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Post by missendicott on Aug 20, 2006 16:23:46 GMT -5
I like how "it was the truth" is bolded! Because it is! He. Great chapter!
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Post by thankful24 on Aug 20, 2006 16:26:45 GMT -5
so good, can't wait for the next update!
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Post by Lola on Aug 22, 2006 16:33:49 GMT -5
Great chapter!! ;D
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Aug 25, 2006 18:01:24 GMT -5
heyy guys! so i've had the busiest week ever (school, tons of homework, study guide, assemblies, 2 diff try-out and bell choir plus a magazine sale) and i've had no time for my story. so you'll hopefully get it tomorrow. i'm babysitting tonight so i can probably finish 10 and then re-do 11 which is missing 3 pages and got really screwed up. Anyway, im just letting you guys know im still here and all. i'll post tomorrow if i get the chance.
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Post by thankful24 on Aug 25, 2006 18:08:23 GMT -5
can't wait! i love this story!
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Aug 27, 2006 17:29:33 GMT -5
Chapter 10
It had been a week since Keira and Rupert had not so totally officially broken up. Orlando had hardly seen Keira since. He supposed that she just wanted to be alone and was in her room during breaks, but he had missed her. Then one day in September, there was a knock on Orlando's door. He got up and opened it. On the other side was Keira.
"Keira?!" Orlando said softly. She was wearing light pink track pants and a matching hoodie with a tank top on underneath. It was obvious that she had been crying. Her eyes and cheeks were red and there were a few black mascara stains on the sleeves of her sweatshirt.
"I know it's a bit late," Keira started. Orlando looked up at his clock. It was 10:30. "But i just, i just really need someone to talk to." Keira wiped her eyes again. She was so sick of crying.
"Keira! Keira! It's totally fine!" Orlando pulled her into a sweet hug and then took her hand and lead her to his bed. He sat down and Keira rested her small body next to his. Her head lay in the space between Orlando's shoulder and neck. "What's on you mind?"
"Well" Keira began. She could feel the tears coming. "You know that Rupert and I broke up. I mean, you were on the same boat as us, you heard the whole thing. So, he called about an hour ago and wanted to see if I would take him back, which is you know, just so typically Rupert! I mean, seriously, the guy will not take "no" for an answer. But, of course, i wouldn't and then all of the sudden he starts yelling and cussing at me for no reason!" Keira closed her eyes and took a deep breath. "I hung up on him and then he called back. I'm pretty sure he left a message, but I'm to afraid to check. I'm just so sick of Rupert. I just want that possessive, clingy little .... THING out of my life!" Her eyes started to water. The tears were coming.
Ya, and i want that possessive little thing out of your life to Orlando unconsciously thought to himself. Keira was still sitting in his arms. The two of them sat there for what seemed like hours, neither wanting to destroy the perfect moment between them. Orlando finally spoke up.
"Keira, look at me." he instructed softly. She looked up at his concerned face. "You need to find someone," Orlando said as he wiped a stray away with his thumb. "who doesn't just love you only because of your fame, or because your pretty. You need to find someone loves you for you. And Rupert is definitely not that person.
"Orlando!" she sniffed. It looked as if she was going to cry again. But instead, she sat up and looked directley into his brown eyes.
"What?! What did i do?" he responded, thinking he had said the wrong thing. Again.
"Your such a good friend!" Keira said as she gave him a hug. "Thank-you" she whispered. Orlando lost the strength in his knees and he fell back down onto a mess of sheets, bringing Keira with him. She was now on top of him. His hand found hers and their fingers laced together. The two of them stayed in the same position for minutes. Realizing that time was still going on and they couldn't stay this way forever, Keira sat up.
They both got off the bed. "I feel so much better know. Thank you." Keira said as they walked toward the exit.
"Well, I guess I'll see you tomorrow." he told her as he began shutting the door.
"Ya .... wait! Keira said, stopping the door. "Orlando.." she paused. It was now or never and this could be her only chance off camera. She grabbed his face and kissed him.
