quietley sitting in the lobby reading the latest draft of the script when Orlando walked through the hotel doors.
"Keira! Hey, how are you?" Orlando aksed her almost immeaditley after he had walked in. He rushed over to the navy blue armchair that was beside the matching couch.
"Oh. I'm great. Just peachy." she responded flatly. Her eyes never left the script. "Look, can we finish this later? I have more important things to do!" she almost-screamed at him, throwing what he had said to her about a month ago, right back in his face. With that being said, Keira stood up, and made her way to the elevator, leaving a very hurt and confused Orlando in the lobby.
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sorry if this chapter seems short. It looks longer on paper. Anyways, chapters 4,5,6,7, and 8 are all written and will be posted soon!
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Post by pottypirate on Aug 11, 2006 12:38:55 GMT -5
your doin a fab job. keep those updates coming
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Post by missendicott on Aug 11, 2006 14:05:06 GMT -5
I'm addicted now.
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Post by venus567 on Aug 11, 2006 14:26:33 GMT -5
great update! ;D
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Post by aliaschic04 on Aug 11, 2006 16:42:30 GMT -5
Oooh. More more!!
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Post by thankful24 on Aug 11, 2006 16:53:59 GMT -5
post them ALL!!! haha, i have to say i'm addicted. GREAT job!
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Aug 11, 2006 17:57:37 GMT -5
Since you guys want it, i guess i'll post it. I've got nothing better to do (i know - i need to get a life). Hope you guys like it. It's longer than the last chapter (i think) Ohh, and no time has passes between chpaters 3&4.
Chapter four "Finally!" Keira muttered to herself as the elevator arrived. She went iside and pressed the button to floor number five. Once she relized that she was alone and that the door was shut, she leaned back against the wall. She couldn't believe that she had just said that to Orlando. Actually, she felt good about making him feel bad[\i]. That's exactly what he had done to her the night of the preimere. But in the end, she new it would create a bunch of high-school drama. She sighed, stepped out of the elevator, and made a bee-line to her hotel room.
This is going to be a long day she thought to herself as she fumbled with the keys to her room. It was only 8:57 in the morning.
Later that day...
Keira yawned as she woke up from a long nap after seeing Orlando. Realizing where she was, Keira grabbed her cell phone. The phone said it was 12:16pm. A few minutes later, something clicked inside her head.
"Oh crap!" she shouted, suddenly realizing that she was late for a 12:00 cast meeting in Gore's room. She sprinted off her bed and out of her room, dashing down two flights of stairs. Once she was infront of room 123, she opened the door. But she didn't find Johnny, or Lee, or Jerry. Instead, Keira found two totally unfamiliar people watching T.V. Ouickey and quietley, she stepped out and shut the door.
"Wait a second!" Keria said to herself. "Gore's room is on the fourth floor. Jerry's is on the third!" Letting out a frustrated groan, she sprinted up another flight of stairs. At last, she had finally arrived infront of the right door, room 223. She opended the door and went inside.
"Sorry im late guys!" she panted, exhausted from all the running. "I accidentally fell asl-"
"It's ok Keira." Orlando said with a stare colder than ice. "We don't want you here anyway."
Keira looked up and caught her staring right back at him. She could feel the tension buliding in the dead silence. She slowly made her way over to and empty chair next to Lee, and as far away from Orlando as possible. Keira was still staring into his dark, brown eyes, when suddenly, Jerry's voice broke the silence and Keira tore her eyes away from Orlando's.
"So, where were we?" Jerry asked. "Oh! Right. Filming will start next week, and rehersals will begin on Wednesday. So enjoy your two days off because things are about to get busy." he told everyone. "Well," he continued. "Looks like we're done!" Jerry said, getting up from the table. "Go have fun!"
"What! Thats' it?" Keria practically shouted.
"Don't you remember sleepy-head? You weren't even awake for half of it!" Jack said to Keira, trying to lighten the mood.
"Oh, right. I forgot." she replied with an embarassed smile. "Did i miss anything though?"
"I fill you in later, don't worry." responded Jack.
"Thanks" she said with a small smile.
On the other end of the table, Orlando was still watching Keira. But he wasn't mad at her. This time a new wave of emotions had washed over him. That emotion was jealousy. He was jealous that Keria would be spending her first night with Jack. And not him. But Orlando was still angry. Although, this time, he was mad at himself. Mad that he hadn't offered to fill Keira in. He sighed and shook his head.
What's wrong with you? There just friends, nothing more. Just like you and Keira. Orlando thought to himself. Knowing that he wouldn't convince anyone, he stood up and quietly left the room.
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Post by venus567 on Aug 11, 2006 18:40:34 GMT -5
yeah! loved it! ;D
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Post by missendicott on Aug 11, 2006 21:55:38 GMT -5
Me wanty update!
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Post by Lola on Aug 12, 2006 18:45:02 GMT -5
I NEED MORE SOON! ;D
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Aug 13, 2006 14:05:08 GMT -5
Hey guys! This chapter's a bit short. 6&7 tomorrow!
Chapter 5 Orlando yawned. It was 8:23am and the second day of rehearsals. He hadn't gone to bed last night until one, but didn't fall asleep till two-thirty. He was just about to doze off when someone called out his name. It was Johnny.
"So, Orlando" he wondered. "What's the problem between you and Keira? You've been friends for 5 or 6 years and i've never seen you act like that toward each other." Suddenly, everyone who was at the cast meeting yesterday and in the lobby today, looked up.
"Um, well" stammered Orlando. He really didn't want to explain this to everyone. But at the same time, he was so thankful that Keira was somewhere else. Orlando let out a long sigh and continued. "I honestly don't' know. The last time i saw here was at the after-party in London."
"Right. Ok." Johnny said. "So what happened at the party?" she asked with concern. Now the cast was really listening, because they too had the same questions.
"Well," Orlando said. "I hadn't seen Keira all night, so i went over to talk to her. She jumped up, gave me a long, tight hug and said that she had really missed me." he stopped and and took a quick breath before continuing. "So she was about to ask me something when Kate interrupted her. I asked if we could finish this later, and she said "yes" with a smile on her face." "Then Kate dragged me away and we started dancing."
"Ok, let me tell you three things, mate." Johnny replied. "One, that smile was fake! Two, when you ran off with Miss Bosworth, Keira had an extremely upset look on her face. And thirdly, whenever a girl is mad at you, just apologize even if you didn't do anything!"
"So, what do I do?" Orlando asked after a few minuets with a confused look on his face, not getting it at all.
"You know what to do." he replied with a smile. Johnny then got up and walked over to the elevator.
After thinking about what he said, Orlando was still unsure about what to do. He jumped off the couch and dashed over to Johnny's elevator. He caught it just in time and stepped inside.
"So Johnny." Orlando said, turning to face him.
"What do you want know!?" re replied, annoyed that his friend wasn't getting it.
"Well, am i supposed to apologize or not?" Orlando asked, ignoring Johnny's rude comment.
"Yes! Apologize! Tell her your sorry." Johnny told him and then let out a sigh of relief. He really didn't want to explain it again.
"Do you know where she is though?" wondered Orlando.
"It's not even 9:30. Knowing Keira, she's probably still asleep!"
"Thanks Johnny, you've been a big help." Orlando told him gratefully just as the elevator stopped on floor number five.
They both stepped out and made there way down separate hallways. Johnny was off to call his family and Orlando was going to make things better with Keira. Things were finally going to get back to normal around here. Well, thats what he hoped.
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