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Post by *Syd* on Aug 13, 2006 14:12:09 GMT -5
i hope she forgives him, then they can go fall in love.......................... can't wait til the next bit xx
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Post by Lola on Aug 13, 2006 16:17:55 GMT -5
I love this! ;D--- They should make up and be together
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Post by thankful24 on Aug 13, 2006 16:29:32 GMT -5
next chapter, please!!! lovin it. you rock my socks. -Carrie*
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Aug 14, 2006 16:10:53 GMT -5
Here's the next part. It's really really short so 7 is coming right after it! No time has passed between 5&6. Enjoy
Chapter six He had finally arrived in front of room 318, Keira's suite. Before opening the door, Orlando took a deep breath. He wasn't totally ready to say what he wanted to say. Pushing his thoughts aside, he gently knocked on the door.
"Who is it?" came a voice from inside.
Orlando opened his mouth to reply, but before he had the chance, the door opened. On the other side was a rather upset looking Keira.
Orlando completely forgot what he was going to say. Instead, he just looked at her. Keira's eyes and cheeks were red from crying and her hair was an absolute mess.
"Well, what do you want?" she asked bitterly, breaking the silence. "Have you come to tell me that you don't want to be stuck on the same island as me? Because if thats the case, you can leave!" she sniffed, trying her hardest to hold back the tears.
Orlando took a small step back. He was shocked that Keira had said that. Orlando now realized this was going to be harder than he thought.
"Keira?! No, why would i say that?" His voice was filled with concern. Actually, I came to apolo-
"Don't you dare say the word apologize!" she commanded. Her eyes weren't filled with sadness anymore. Instead, they had been taken over with anger. "Because it will be a cold day in Hell when i forgive you!"
With that being said, Keira spun around and slammed the door in his face, all as one smooth motion. Se couldn't take it anymore. Keira slid down to the ground and curled up in a ball.
She completely broke down. _______
Hey guys! Thanks for the comments I <3 them. Anyway, sorry if Keira seems a little bit too mad at Orlando. I liked the line she said and, i made her say it. But they won't be like this much longer. Things are going to get a lot more drama-free! Sorry this was so short.
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Aug 14, 2006 16:46:25 GMT -5
Chapter Seven Keira looked up. They had been rehersing for three and a half hours. It had been the only good part of her day. She looked around the room and her smile biggened. MAckenzie and Lee were practicing one of their hilarious pirate scenes, Penny, the costume director was messing with Jack's costume, and Orlando and Johnny were reading over some lines together. Keira on the other hand wasn't doing anything. But when she laid eyes on Orlando, her smile faded. She couldn't believe they were fighting.
Keria sighed. Why couldn't she just forgive him and move on?
At least the movie will keep me busy. And that's a positive! Right? She thought. But befroe she could continue her train of thoughts any longer, an obnoxious ring filled her ear. It was her cell phone.
"Hullo?" she answered.
"Hi sweetie!" It was her mom. "How are you? Has filming started yet?"
"Oh, hi mum." Keira responded. "I'm fine, but tired. And no, we haven't started shooting, just rehearsing.
Keira looked up. Someone was shouting her name and waving their arms to get her attention.
"Whoops, sorry mum i gotta go!" she apologized.
"Ok, but call if you need anything! Love you!"
"Ya, ok. Love you too. Bye!" Keira snapped the phone shut. She gently set it down and walked over to see what Gore wanted.
Later that night...
"Ok! Is everyone here?" Gore's voice called out. "Wait! Where's Keira? Does she know we're leaving?
Everyone looked around, but it was Orlando who surprising spoke up.
"Actually, I don't think she does. Do you want me to go get here?" he said.
"Would you?"
"Ya, sure." Orlando agreeed with a small smile. He was going to attempt round two: apologize to Keira. Hopefully this time, it would work.
The elevator "dinged" as it arrived at floor number five. He nervously walked down the hall to room 318. WHen he got there, he lightley knocked on the door and took a step back. He wanted to be able to run if she exploded again.
A few momnets later, the door opened. She didn't say anything. All she did was stare at him.
"Look" Olrando said to her. "I know you probably don't want me here, but i just came to remined you about the cast and crew dinner tonight."
"Oh my gosh!" she shouted. "I completley forgot! Ok, you wait here, i'll be right out!" Keira ran to her closet and grabbed some clother. She then headed for the bathroom. Orlando walked over to the bed and sat down. He didn't want to make her madder than she already was.