After realizing what was going on, Orlando's hand left the door handle and placed itself around her flat stomach. One of Keira's hands slid down his cheek and neck and rested on his shoulder. She took a few steps forward as he took a few back so they wouldn't be standing in the doorway. Orlando pulled her closer, attempting to make their kiss even more intimate. The stayed in the same position that they were only supposed to be in when the cameras were rolling a few more moments before Orlando pulled away and looked down at Keira. Her mood had changed completely. She was no longer mad or upset, Keira was full of happiness.
"So.."he said as a smile formed across his face. "Hell must have gotton pretty cold?"
A weak "uh-huh" was all Keira could manage to get out before going into another round of sweet kisses. They stopped and Keira looked up. Her hand was still on his shoulder and the other one was messing with his shirt collar.
"Sorry. I-I've wanted to do that for the ... longest time" Keira said as she let out a breath she had been holding in.
"D-Don't be sorry" Orlando replied, still in a bit of shock.
A weak smile formed on Keira's face. " 'Night" she said turning to leave the room. But just before she shut the door, she took one last glance at the new man she was falling for.
"Ya..." Orlando whispered as Keira closed the door, leaving him alone in his hotel room.
The next day ...
They would be shooting on one of the boats again today. Orlando hadn't seen Keira since last night but the person he really wanted to talk to was Johnny. Orlando was quietly sitting on a stair when Johnny climbed aboard the boat.
"Johnny!" Orlando called out a few second after he got on.
"What?" he cautiously shouted back, not knowing who needed him. He was also a bit surprised that he was wanted so urgently.
"Ok ... I need to know ... if you ... invited Keira!" he was out of breath after running down the boat and dodging around 75 crew members with really big machines.
"For the 6th time, YES!" Johnny replied, annoyed. "Honestly, do you not know what i mean when i said thenwhole cast? Your girlfriend will be there, don't worry."
"Girlfriend?" Orlando was in utter confusion. Why did Johnny invite Kate?
"Ya! She's part of the cast, so why wouldn't she come?" Johnny walked over to a long, wooden bench.
Ok, now he's loosing it Orlando thought. "Kate's not part of the cast."
"I wasn't talking about Kate. I meant Keira!" he said, turning around to face him.
"Keira?"
"Ya! I thought you would have gotton together by now. I didn't know you and whats-her-face were still together."
"Um, well, we are." Orlando's voice may have sounded happy, but it was fake. Disappointment was written all over him.
"Orlando, do you even want to be with Kate?"
"I-" Orlando hesitated. Did he even want to be with Kate anymore? A lot had happened over the two months they had been shooting. "I don't know"
"Hey you!" Keira had just appeared behind Orlando and then sat down next to him. She totally unaware that Johnny was standing right next to her. He managed to slip away unnoticed. When his back was to the two of them, a small, little smile started to form. Orlando may not know the answer to his question, but Johnny certainly did.
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Post by Lola on Aug 27, 2006 21:09:40 GMT -5
they kissed!!!
Wonderfull!!! ;D
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Post by venus567 on Aug 27, 2006 21:59:41 GMT -5
awesome update! ;D
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Post by pottypirate on Aug 28, 2006 5:21:33 GMT -5
I love it He Has to get rid of kate and be with keira
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Post by missendicott on Aug 28, 2006 15:12:53 GMT -5
Johnny is awesome! Keira and Orlando all the way!
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Sept 2, 2006 12:18:22 GMT -5
Hey guys! Thanks for all you comments, i love them. I've written three chapters this week, so you'll get one today, tomorrow, and monday! The end of this chapter should make you all happy.
Chapter 11 "Johnny, are you sure Keira is gonna be here?" Orlando asked, tucking a piece of hair behind his ear.
"Yes! She's coming. My lord, chill out!" Johnny half-shouted. He was so overly-annoyed at Orlando.
"Seriously, calm down." Mackenzie added.
"Hey Orlando" Jack asked casually.
"Ya?" Orlando sat down next to Lee, who was going to be sitting next to Johnny.
"Are you and Keira dating or something becau-"
"Jack don't go there!" Naomi warned. But he ignored her and continued.
"Because every time the two of you are together you're always so close and talking and laughing. Plus, we've all noticed that when your near her, you literally won't stop smiling."
Orlando's face turned bright red. "Keira and I are not dating, ok! And anyway, who's we?" he added quickly, trying to change the subject.
"Oh, you know, me, Johnny, Naomi, Mackenzie, Lee, Gore, Jerry. Heck, even a few extras asked if you were a couple!" Jacked laughed.
"It's true! I was there!" Lee added.
There was a gentle knock on the door. Orlando's head shot up. He jumped off the bed but then slowed his pace down so the others wouldn't think he was too excited to see Keira. Orlando opened the door and found her on the other side. He was so tempted to just kiss he senseless like they had last night, but thankfully remembered that a) he would have an audience and b) the argument he was having with Jack wouldn't work to his defense. Instead, he simply said:
"Hey Keir" and turned around, walking back to his seat.
"Hi guys!" Keira said, following Orlando.
"And anyway Jack, how could we be dating?" Orlando continued their conversation as he sat down. "I'm still with whats-her-face." he said, using Johnny's phrase. "I mean Kate!"
"You just keep telling yourself that, ok Or?"
Orlando rolled his eyes. Jack could be a real pain.
"Wait! Your still with Kate?" Keira asked as she leaned against a table.
"Ya. Why wouldn't I be?" Orlando said, annoyed that everyone was so concerned with his relationship status.
"Oh, sorry" she quietly said, looking down. "I just thought you wouldn't be because of last -" Keira stopped just before finishing her sentence. She really didn't need everyone to know about their little kiss from the night before. "Oh, um .. nevermind!"
"No last, last what?" Mackenzie questioned curiously.
"NOTHING!" Keira and Orlando shouted in unison while glancing at each other. A pinch of red was appearing on both of their faces as they looked away.
Mackenzie and Lee sighed angrily while Jacked rolled his eyes and Johnny smiled one of his I-love-knowing-everything-about-these-two smile. They were all thinking the same thing: They want each other so badly Naomi was nicely sitting in front of the T.V., scrolling through a list of movies. She honestly didn't care what was going on between her two cast mates.
"Is this what you wanted Johnny?" she asked, highlighting a movie on the screen.
"Uh, ya!" Johnny replied, squinting at the the title to get a better look. "Ok, has anyone seen this before? I love it, and thought it would be fun to watch"
"Well why don't you tell us the title first, smart one!" Jack said sarcastically. "It's Flight Plan"
"Oo, I've never seen it before. Is it any good?" Keira wondered.
"I liked it" Mackenzie answered.
"Me to" Lee said.
"Ok then, I guess we'll watch it." Johnny concluded.
"Well I hate it!" Jack said rudely, right before Johnny hit the "buy" button.
"Of course you do" Naomi muttered under he breath.
"Jack, it you shut-up and let us watch it, i promise to tell you all about the "last" thing!" Keira said, hoping it would work.
"Really?" Jack said, eying her suspiciously.
"Oh definitely!" Keira held up he pinkie, while secretly crossing her other fingers behind he back.
"Fine!" Jacked sighed. "But you better tell me!"
"Don't worry, i will" Keira said, smiling.
Johnny hit the "buy" button and started the movie. They all sat back in their seats, waiting to be entertained...
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They had been sitting for about an hour and a half, watching the suspenseful story progress. Everyone was either on the edge of their seats, or sitting up completely straight, wondering what was going to happen. Keira was squeezing Orlando's hand. Since she had never seen the movie before, she was anxious to find out what was going to happen to the kidnapped girl.
"Uh, Keira?" Orlando whispered, looking down at their hands.
Keira looked up at him, and then down to where his face was directed. "Oh, sorry" she said, loosening her grip, but not letting go.
"Oh good" Keira shouted, interrupting the silence. The mother had just walked off the plane, carrying the little girl in her arms. "I knew she would find her!" she said as the credits rolled.
"Finally it's over!" Jack got out of his chair and stretched his arms. "So Keira, about our promise?"
"Right" she replied slowly. "Wait! Oh my gosh, Johnny what time is it?"
"Like 1:30. Why?"
"I've got an interview tomorrow at like 7:00am with Orlando. I've got to get some sleep! 'Night!" Keira rushed out the door and hurried down the hall before Jack forced her to tell her about last night.