Well, this is better than having her scream at me, right? he thought to himself.
Moments passed and the bathroom door finally opnened. Keria stepped out. Orlando was speechless. She was beautiful.
"Orlando, are you ok?" Keira asked. She had noticed him staring at her.
"What? Oh ya. I'm fine." he answered, blushing.
"Ok..."she said suspicousley.
They left the room together and made their way to the elevator. It had just arrived and the two of them stepped in. As Keira pressed the button to the ground floor, Orlando spoke up.
"You look terrific Keira" he compilmented. She was in a lavender, knee-length chiffon halfter dress. Her seliver wedged mathced a silver, studded bangle and her hair was pulled into a half-up do.
"Oh, this? Thanks." she replied, making it seem like the outift was effortless.
"Look Orlando. Im sorry we've been fighting." she said quickley. "It's been a really tough week and i didn't mean to take it out on you. I shouldn't have said that stuff to you."
"Keira, It's fine."
"No! It's not ok! I don't want us to be mad at each other." Keira said in a rush. "So, can we just start over?"
"Ya, that would be great!" Orlando said as they linked arms. The elevator door opneded and they stepped out together, making their way over to the crowd of people waiting for them. Things were finally going his way, and Orlando was over-joyed.
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Post by venus567 on Aug 14, 2006 17:15:26 GMT -5
;Dgreat update!
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Post by Lola on Aug 14, 2006 17:44:05 GMT -5
yay!!!, they´ve made up!!! ;D
keep it coming!
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Post by missendicott on Aug 14, 2006 22:16:22 GMT -5
Things are going Orlando's way now!*claps hands over excitedly*
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Aug 16, 2006 14:59:11 GMT -5
Chapter eight The cast and crew had already been seated in a private room that was reserved for them. Two waiters were passing out menus. Gore and Jerry were at either end of the table. Naomi was next to Gore followed by Jack, Johnny, Mackenzie, Lee, Jerry, Ted, Terry, Keira and Orlando.
"Attention everyone!" Jerry half-yelled while raising his glass and tapping it with a knife. Many people stopped talking and looked up, while to others continued their conversations.
"Keira! Orlando! Earth to Bloom & Knightley! Hello!" Mackenzie called out their names. They looked up and a pink glow appeared on their faces. Mackenzie pointed to Jerry and they turned their attention to him.
"Ya, so anyway," Jerry continued with a slight annoyance in his voice. He was eying Keira and Orlando to make sure they wouldn't start talking again. "I just want to congratulate everyone on and excellent week of rehearsals. I hope that you do as well -or even better- next week when were start shooting." He stopped and smiled, looking at all the cheery faces before him before he went on. "I will be leaving Sunday afternoon and won't be back until September 15. So best of luck to you all and have a great time!"
A little later that night...
The dinner had ended on a great note. Everybody was in a good, happy mood. Orlando and Keira were stuck together like glue. Everyone had noticed, but it was Johnny who was the first to say something.
"Well, I'm glad everything has worked out between you two" Johnny told them, looking at Orlando's arm which had been wrapped around Keira's waist.
"Ya" Keira said, then looked up at Orlando. "Me too"
They arrived back at the hotel, and everyone piled into the two elevators. Orlando and Keira were (of course) in the same one and when it stopped on floor number five, they both stepped out. Orlando walked with Keira to her suite.
"I really had alot of fun with you tonight," Orlando said as they stopped in front of the door. "I'm so happy we're not fighting anymore. I'm glad we're still friends."
All of the sudden, Keira felt a nervous jolt in her stomach. "Me too" she replied. It was the only thing she could think of.
"Goodnight Keira." Orlando said with a smile. He then placed a sweet kiss on her cheek.
"Night Or" she responded. Keira then turned around and opened the door. After she walked inside and shut it, Kiera leaned back.
"Friends..."she softly whispered, repeating what Orlando had just said to please herself.
But her heart wanted more.
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Post by venus567 on Aug 16, 2006 16:56:55 GMT -5
beautiful! ;D
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Post by missendicott on Aug 16, 2006 19:25:00 GMT -5
If her heart wants more, her heart shall get more! .. hopefully! Great chapter.