"Ya and i need to go call Kate" Orlando said, getting up to leave. "Bye!"
The door clicked shut. "There is definitely something going on between them" Lee blurted out.
"Thank-you captain obvious" Jack stated. "Now, who's gonna find out what it is?"
"Well that's my cue to leave" Naomi said, getting up. "Have fun guys!"
Mackenzie, Lee, and Jack all looked at Johnny. "Fine" she sighed. "But it might take a while.."
Down in Orlando's room he had just dialed Kate's cell. Please pick up, please pick up
"Hello?" a voice answered.
"Kate! Hi!" Orlando greeted.
"Orlando! Oh, I've missed you so much Or!"
"Right, ok look." he sighed. "I don't know how to say this, but i'm gonna do it anyway."
"Uh-huh" she responded nervously.
Orlando took a long, deep breath before continuing. "It's over. I'm breaking up with you."
"Excuse me?"
"You heard what i said. We're done, and this time, we won't be getting back together."
"But-"
"So have a nice life .... without me, and i won't see you soon!" Orlando said, cutting her off. He quickly hung up the phone and climbed into his bed, awaiting a peaceful, dreamless slumber.
But before he closed his eyes, Orlando made a list inside his head.
1. Break-up with Kat, I mean Kate: done 2. Get with Keira: half-way there.
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Post by Lola on Sept 2, 2006 12:31:01 GMT -5
I´m glad they broke up!! ;D
Can´t wait for the next updates!!!!
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Post by pottypirate on Sept 2, 2006 14:25:18 GMT -5
YES!!!! kates gone!!!!! Brilliant Can't wait for next update.
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Post by venus567 on Sept 2, 2006 18:32:05 GMT -5
yes I liked that ending! ;D
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Post by xstepheezy on Sept 3, 2006 14:04:29 GMT -5
yay cant wait for an update
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Post by thankful24 on Sept 3, 2006 20:58:45 GMT -5
amazing. can't wait for the update!
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Sept 10, 2006 17:06:51 GMT -5
Chapter 12
"Uhgg! Shut-up!" Keira said, yelling at her alarm clock. She hit the off button and dragged her tired self out of bed and threw on some faded jeans and a tank top. Keira grabbed her phone and went downstairs to meet Orlando for their Teen Vouge interveiw.
The elevator had just reached the ground floor Keira spotted Orlando sitting curled up on a couch, looking extremley tired.
"Hey Orli!" Keira yawned as she sat down in the chair across from Orlando, assuming his same postition.
"Hey" he said sleepily.
"What's wrong? You don'w seem yourself."
"Oh, it's nothing. I'm just tired, that's all."
"Ok..." she responded, not totally believing him.
"But i did break-up with Kate last night" Orlando told Keira.
"You did?!" Keira said in awe.
"Mmhmm"
"Aww, i'm sorry" she said sympathetically.
"No big deal. I've been over her for like a month anyways."
"Ya, the same thing happened to me with Rupert." Keira told him. "We just kind of drifted apart. Plus, I started to like someone else." she looked directly at Orlando, hoping he would ge the hint. But he didn't.
"Ya..." he agreed.
"So," Keira smiled. "Are you going to come knocking on my door late one night, crying? And then have this big conversation on how Kate wasn't the one and then have you kiss me and never want to stop?"
"Why?" Orlando raised an eebrow at her. "Would you want me to?"
"Maybe just the second part" Keira said, her smile getting bigger.
"Well then," he said, perking up. "I might just have to stop by sometime."
"That definintely wouldn't be a problem." Keira told him, trying to hold backa few small laughs. However, their conversation was cut off as Lauren Waterman, a Teen Vouge reporter, came bustling threw the door, closing her basic, black umbrella.
"Hey you to!" she called out happily greeting Keira and Orlando.
"Hi!" Keira greeted back in her best, fake, cheery voice. "I really don't want to do this" she whispered to Orlando as Lauren walked over.
"Neither do I"
"So" Lauren said as she sat down on a differnt couch across from the two stars. "Are you ready?"
"Yup!" they responded together, continuing with the fakeness.
"Ok then, first question." Lauren started up the interveiw. "What is it like having the whole cast back together to film the third instalment of Pirates?"
"It's great. Really wonderful!" Orlando answered.
"Ya, it's nice" Keira added. "These people are some of my best friends, so getting to spend time with them 24/7 is great."
"Now do you guys hang out together off-set?"
"Not as much as we should” Orlando said, looking at Keira. “But maybe that will change when we finish filming, who knows."
"Oh, and by the way Orlando, how's Kate? I haven't seen her in awhile." Lauren asked, changing the subject.
"Funny story, actually. I broke up with her last night."
"I'm sorry" Lauren said sympathetically.
"It's ok, im over her." Orlando replied.
"Is there any chance of Katelando getting back together again?"
"Definently not!" Orlando exclaimed. "Im over her. Besides, I've got my eye on someone else."
"WHO?" the tow girls shouted together.
"Not telling" Orlando said, sneaking a glance at Keira.
"Fine!" Lauren angrily sighed. "Now Keira, I heard that you and Rupert recently split, has Ms. Knightley found a new love interest?"
"Yes she has" Keira smiled. "But this to, is a secret."
The interview continued for another hour or so, asking the two stars about everything going on in their lives. It would be appering in the November issue of Teen Vouge, along with Orlando and Keira on the cover.
Later that day...
Jerry and Gore had decided to start the day's shooting at 3:30, but with the dark, gloomy rainclouds forming overhead, it might have to be put off.
"Gore can we please just have the rest of the day off?" Johnny pleaded, looking up at the sky as the walked toward the set.
"No"
"But-"
"No!"
"Plea-"
"NO!"Gore yelled.
"I used to think you were nice" Johnny joked, laughing as they arrived at their shooting location.
Everything had been set up the dat before so they wouldn't loose any time. The end of October was approaching fast, and they couldn't waste anymore time. The scence that was to be shot was a continuation from the day with Johnny, Orlando, and Keira.
"Keira! Orlando! Hurry it up!" Gore shouted at the two laggards. "We don't have all day and if it starts to rain before we finsih, i will not be a happy director!"
They quickened their pace and caught up. The three actors started to look over their lines and the camera man was refilling the camera when Jerry came running up the hill, trying to get their attention.
"Gore, come here!" Jerry yelled out. He went over and the two looked as if they were talking about something very serious.
"I wonder what's going on" Johnny commented to no one in particular.
"Ya.."Keirs said as Johnny and Gore walked back over to everyone else, who was wonder what the heck was going on.
"Guys, I have a very imporatant and urgent announcement to make to the whole cast and crew, so we need you to head back to the hotel." Jerry told everyone. "See you soon!" He started making his way back down the hill to find the rest of everyone.
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"I just can't believe this it" Keira whispered after Jerry made his announcement.
"I know, it's scary and totally unreal" Orlando said, thinking about what was going on. "But hey, at least we're together and that's a positive, right?" he added, hoping it would cheer her up.
"I guess" Keira said quietly. "But im still worried."
"I know. So am I" he told her.
"But let's not think about the future right now. Let's think about the present, and live in it's moment, ok?"
"Ya...ok. Look, im gonna go upstairs and get my mind off of it." she said, getting up and heading for the elevator.
Orlando stayed in the lobby. When Keira left, his thougths returned to what he had been thinking about moments before. Even he ignored his own advice. A million thoughts rushed through his head. Are we safe? What's going to happen? Will filming be put off? He, like everyone else was worried, even scared. But wouln't you be to if a hurricane could come crashing down at any moment? _____
hope you guys like it, it's a bit long. Im not totally sure about the ending. But anyway, you knwo what's weird. Ok, this was written before the break-up, and i made Kate and Orli split, and then i say that he has his eye on someone else, and he actually does in real life!
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Post by xstepheezy on Sept 10, 2006 18:18:07 GMT -5
another great chapter (=
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Post by Lola on Sept 10, 2006 20:27:58 GMT -5
;Dgreat chpater!! Im intrigued...
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Post by missendicott on Sept 10, 2006 20:55:34 GMT -5
Lovely! I wonder who that someone else is?! *cough* Keira *cough*
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