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Post by Lola on Aug 16, 2006 20:40:52 GMT -5
This is getting really really interesting ;D
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Post by *Syd* on Aug 17, 2006 13:01:42 GMT -5
i love this sooooooooo much
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Post by pottypirate on Aug 18, 2006 15:42:42 GMT -5
Amazing, update soon please
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Aug 18, 2006 16:23:02 GMT -5
hey guys! So i finally got hold of the computer (my brothers have been on it non-stop today). Anyway, I just dropped by to say that one, chapter nine (which you will all lovee!! It has the best ending. Sorry, im not trying to brag, i just get wayyy to excited about it when i go over it!) is coming tomorrow! and that my school starts on monday so i won't be able to update as much. Im not allowed to get on during the week. i'll try to finish 10 and post it sunday. So, the point is, that im not stopping the story, i just can't update for like 6 days at a time. sorry. keep the comments coming tho, it's what keeps me writing! ;D
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Post by venus567 on Aug 18, 2006 17:09:24 GMT -5
no problem, college is starting up for me in about ten days, so I totally understand. ;D
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Post by missendicott on Aug 18, 2006 22:00:39 GMT -5
Agreed! I think everyone's getting ready for school or is already in school. Can't wait for chapter 9! Tee Hee!
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Post by designerdenimx3 on Aug 19, 2006 19:37:28 GMT -5
YOOO! Venus567 love the banner! It's really good. Soo chapter nine is finally here!! I'm, so excited because in my opinion it the best & my favorite chapter (it's also the longest lol)! I would have posted it sooner but i've been gone alllll day shopping and movie w/ friends. So if i seem pretty random and hyper it's because im loaded with caffeine and bouncing off the walls over here. (mountain dew+2 Carmel farppachinos+me=crazzy) Anyway, here it is. You'll love the ending, i swear (i've read it like 10 times and still get all happy and excited)!
Chapter nine Filming had been going on for about two weeks and every thing was going great. There had been a few technical difficulties, but that happens with every movie, right? Today they would be filming on one of the boats. Orlando was so excited when he heard what one of his scenes would be. It was his first with Keira. That meant that she had to spend most of her day with him, and she couldn't say no. Orlando climbed aboard the ship and spotted Keira. He called her name and waved his hands. She looked up and ran over.
"Orlando! Hi!" Keira said. She was out of breath because she had just ran all the way from the end of the ship to the front.
"Hey! So, are you excited about filming today?" he questioned.
"Ya! Most definitely!" Keira responded. "Anyway, guess what!"
"What?" Orlando asked with a quizzical look on his face.
"Rupert's here!" Keira was trying to hold back her excitement, but it wasn't working. "Isn't that great?"
"Huh? Oh ya, it's great. Wonderful." Orlando tried his best to sound convincing, but he wasn't doing the best job. Luckily, Keira was oblivious to it all.
Rupert had just walked over and grabbed Keira's hand. She then continued with her story. "He got here last night around 12:30 and said that he "missed me like crazy"! Isn't that sweet?"
"The sweetest. Look i gotta do something .. else" He pointed to something behind Keira making it look like he actually did. But honestly, Orlando wasn't totally fond of talking to Keira and being a third wheel.
Keira shrugged and pulled Rupert over to a small case of stairs. Orlando had gone over to the area where Johnny, Lee, and Jack were. He sat down and rested his head in his hands. Orlando was staring at Keira ad Rupert. Actually, he was looking at Keira and Rupert just happened to be in sight.
He sighed. Whats wrong with you? he thought to himself. If Kate were here you would be doing the same thing ... probably Orlando looked up. He saw that Rupert had wrapped his arms around her and Keira was whispering something in his ear. All of the sudden Orlando felt a surge of jealousy. Stop it Orlando! You two are just "Friends!"
Jack, Johnny, and Lee looked up. The word "friends" had accidentally come out of his mouth. And it was loud enough to be heard.
"Orlando..are you ok?" Le asked him slowly.
"What? Oh yes! I-I-I'm fine!" he stuttered quickly. "Wh-Why do you ask?"
"Well because *usually* people don't stare at someone else for 10 minutes and then randomly shout our words. " Johnny said, responding to Orlando's question. "Whats wrong now?"
"Nothing! I'm completely ok!" Orlando was now getting angry.
"No, something's bothering you" Jack said curiously.
"Come on Or! Tell us." Lee urged.
Orlando paused and looked up. They were the oddest bunch of people he had ever met. Lee was dressed in his normal pirate gear, Jack in his commodore outfit, and Johnny was dressed in an Asian themed jacket and hat.
"Na, i'd rather not be laughed at today." he responded casually.
"Suit yourself mate." Johnny said, a little bit disappointedly. "But if you ever need someone to talk to, you know where to find me."
"Thanks Johnny" Orlando then got up and went to go find a script.
A few hours later ...
"Keira! Hurry up! We don't have all day!" shouted Gore. She quickened her pace. When she got closer, Keira noticed that Orlando was with him. That made her go even faster.
"Yes?" Keira asked when she finally arrived.
"Ok, we're going to do the scene where Will has just gotten aboard the ship" Gore told the two of them. "Elizabeth sees you, runs down the stairs. You give each other a hug and are just about to kiss, when somebody says something and you turn your attention to them. Sound good?"
"Ya! Sounds great!" Orlando smiled and turned to look at Keira, but she was already up the stairs in preparation for the scene.
"Quiet on set!" Gore yelled into his white and blue mega phone. "And, action!" The camera focused in on Keira who had just seen Will (Orlando) climb onto the boat.
"Oh! Wi-Will!" she whispered breathlessly. Keira ran over to the staircase and grabbed the railing. But she was going a bit to fast and when she reached the second to last step, she tripped and fell.
"I'm fine! I'm fine!" Keira told everyone as she waved a hand in the air to let everyone know she was still alive.
"Cut! Cut, cut!" Gore shouted into the megaphone. Orlando, Rupert and most of the crew rushed over to she if she was alright. Luckily for Orlando, he got there first.
When he got to her, he grabbed her hand and pulled her up.
"You know Keira," he started. Orlando couldn't resist, he had to say it. "When they say "break a leg" they don't mean it literally" He teased with a smile.
"Oh, shut up!" Keira said, giving him a friendly, flirty, push. "Your just jealous because i look better dressed as a boy than you!"
"Oh please"
Keira stuck her tongue out at Orlando. A few feet away, Rupert had his arms crossed and was rolling his eyes at the two of them. He hated when his girlfriend flirted with other guys in front of him. Keira noticed and her mood changed completely.
"Sorry 'bout that Gore, I'll go slower next time" She said in a serious tone.
"No worries love, Let's try that again."
Keira went back up and started the scene over again. When she was hugging Orlando though, she almost forgot to let go. Luckily, or unluckily, whichever way you look at it, she did remember. Both of them had thought they did a pretty convincing job, but Gore didn't. They did it about six more times before calling it a night.
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On the boat ride to shore, Rupert started questioning Keira.
"So, did you have a fun time shooting today?" he wondered aloud, putting an arm around her waist.
"Ya, tons!" Keira yawned, resting her head on his shoulder.
"Can i ask you another question?"
"Mmhmm" she responded sleepily.
"Did you have fun shooting, or did you just have fun hanging onto Orlando Bloom for an hour and a half?
Keira was wide awake now. She knew this was coming. It always happened even when she looked at another guy.
"Excuse me, Rupert! It's my job." she exclaimed, annoyed. "I mean, we're engaged! It needs to look convincing!"
"Ya, but you don't need to make it that convincing!"
"Why do you always do this?" she sighed.
"I'm not doing anything!" he responded defensively. A few moments passed and they were in complete silence. Suddenly, Rupert spoke up.
"I love you..." he said, leaning in to kiss her. But she backed away. "Keir.."she said softly, attempting again. But she wouldn't let him. The boat had just reached shore. Keira got off quickly.
"Keira!" he shouted, getting off to. "What the heck is wrong with you? It's like you don't even want me here!"
'You know what Rupert!" she yelled back as she dramatically spun around to face him. "Maybe i don't want you here!" Keira looked up at his eyes, they had biggened with shock.
"And maybe," Keira said. She took a deep breath before continuing. She couldn't believe that she was going to say what she was about to say. But she had to. It was the truth
"Maybe I don't love you."
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Post by venus567 on Aug 19, 2006 21:42:46 GMT -5
Hey that was a great update! The siggie was made by Catie from Addicted to Love. Glad you like it!
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Post by pottypirate on Aug 20, 2006 11:08:26 GMT -5
Great update
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